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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 1:28 pm
I see no problem with it. Mistah might though.
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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 1:48 pm
I agree to everything. Except, to keep it fair, I was thinking that if the gloves got wet, they could not be used on the duration of the battle. Just to be fair, also, I'm tweaking it a bit, since there are jutsu that it would amp up to much. Like ashen lungs, which that would pretty much make it a nuke on a 10 foot area, making everything inside critically hurt or maybe even die.
But yea, I agree, also, I was thinking of adding a + 1 chakra to jutsu when the range is increased, + 1 for the shape and + 2 to the normal rank.
So a Chunnin rank technique that is it added both range and shape, it would be + 4 in total to the jutsu.
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 3:30 pm
Name of weapon: Assassins Tool Who owns the weapon: Kay Aburame Where it was found/Who made it: The weapon was salvaged from Kay's borther caine's dead body. The Range of the weapon: Only about nine inches out from the users wrist Weakness:short distance, lack of use beyond close range attacks. Description: It fits over the wrist like a bracelet, though it is really long and dangerous. It has a series of simple yet effectiv locks and balances inside it of it. On the inside of the weapon is a chakra sensor that will react whenever the user pushes his wrist closer onto it by pulling back his hand. This will cause a nine inch blade tp shoot out of the gauntlets. The blade is made entirley of the same steel as a shuriken. Aside from this is a more deadly ploy. It is easily hidden under a long sleeved jacket, but wearing it out won't change the effect. Also, the gauntlets are strategically placed on the forearm and wrist so that it can blcok attacks as well, being made of gold, but this makes it nearly impossible to attack without the proper skill. IT slides back in just as fast as it whips out. It comes in and out in the blink of an eye. Rp Sample: 'Farewell,' Kay whispered as he fell from the tree in a dive above his opponet, his blade making an unsheathing soud as it shot out. The oppoenet heard this and got out of the way in time to dodge the short range weapon. Kay frowned as the target began to charge at him with his sword. Kay dodged the first attack and then guarded against the second with the left hand guantlet. He made the blade comeout of the other hand and jabbed it in at his enemy, who grabbed it with his free hand. Kay pushed against the scared ninja without a sound, and the edge of the blade pierced his skin. Kay slid back to get some leverage and jumped at his suprised foe, the blades extending and ending his foes life silently.
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:53 pm
Name of weapon: Kichiro Who owns the weapon: Lyethery Where it was found/Who made it: Lyethery grandfather made Kichiro for Kai. He spend two whole years making this weapon for his future granddaughter, but gave it to Kai anyway when he was born. "A disappointment" was what he said when he handed it to Kai on his first birthday. The Range of the weapon: 42 in Weakness: Very fragile like Kai but still strong enough to take several solid blows (Five) before it start breaking apart. Description: KichiroA thin white katana that can easily cut through flesh and pierced armor. Its thin blade can easily go for the opening of a full suit armor or between the ribs, aiming for the heart. The tip of the blade is coated in poison that can paralyze with just a touch. The poison effect will last for 4 or 5 post, depend on the rank of the ninja (Jounin above is 4, below is 5). Also, the tip of the blade have small opening that let the poison out when the handle is twisted. The poison cause excrutionary pain and hallucination. The pain come first and lasted for 2 post, then will faded away. The hallucination came later and also last for 2 post. It will cause the ninja to see multiple enemy. It can also make the ninja see attack that aren't actually happening or not see the attack that are happening, or see the attack but not at the right place or time. The poison are released when the holder twisted the handle, sending the poison out from a small hollow space inside the handle. The end of the handle also contain a poison gas that caused hallucination and a slight effect of body paralyze for a short amount of time. The hallucination are like the poison inside the handle but are not as effective and last half the time. The paralyze also is like from the tip poison but also last half the time and leave a numbing effect on the fingers and maybe even one of the eye. The poison gas is colorless and odorless and take effect right after it got inhale into the body. Rp Sample: (((I'll finish the rp part later.)))
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 4:55 pm
http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs27/f/2008/138/9/2/Uchiha_Madara_CG_version_by_Tionniel.jpg
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Name of weapon: Uchiha War Fan/Kama Who owns the weapon: My RPC Where it was found/Who made it: Stolen by Sasuke Uchiha, given to owner. The Range of the weapon: Long Range Weakness: Very difficult to hide, meaning people usually see it. Since attached to Kama, users must need skill in dexterity and agility to wield it. Without contact with an Uchiha, it is useless.
Description: The famous Madara Uchiha has been seen wielding a large gunbai, about 3/4 of his height and about his width, with the pole being twice that length. It has a chain attached to the handle that appears to have been connected to a kama. Sasuke Uchiha has stolen the fan and given it to the current owner, who wields it proficiently. Using the uchiha symbols on the fan, the owner could store minor weapons (katanas, kunai, shuriken) into the fan, allowing up to 6 weapons being stored for each tomoe.
The owner could also use this to slightly enhance the strength of fuuton and katon attacks. Since it is a fan, it allows for more range for wind and fire release jutsus. User can input some chakra to add flames to teh fan, teh damage depending on the amount of chakra put into it. A side of the fan heats up and, after getting struck by the fan, the opponent gets struck with the same damage points of the rank of the jutsu stored in the fan. Lasts for 5 posts before needing another flame.
Rp Sample:Sasuke was getting tired of this. Apparently, another ninja was out for his head, attempting to steal his amazing, superb sharingan. This time, in a sake bar. It was quite annoying, all of these ninja, but Sasuke knew he couldn't help it. Still, it would be nice to on one day without an assasination attempt put on your head. As the ninja stared down his opponent, a lowly chuunin, Sasuke began thinking. He had just received a special "gift", and now would be a great time to try it out. Pulling something out of his back, Sasuke continued to watch his opponent, alert for any sudden movements. In his hands were two items, items that were connected with a metal chain. In one hand, a regular steel Kama was present, having no significance of it. However, the weapon it the other hand was more important.
In his right hand, Sasuke began to run his fingers down the markings of the War Fan, outlining the design of the 6 tomoe located on either side of the fan's center. It had fascinated him for a while, for this fan had belonged to none other than the famous Uchiha Madara. Taking one last breath, Sasuke got ready. He had read a little about the weapon but still wasn't sure about all aspects of it. No better time to try it out than this. With a sudden burst of chakra, Sasuke lad two fingers on one of the tomoe, expecting something to happen. He was slightly surprised to see a set of shuriken appear, the tomoe now a little faded than before. Now taking the time to dwell on what just happened, Sasuke threw the shuriken at his opponent. The ninja, shocked at what just happened, snapped back into reality quick enough to jump out of the way, but wasn't able to dodge the upcoming set of kunai. It seemed that this fan had a special ability: storing weapons. The battle continued this way for a few minutes, Sasuke unleashing a continual assault, using only small weapons stored inside the fan. His opponent had taken quite a few to hsi body, blood exuding out of numerous wounds.
As Sasuke prepared to pull out another weapon, nothing happened. "What the....?" He tried again, inserting chakra into the tips of his fingers and pressing on the tomoe. Still, nothing happened. His eyes grew wide and his expression darkened. Uh oh. Did the weapons run out? Sasuek didn't have enough time to answer his question for, as he looked up, a kcik was directed at his face. The fan fell out of his hand, and he was sent flying, crashing into a couple of chairs in the back. The ninja howled in laughter before picking up the fan. "This here fan of yours can cost a pretty penny. Better yet, i can use it to become hokage of the leaf. Now, how'd you activate that thingy you just did earlier?" The ninja imitated Sasuke's movements, pressing the tip of two fingers towards a tomoe. With his sharingan, Sasuke could even see the chakra running through his hands, entering the fan, but, somehow, not being able to get through. It was blocking the chakra, not wanting to accept it. "Perhaps....."
Sasuke jumped up and grabbed the fan. The ninja, startled by the sudden movement, was caught off guard. Gaining possession of the fan once more proved to be an easy task, for the element of surprise was on Sasuke's side. As he was about to strike the ninja with the Kama part of it, something told Sasuke to release chakra. Letting the fan absorb it, Sasuke could feel the temperature rising, and it was only after taking a look at his fan that he saw what was going on. His fan, now raised up in the air, was on fire! It didn't appear to be burning, but rather "harnessing" the flame, increasing the deadlines of the fan. With a smirk, Sasuke muttered the words "goodbye" before ending the life of a once proud ninja.
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:49 pm
@Kay - Spelling Errors :withers away:... its hard enough to read through spelling errors... try Firefox, or Google Chrome built-in spell checkers. Anyways Accepted! (I gotta thank my friend who actually has a spelling error problem but I can always read what he says.)
@Tiny - As of right now I really like it but the RP sample needs done.
@Nerd - Guess so, its not really a custom but since we don't have just a regular weapons area, what I'm saying is its accepted.
@Shay - It's a bit big don't you think? I mean 7ft 8in, that's bigger than I am where would you carry it. I will have to think about... if you make it smaller I'll accept it but for now Declined.
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 7:09 pm
tsubaka inoue @Kay - Spelling Errors :withers away:... its hard enough to read through spelling errors... try Firefox, or Google Chrome built-in spell checkers. Anyways Accepted! (I gotta thank my friend who actually has a spelling error problem but I can always read what he says.) @Tiny - As of right now I really like it but the RP sample needs done. @Nerd - Guess so, its not really a custom but since we don't have just a regular weapons area, what I'm saying is its accepted. @Shay - It's a bit big don't you think? I mean 7ft 8in, that's bigger than I am where would you carry it. I will have to think about... if you make it smaller I'll accept it but for now Declined. That’s the total length of the sword AND the length of her arm (she’s short.) The sword itself is 5 ft 5 inches (65 inches.)
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 7:17 pm
Well, your character has some pretty long arms. I don't even think my arms are that long, and I'm a six foot male. o_o And, from the way you've described it, I would think that she would swing it around like Nightmare from Soul Caliber. I think he attacks the slowest, but deals the most damage, and is the most bad-a**. And another thing, one of the weaknesses of your giant sword would be the circles cut into it. Those areas are more likely to break than the others, so it'd be nice if you noted that. C:
Anyway, I'm totally in charge of this mofo.
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 8:21 pm
Metaphorically Insane Well, your character has some pretty long arms. I don't even think my arms are that long, and I'm a six foot male. o_o And, from the way you've described it, I would think that she would swing it around like Nightmare from Soul Caliber. I think he attacks the slowest, but deals the most damage, and is the most bad-a**. And another thing, one of the weaknesses of your giant sword would be the circles cut into it. Those areas are more likely to break than the others, so it'd be nice if you noted that. C: Anyway, I'm totally in charge of this mofo. Alright, well I’ll just take out that whole part and make it easier. I’ll add that to the weaknesses. *Edited. And I have never played Soul Caliber (I think it’s a video game?) so I have no idea what you’re talking about.
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 7:11 am
It's fine now, I'm gonna' say approved. Just keep into account the fact that it's going to be hard to swing that blade around.  Yeah, Soul Caliber is like Tekken, except I think it's better. :3
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Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 8:02 pm
Name of weapon: Poison Edge Who owns the weapon: Hatsuko Doku Where it was found/Who made it: Hatsuko Doku The Range of the weapon: Melee Weakness: Single cutting edge, not designed for heavy blocking, light weight (Can be turned aside easily). Description: Poison Edge is, at first glance, a basic shamshir design. Curved blade, deep blood groove along the spine, razor sharp edge, and a distinctive buffalo horn handle and pommel. What differentiates the sword from others is the way it handles the poisons used by the Doku clan. The crossbar that makes up the hilt has a hollow area on the right (if holding the sword flat) bar. Inside this hollow a small poison vial can be fitted, any poison of the user's choice. With a bit of the user's chakara (two points worth), the poison will flow out of the vial and down the blood groove that runs along the spine, held in place by the flowing chakara. For three turns the poison will stay on the blade, at which time the chakara dissipates and the poison flows off the blade. However, not all is lost. While the poison is held in the blood groove, to poison the enemy they must be stabbed, and it's quite a distance to the groove. However, once the groove has entered the target's body, the poison will flow along the grove into the wound, directly to the target's bloodstream. Should the user release the chakara, or the three turns elapse, the poison will flow out of the groove along the blade. Most of it will splash to the ground. Some of it will remain on the sword and its edge, giving the user a 40% chance of poisoning the enemy on contact. With no poison used, the Poison Edge is a standard shamshir, and can be used in combat as easily as any blade. Rp Sample: It was an odd design, the blade Hatsuko Doku had designed. Others had made weapons to deliver poison to their target, but most had created simple knives, or throwing knives...nothing useful in combat, all show and no substance, the sole purpose being to poison.
But Hatsuko was a practical man. He knew the value of swords in combat, had seen the devastation a good blade could do first hand. He had researched what he wanted to build, and came to this design: the shamshir. Different from the standard katanas and straight swords, it had a vicious curve designed to make cutting effortless.
And it was time to test it on a few marauding rogues. Three of them, ex-shinobi from his village, stood on the path. They liked to accost and steal from the villagers and anybody else walking along this road, but no more. Hatsuko was going to stop them, this day, this very hour.
They drew weapons. One had a katana, one had a pair of kunai...the other simply got ready, more of a jutsu user than anything else. Hatsuko grinned a little and slid the shamshir from its sheath. The fine, thin blade was focused for offence: he had to finish this quickly. It wasn't going to survive many strikes. The first shinobi, the one with the kunai, came first, the katana user coming in from the side. The jutsu user started to do a few hand seals. Hatsuko went for him first, blowing past the two weapon users before they could even see him. The jutsu shinobi saw him and cancelled his technique to dodge out of the way, just as Hatsuko's shamshir came zipping past.
Hatsuko spun in a tight circle before lashing out again, the curved blade effortlessly cutting a thin line across the man's stomach. The blade was so sharp, it took a few seconds for the man to register he'd been hit, the cut had been so clean. Then it opened, and in a gush of blood, the man dropped. Hatsuko blocked the katana coming at him from the side, deflecting it more than straight up blocking it, and kicked that man in the stomach to knock him back as he sent some chakara flowing into the sword. He put some poison into the blood groove and dodged the kunai user's attack, stabbing him in the stomach quickly, but deep enough to get the poison into his system. Leaving him to die on his own, he turned and focused his attention on the katana user. He used speed more than his sword to avoid taking hits, as his sword wouldn't stand up to the thicker, stouter katana, designed to take as many hits as it could dish out. He had to finish this quickly, because some blows he couldn't dodge and had to block, and it was weakening the thin blade. But, just as he was about to block a strong blow, a bit of luck came his way.
The poisoned shinobi had tossed a kunai at Hatsuko's back, trying to eliminate him while he wasn't looking. By stroke of luck, getting into a position to block the katana had saved him, as the poorly aimed knife passed under his armpit and buried itself into the katana user's chest, staggering him for long enough that Hatsuko could decapitate him with one easy swing of the sword.
As he walked away he patted the dying shinobi on the shoulder as he clutched his stomach. "Thanks." he said, walking away. Behind him the shinobi cursed, and succumbed to the poison in his system.
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Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 9:33 pm
Name of weapon: Rebellion Who owns the weapon: Kay ((Last name to be determined XP)) Where it was found/Who made it:Kay found it in the ruins of the hidden star village. The Range of the weapon: 5 feet to about fifteen meters. Weakness: Katon jutsu, if it hits something more stable than a tree it will stop. Does not cut things. Can be stopped by most defensive jutsu. Doesn't cause any real harm. It is also heavy to swing, but very easily thrown, and if it is the blade often goes farther than anticipated. Description: Yamato and Rebellion were very reveered weapons back during it's time. The blade [rebellion] is long and has a skull at the bottom, and has holes all down it's sides. It has a very distinctive ability that is not hard to counter act. It Needs to be combined with fuuton chakra to be effective, and shall never work with anything else. It's effect is the mirror of Yamato's, though completely opposite. The when charge with fuuton chakra, for four chara points, it can send a wave of powerful wind. This wind is not used for cutting, rather instead behind able to push. It can deflect kunai and shurikne, even some d rank doton and suiton jutsu, but it can't cut, unlike it's sister weapon. The wind will push anything out of it's way slightly, meaning if it blows past a ninja they will be thrown back a few feet, and if they were backed against a wall they will feel an enourmous pressure on their heads... When it hit's a tree or poorly built house, may be even small boulders, it is capable of knocking them over. Usually used in conjunction with Yamato. Rp Sample: "This kid is seriously some kind of one man army!" enemy ninja squealed as they watched comrades be decimated by insects and summons. Kay watched an enemy ninja come at him from the front with a pair of nunchuks. He grabbed rebellion and swung it, that devilish whistle echoing out to the ears of everything besides the kikaichu, as the wave of wind pushed the chuunin back about a meter.Others around the two ninja were dumfounded as this wind blew over a couple of trees, but the man still recovered from it. He looked around and smiled as he found himself not disembowled. Even so, as quickly as it came, it ceased, and Kay smiled as the war continued around him.
He swung the blade at the nuchaku wielder. "You have horrible aim!" he said dodging and smacking Kay's arm with the nunchuks. It was true, rebellion was very heavy.. and Kay was more used to handling yamato anyway. The effect didn't happen though, but Kay was quick to back up and dash back in again, stabbing with the long blade. A couple of other ninja joined in, each one launching a volley of fire jutsu at Kay. He got out of the way fast, rebellion ineffective if the air around it got too hot, or easily disrupted by extreme heat in general. They came silently from above, but he was fast enough to dodge out of the way and swing the blade at one of their heads. the wind folloed the trail the blade made, blasting the head and body, as well as the other ninja off of their footing.
As they fell Kay heavily swung rebellion, letting it fly in a massive circle towards his enemies, going right past the dodging ninja, and flying much farther than Kay had intended...
Name of weapon: Yamato Who owns the weapon: Kay Where it was found/Who made it:See above The Range of the weapon: katana length to about 35 meters if the attack just flies straight over an open space with no resistance. It'll only go through abuot three things before it's attack disperses. Weakness: Because it was made to be fast, it is very weak, and easily broken. Luckily, the blade can be repaired by Kay outside of battle if the proper tools are present. Also, it isn't really a good sword fighting weapon. Description: Yamato was found along with Rebellion in the ruins of waterfall village, and is now wielded by Kay aburame. This weapon however, has a tottaly different function. The blade is extremely lightweight, as it is used to deliver quick attacks. It's actual use is for fuuton users. The blade is embued with fuuton chakra (only wind) and can move extremely fast, much faster than your average weapon swing, and for four chakra points it can send a wave of razor sharp wind that will slice through trees, small buildings, but could only slash at a human, and will easily be stopped by any weapon. Rp Sample: The battle dragged on with Kay getting bored of watching enemies fall without ever even seeing him, and walked towards the temple statue. He was sending a message throught the entire land of fire... he is alive and hungry for vengenace. As his kikaichu protected him from behind, he gathered chakra in his blad and slashed lightning fast. Though his arm move ment was very fast, the wind traveled at the speed of your average everyday kunai if sped up by projectile control skill. He turned around, facing the mmonks and sheathing his blade. When it clicked, st statue of the leaf symbol fell down behind him.
The enraged monks flew towards him seemingly, as he swung the Rebellion blade, the whistle blasting them right back down as he jumped down, slashing through the air as wind blades were blocked, or not blocked by those less fortunate... unfortunately, a monk got too close and slashed at kay with a sword, to which Kay blocked with his already drawn sword. The blade stopped the katana, but cracked, and Kay jumped backwards through the open air. His shoulders raised a little in anticipation as the cracks turned to fissures in the blade, and then broke... Kay's face turned red...
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 5:04 am
Name of weapon: Nenshō Akuma (燃焼悪魔 “burning demon”) Who owns the weapon: Fuun Chiroku Where it was found: The scroll detailing the procedure to summon it was originally hidden inside an antique stone jar, within the ruins of a long forgotten shrine. Fuun had found it during one of his hide-and-seek games, after breaking the stone jar because it there was a spider on it-- and he hates spiders. The Range of the weapon: Normal Attack - Melee range Ability Effect - Varies Weakness: First, the user can only perform Katon jutsus while these are equipped, nothing else. Second, the weapon actually possesses a mind of its own, and thus can be subjected to genjutsu. Third, from the moment the user equips them, their mind will slowly descend into an animalistic frenzy which can only be stopped when the weapon is removed, and it is this thought that is the last to be stripped of the user during the mental devolution that accompanies the use of this weapon. And lastly, the user receives burns on their arms and legs once the weapon is removed. The intensity of the burns is directly proportional to the total intensity of all the Katon jutsus affected by the weapon. Description: Nenshou Akuma is a pair of similarly designed arms and greaves, with each pair connected by a length of steel and chains, for the arms it is placed on the upper back, for the legs the steel is used as a belt. Its power is the ability to either wield or devour a Katon jutsu. The jutsu can either belong to the user or the opponent; however, using this ability hastens the rate of mental devolution with every jutsu used. When a Katon jutsu is wielded, the weapon will literally wield the flame in its hands or feet and shape it accordingly, or the flame will enter the weapon and swim through it before exiting from another area on its surface. When devouring a Katon jutsu, the weapon will force it inside itself, where it will then digest the flame, releasing it harmlessly into the air as heat. The weapon is also immune to most, if not all, Katon jutsus, however, this only applies to the weapon, and the user does not benefit from this immunity in any way. Thus using its flame-manipulating abilities comes with the constant risk of getting the user burned, or worse, outright killed. Rp Sample:The outlines of the dead ruins of an ancient shrine were blurred as rain started to pour down. Following the downpour came an unexpected visitor, Fuun Chiroku, dashing towards the entrance of the shrine and breaking it down to seek shelter within. ”Ack, I hate rain.” commented the boy as he repetitively stroked his black hair to remove whatever water he could. Finding that he couldn’t make it any drier, he began to turn his attention to the old building that he was inside of ”Heh, alright, they’ll never find me here.” he commented as he began walking the length of the rubble-filled hallway. ”Whew, this place is a mess. It’s like a haunted mansion, or shrine.” noticing the altar, Fuun moved closer to it out of curiosity. Examining the trinkets on top of the altar, Fuun took hold of a peculiarly plain and simple stone jar ”Hmm... I wonder if there are any century old cookies in--“ spoke Fuun, but before he could finish, a spider came out from behind the jar and slowly made its way towards his hand ”Gah!” yelled the boy as he threw the jar at the wall in surprise, shattering it and spilling its contents. Picking it up, Fuun read the text curiously, noticing that it held instructions inside, Fuun followed them, drawing a line on his forearms, before smearing it ”Burn, Nenshou Akuma.”His arms and legs were then covered in flames, which then materialized to form a pair of stylized arms and greaves. As they appeared, a demonic voice began to swim through Fuun’s mind, a voice which soon resonated with the malice inside him that slowly began to surface. Just then, from behind him a gigantic ball of fire erupted forth, and the voice whispered ”Time to see if you can handle fire.” to which Fuun simply replied with a grin. Meeting the ball of fire head on, Fuun thrust his right hand into the fire, and slowly dissolved it inside the arm, forcing it through the length of chain, exiting at his left hand which was aimed at the altar, destroying the altar and subsequently furthering Fuun’s animalistic frenzy. From each of the two pillars beside him then came a torrent of fire. Raising his hands towards the stream, Fuun met the fire head on as the arms slowly devoured them, as Fuun began to laugh out loud maniacally. As the last hurdle, a wall of fire appeared in front of the door leading out, now a bit deranged, Fuun dashed towards the inferno and performed a flying kick towards the wall. As the greaves made contact with the fire, it created a profound effect on the fire, piercing a hold in it, just long enough for Fuun to pass through unscathed. Feeling his mind starting to go insane, Fuun pounded the two arms against each other, un-summoning the weapon. Upon which, he suddenly screamed out in pain as he felt several burn marks on his arms and legs "Power always comes with a price, kid." laughed the weapon as Fuun cursed at it "Yeah well, you smell funny! Great, now I have to walk funny." and walk funny he did as he limped towards his village.
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 11:46 am
@Demon: I'm actually not quite sure about this weapon, but really, the only harm it can bring about is the poison, which I suppose you'll provide yourself. So, unless someone bothers to overturn my rule...  @Kay: Just reading that is was A SWORD, that is way too damn big for anyone to carry. Also, I believe it's little effect on people is OP, since you can't really avoid it, denied. On the other one however, it doesn't sound too bad. However, your "Length" is also too damn long. Shorten it to thirty-five meters or something. @Dante: I didn't quite catch the last sentence, explain it better. (Weakness.) I don't care if your character becomes a monkey with down syndrome, controlling the katon jutsu of your opponent, and being able to devour it for your benefit is OP.
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