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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 5:43 pm
Rpc Name:Kuro Kage Hatake Village:Hidden Cloud Rank:Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for:hatake What you know about the clan/bl:Um not much. I know the Kakkashi was the one who broke the Clan sword. Their chakra color MUST be white. They are fast. They all have white hair. Rp Sample:"Hey kid stop. COME BACK HERE." Kuro paid no attention to him. He knew that he was going to get into trouble. He just stole from his shop. The items that he stole where food and medicine. He needed them for his sick mother. His father was to drunk to do anything about it. He hated him for that. For wasting all their money on sake. He wasn't paying any attention and ran right into someone. "Hey kid what are you doing." "Sorry mister wasn't paying attention." He just realized that he was the shop owners son.
"Well well well. Look what we have here the thief who stole from my dad's shop. Just hand over what you took and we'll forget about it." "I can't." "Why not?" "It's for my mother she's sick." "To bad hand it over." "No I'll fight you, but I won't hand it over." "Bad move kid." The owner's son took out a katana and pointed at him. "Well come one then. Get up and take out that katana of yours."
Kuro reached around to his left hip and pulled out his katana. "This isn't wise of you." He focused some of his chakra into the blade. It glowed white and got longer. "Who are you boy?" "You want to know my name. It's Kuro Kage Hatake." With that said he swung the blade. It's increased length cutting the man's shirt open. "I'd run if I were you." "As if."
The owner's son ran at Kuro slashing wildly. Kuro blocked every attack then jumped back. "Now you've done pissed me off. Yaiba no Jutsu." Lighting formed in his hand then moved into the gap in between his first and middle finger of his left hand forming a sword blade. "Shiro Chakra Kouyou." The blade turned white then lengthened and got stronger. He ran at the owner's son and stabbed him in the right shoulder with his katana and the left shoulder with the lightning sword. He opened his fingers and the blade vanished. He then sheathed his katana and went home.
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:05 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 8:05 pm
Declined. I know you can do a better job at description then that. You had a few errors like putting "one" would you should have put "on" and "where" when you should have put "were". Another thing is you have exchanges of dialogue without any type of description in between. I need you to understand something. In most cases with bloodlines like this, the first person to join will end up being the head of the bloodline. If you are going to be the head of the bloodline then you need to be very good at your bloodline. Also I'm going to be posting the limits on the amount of people who can join one bloodline. The limit will be five and if we are placing a limit like that on these bloodline/clans we need to make sure that the people in them can use them very well. The last thing we want to do is fill the slots with people aren't skilled with the bloodline when their are people out there who can utilize it better. Read the bloodline over and rethink the way you posted. You will be able to repost, let me say this one more time, REPOST! That means don't edit the post you made, just post whatever you did with the said corrections and I will judge it once more. If you get declined again you will have to wait until 3 weeks pass to try for this bloodline again.
I wish you the best of luck with your post. smile
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 8:24 pm
Rpc Name: Raiteki Chiroku Village: Kumogakure Rank: Chuunin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Anigan What you know about the clan/bl: Allows enhanced senses, transformation into animals, can use animalistic traits, gains good and bad traits of animals. Rp Sample Raiteki was simply fighting a fellow Shinobi in a sparring match. He was easily winning the fight, but he could tell that the opponent was holding back. As the other Shinobi came in close, Raiteki sent a punch that hit him clean in the face and pushed him back about a foot. "Why aren't you really trying? You're bugging me. This isn't at all fun." Raiteki spoke. Then the other Shinobi smirked and performed a few handseals. "Lightning Bolt Jutsu!!" he shouted as he sent a bolt of lightning at Raiteki's head. Quickly, Raiteki reacted and his Anigan activated. He gained the quick reflexes of a cat and bent backwards at a 90 degree angle, avoiding the blast completely.
Raiteki then charged and tried to attack the Shinobi, the Shinobi evaded the attacks. He suddenly dropped a smoke bomb and appeared behind Raiteki, but Raiteki's senses were powerful enough to track him. Suddenly, Yoite's arm grew large and morphed into the arm of the Bengal Tiger. He swiped at the Shinobi but met paths with his oncoming Chidori. "What the-!" Raiteki screamed as he was shocked mercilessly on the arm by the Chidori and his Raiteki's arm was forced back into it's normal form. He was now unable to transform until he recovered from that shock. This would be a battle Raiteki might not win.
Raiteki jumped away as he used his senses to find his way through the smoke and track the enemy at the same time. Suddenly, the enemy was up at Raiteki's throat with a kunai. Raiteki quickly bent backwards and did a backwards somersault in which he kicked the blade out of the enemy's hands. "Dammit! I thought we agreed that we wouldn't use weapons!" Raiteki shouted. "But that's no fun! Plus, I wanna be the one to rid the Clan of you, once and for all!" he spoke in a sinister tone. This man was part of the Clan and he knew the weaknesses of the Clan.
As Raitekiactivated his Anigan once more, he charged and sent a Flying Bicycle Kick (Dynamic Entry) right at the enemy's face, but the enemy activated the Anigan and could easily track his movements. "Haha! You aren't fast enough, Raiteki!" he screamed as he came up behind Raiteki and elbowed him in the spine. Raiteki tumbled to the ground, but leaped back up quickly. "You b*****d..." Raiteki muttered as he charged once again.
Raiteki had truly begun to fight as best he could. He punched at the head. It was evaded. Roundhouse kick to the side. It was blocked. Leg sweep. It was evaded. Rising axe kick to the face. Evaded again. "God dammit! How are you so fast!" Raiteki yelled as he suddenly felt a surge of power. Suddenly, Raiteki came across with a spinning backfist, but his arm morphed into that of a gorilla and was enlarged and much more powerful. The attack came quicker than the enemy expected and the enemy was hit dead in the face.
"What the-!?" the enemy yelled as he was sent flying. "I forgot... I forgot that it doesn't take long to recover from a shock. No matter... I'LL KILL YOU!!" the man ranted as the battle now continued to rage on.
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:16 pm
Hark How The Angels Sing Rpc Name: Raiteki Chiroku Village: Kumogakure Rank: Chuunin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Anigan What you know about the clan/bl: Allows enhanced senses, transformation into animals, can use animalistic traits, gains good and bad traits of animals. Rp Sample Raiteki was simply fighting a fellow Shinobi in a sparring match. He was easily winning the fight, but he could tell that the opponent was holding back. As the other Shinobi came in close, Raiteki sent a punch that hit him clean in the face and pushed him back about a foot. "Why aren't you really trying? You're bugging me. This isn't at all fun." Raiteki spoke. Then the other Shinobi smirked and performed a few handseals. "Lightning Bolt Jutsu!!" he shouted as he sent a bolt of lightning at Raiteki's head. Quickly, Raiteki reacted and his Anigan activated. He gained the quick reflexes of a cat and bent backwards at a 90 degree angle, avoiding the blast completely.
Raiteki then charged and tried to attack the Shinobi, the Shinobi evaded the attacks. He suddenly dropped a smoke bomb and appeared behind Raiteki, but Raiteki's senses were powerful enough to track him. Suddenly, Yoite's arm grew large and morphed into the arm of the Bengal Tiger. He swiped at the Shinobi but met paths with his oncoming Chidori. "What the-!" Raiteki screamed as he was shocked mercilessly on the arm by the Chidori and his Raiteki's arm was forced back into it's normal form. He was now unable to transform until he recovered from that shock. This would be a battle Raiteki might not win.
Raiteki jumped away as he used his senses to find his way through the smoke and track the enemy at the same time. Suddenly, the enemy was up at Raiteki's throat with a kunai. Raiteki quickly bent backwards and did a backwards somersault in which he kicked the blade out of the enemy's hands. "Dammit! I thought we agreed that we wouldn't use weapons!" Raiteki shouted. "But that's no fun! Plus, I wanna be the one to rid the Clan of you, once and for all!" he spoke in a sinister tone. This man was part of the Clan and he knew the weaknesses of the Clan.
As Raitekiactivated his Anigan once more, he charged and sent a Flying Bicycle Kick (Dynamic Entry) right at the enemy's face, but the enemy activated the Anigan and could easily track his movements. "Haha! You aren't fast enough, Raiteki!" he screamed as he came up behind Raiteki and elbowed him in the spine. Raiteki tumbled to the ground, but leaped back up quickly. "You b*****d..." Raiteki muttered as he charged once again.
Raiteki had truly begun to fight as best he could. He punched at the head. It was evaded. Roundhouse kick to the side. It was blocked. Leg sweep. It was evaded. Rising axe kick to the face. Evaded again. "God dammit! How are you so fast!" Raiteki yelled as he suddenly felt a surge of power. Suddenly, Raiteki came across with a spinning backfist, but his arm morphed into that of a gorilla and was enlarged and much more powerful. The attack came quicker than the enemy expected and the enemy was hit dead in the face.
"What the-!?" the enemy yelled as he was sent flying. "I forgot... I forgot that it doesn't take long to recover from a shock. No matter... I'LL KILL YOU!!" the man ranted as the battle now continued to rage on. MISTAH APPROVES!
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:16 pm
Rpc Name:Makkura(Chiroku if accepted), Yoarashi
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Chunin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Chiroku(Anigan)
What you know about the clan/bl: Allows you to use certain traits of animals while Anigan is active. The Higher your ninja rank, the less chakra you have to use. gives a small increase to the five senses when using animal traits be aware of the good and bad that comes with it. you can not mix different multiple animal traits until stage four. You can use multiple traits of the same e.g: Chameleon's abilty to blend into an enviorment, and to look in different directions. All Chiroku members should respect animals like they would a human friend.
Rp Sample:
Yo walked out into the lower forest regions of the mountains of Kumogakure for training his Anigan. The forest was quieter than usual. The forest would occasionally have the sound of a wolf howl, condor call when it was searching for food, or a chinchilla scurrying across the crunching leaves of the forest floor, but Yo hadn't heard a sound yet, other than his own. Yoarashi seached the forest finding no animals in sight. Then a wolf covered in blood came along, but it wasnt blood from a hunt but its own blood instead. Yo looked it in the with the Anigan for appoximately 5 seconds using the Chiroku Animal telempathy jutsu. " What happened here, where are all the animals," Yo spoke to the wolf using the jutsu concerned about the silence in the forest. The wolf replied back, its mental voice," There are poachers to the far north of here, and they've been killing animals to collect their fur. Some of the other animals have went into hiding and hadn't made a sound since then. It started about five hours ago, we thought someone would arrive sooner, but you're the first," the wolf's voice sounded raspy and weak, no doubt that it had in custody of the poachers, and risked its life to escape, and bring this message. By the looks of the wolf it was bound to die soon. " Please help my friends," the wolf pleaded with the last bit of energy that it had. Yo gave it a nod of agreement before it died. Yoarashi gave the wolf a warriors funeral like you'd a human warrior. Yo started to make his way to the campsite of the poachers his blood boiling for revenge.
Yo ran to the campsite in a matter of minutes using the animal sense technique, and his own natural speed to get there. He stopped a a couple of meters away to get a look at the campsite to make a plan of attack. The poachers seemed to be wealthy buisinessman. He had apparentlly hired two rouge ninjas to do his dirty work. Yo had saw a Chameleon try to blend into the shady wood of the tree. Taking some steps away from the camp, he eyed the chameleon to use its ability to blend into the enviorment. Crawling along the ground he was in plain sight and anyone could see him, but when he was completely still he blended into the grass and ground on the floor. Yo made his way slowly to one of the rouge ninjas. The tent was huge and seperated the ninjas' vision of each other which made it easy for Yo to sneak up on them. Yo made his way to one ninja by walking a couple of steps, then blending into the ground. This ninja must have been a very low class ninja for Yo to sneak up on him like he did. The rouge would hear the rustling of the ground, but would check to see what it was. Yo had killed this ninja by delivering a swift blow to the neck. The ninja fell to the ground with a load thump, alerting the other. When he came around Yo had already blended into the ground again, but he was different, he saw Yo move his foot and immediately realized what he was. He threw a kunai infused with raiton chakra, not at him, but on the side of him which realeased a large electrical current, disabling his Anigan.
Yoarashi quickly got off the ground to gain his footing. He was trembling from the shock still. The rouge charged him another kunai in hand, this time using it as a hand-to-hand weapon. Yo picked the one off the ground that shocked him and prayed it didn't have anymore electricity running through it. The kunai appeared to be ok when he touched it and picked it up. In the same motion he picked it up, he used it to block the Rouge ninja's kunai. Yo had held the kunai to where the pointed edge was facing the outside, and the hilt in his right hand. The rouge went low then high try and get Yo off balance. Yo preformed a basic clone jutsu to confuse his enemy. Several clones had surrounded the rouge from every angle, and somewhere in the mix was the real Yoarashi. The clones and the real Yo attacked at the same time The rouge swung at three clones until the real Yo came and stabbed him in the back, then drove his face into the floor by pushing him forward, bringing his left leg forwards, then backwards, in a hooking motion tripping him up. The blood ran from the rouge's mouth, lying down, dying.
Yo made his way to the tent, moving slowly, inch by inch. The man came out of the tent in a rage," Are you damn idiots done yet, I need to start skinning these things so I can make a damn good profit off them," His voice was a somewhat baritone pitch. Along with that, his voice had that sound to it when the rich become too greedy, and they lose themselves in it. He was about to yell at the top of his lungs when he turned to Yoarashi and suddenly trembled in fear. Yo appeared to have glowing red eyes in the dark shade of the tent; Yo was going to erupt with anger when he heard him. The Businessman ran inside the tent, Yo followed shortly after him. " Animals are your friends you know, you shouldn't treat them badly," Yo held his head down, his bangs covering his eyes. Yo got in the man's face slowly as if trying to torture him. He leaned closer to the man showing his sharp fang on the right to fake he was using his Anigan," It would be a shame for all these animals to die just for a profit wouldn't it," he said it in a dark tone to put fear in him. Yo did scare him enough to open the cages containing animals, for the man was literally wetting himself doing so. " Now leave, and I might not tell my animal buddies here not to eat you," Yo's expression was suddenly very bright, showing to the man he might be insane. As soon as Yo said that sentence though The businessman ran off screaming into the forest. Yo told the animals not to eat the man as soon as his Anigan came back. out of deep respect they went on without his business. Yo went to train more seeing he still had much to learn about his Anigan.
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:22 pm
UTTERLY DECLINES!!!!!! scream just playing I know you can use this bloodline rofl MISTAH APPROVES!
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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 4:13 am
I don't want to be the head of the bloodline though.
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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 5:08 pm
Kage Shinoha I don't want to be the head of the bloodline though. Statistically speaking if you were the first person to join the headline and start RPing you should be the first person to make it to Chuunin and therefore become the bloodline head. You should follow my suggestions and repost. Make sure you proofread everything, follow my tips and then try again.
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 1:49 pm
Rpc Name:Uchiha Saruto Village:Kumo ( Will abandon for Yuki when the time comes twisted ) Rank:Academy Student ( For now... ) Bloodline or Clan applied for:Sharingan Bloodline What you know about the clan/bl:Their eye is able to create fantastical illusions, and Even some things quite real. They have an extremely powerful jutsu, known as Susanoo that can protect, and counter against any attack, besides another Susanoo, which balances eachother out, making the field of combat smaller, and a lot more dangerous. They also have the pinnacle of fire Jutsu, The Ameratsu flame technique, which creates un extinguishable flames, and they burn indefinatly. However these flames can be sealed away. Next they have the Illusion of all illusions Tsukiyomi, Where they bring their oponent into an alternate realm, and inflict pain upon them, according to how the user wishes. The most famous is an execution by Katana, with the Foe tied to a large log, and stabed and ripped open, repeatedly. To be exact, they are cut open and slashed up 15552000 times. ( Once each second of every minute, of every hour for three days. ) This all happens in a split second, and causes the opponent to fall to their knees, out of pain, and out of severe mental trauma. Finally, They have the ultimate jutsu, which should never be used in a guild. Izanagi. It is where they literally create illusions to be real, making them able to basically become a god, until their chakra runs out. Danzo used this, and nearly killed his opponent, who couldn't scratch him. They also have a Katon affinity, and they must start out with Katon as their element. Also, they have to go through quite a bit before they can use their Sharingan eye to their best abilities, and most never take the steps needed to get it. Rp Sample:" So, You want to learn to use the Sharingan huh kid? " The Kage said, turning in his seat to look at the Young Academy student. " First, Show me your Sharingan at this very moment, I want to know if you even have one Tomoe, otherwise, I can't train you. " The Kage said sighing, his movements were completely inconsievable to an academy student, if he were to put this child's life in danger to get him to activate the tomoe, it would have to be atleast at the first stage, and not just forming.
" All right, I think I have the first stage... " He Said, activating his Sharingan, a single tomoe on his eye, slowly moving in a circle. " But for some reason I get tired really eally fast when I'm using this." Saruto said, His eye beginning to move a little bit faster. " see, I'm already getting tired. " He said, beginning to breathe heavily.
" That's because you are trying to form a Genjutsu. And I won't teach you any genjutsu, So, quit focusing on your eyes, and focus on my movement. " He said smiling, His hand appearing ontop of his head, lightning fast. " Did you see that? " The Kage asked, smiling at the Academy student.
" Yeah, just just barely. " He said, Moving an inch to the right, exactly where he was standing. It hadn't even registered in his mind that a Senbon had just been thrown in his direction. " Can you please begin to train me now? " H said, waiting respectfully for a responce.
" Allright, But you are too tired right now, Go to the Training feild tommorrow morning, and we will begin. " The Kage said smiling, rocking in his chair, turning back and forth with a pen in his fingers. He waited for Saruto to leave the room, he then sat up in his chair and clutched his face, breathing heavily. He dispelled the illusion that was only minor, but had gotten more severe as the Child kept pouring chakra into it. " How the hell is someone so small... able to make such powerful Genjutsu... And that isn't even his type... " He said breathing normally now. " It must be those eyes... " The kage said sitting up in his chair, he stood up, and walked out of his office, He had to look into those eyes.
~ the next Morning ~
" Hellooooo? Kage-sama? " Saruto said, walking into the training feild, he looked around, spotting a body in the fog. " Hey, Kage Sama! " He said, running forwards, but stopping and dodging to the side quickly, narrowly dodging a Kunai. " Who the Hell threw that? " He said, Activating his sharingan, lhe looked around, for any sign of who threw that, besides the shadow in the distance.
" Good... good... Now, I'm going to take those pretty little eyes of yours... I was hoping an Uchiha would make it's way to Kumo, just so I could take their pretty little eyes... " a creepy old man said stepping out of the fog, he let out a howl of laughter, His body dispersing into the Fog. " I'm nothing really, Just your Trial... all uchiha must prove themselves worthy of holding the Sharingan, atleast according to me! " The man said laughing evily as he reformed behind Saruto, He Plunged a Kunai directly into Saruto's Back, laughing as he did so.
" Heh, I could read your Substitution jutsu easily, Although I've never seen it with fog bfore, I'll have to take that technique... oh wait! I did. " Saruto said, Appearing behind the old man, The Kunai not in his back, but plunged into the fog. " Now, Let's finish this old man! " He said, swinging a Nodachi at the man, aiming to cut him.
" Oh, Such a child's toy! " The Old Man said laughing, Blocking with a Kunai, he laughed, Throwing off his cloak. He revealed Six arms, all held a blade, each blade holding an odd attribute. " In 9 minutes, I will kill you. unless you can defeat me, then I will kill you, and you shall die. " The old man said laughing, Jumping into the Fog.
" Damn! I can't see through this damn fog! " He said, an idea hitting him. He Jumped into the air, and made some quick handsigns. " Fire style: Fire ball jutsu! " He said, producing a large firebal that disapated most of the fog, within a 50 meter radius. " Come on out old man. " He said, smiling. He had been wanting something fun to fight, Wild animals just weren't any fun anymore. He smiled, His nodachi glimmering in the remaining fire's light. He threw down Some shuriken, Preparing one of his Clan's greatest Techniques.
" How unintelligent. This time of year there is never fog on the training grounds, which means that you are only making me have to recreate that fog. " He said laughing, A clink being heard. The Old man ran through the hole Saruto had made, Fog trailing him, He swung with four blades, trying to hit Saruto, who parried each slash with his Nodachi. soon the area was Refilled with fog. " Heh, you are pretty good boy... Let's see how you handle this! " He said Another clink being heard, and a loud noise being heard, it sounded like a hurricane, And the old man came running at Saruto with a huge blade of water and wind, Making a miniature hurricane on the blade. " Prepare for me to take those eyes of yours! " The Old man said laughing, He jumped into the air, Comming down directly above Saruto.
" Perfect Positioning. " saruto said, He hadn't moved an inch since he last landed. He lifted a single finger and smiled, His trap activated, Launching Shuriken with Wires attached directly at the Man's Blade. Saruto held the wires in his hand to his mouth and Breathed on them, Smiling as Fire ran down the lines of the Wire, Dispersing the Water into mist, and catching the balde onto an unnatural fire, Causing the Old man to release it. " Pheonix flower jutsu! " He said smiling.
" You Stupid! " The Old man said, Releasing the blade, and jumping away. " Damn child, Causing me more trouble than I thought... Now I'm stuck with only four of my blades..." The Old man said, going over the ones he had left. " Ashura, Fire. Osafune, Earth. Kotetsu, lightning. Zanmaru, Healing. " He said sighing, There was only one combination that worked, but it was pretty much suicidal, Seeing as it caused an enormous explosion. " Fine, I'll have to use THAT Technique. " The Old man said sighing, Breathing deeply, He smiled and ran at the child, Who was now looking directly at him. " without My ashura Nosada combo, I'm not nearly as fast as I should be... " He said, cursing the fates that he had been cursed with having one of his legs removed at a young age. " Now, Fall to my Ultimate technique! Four Slash, Style of destruction! " He said, laughing. In truth, it was called Six slash style of destruction, but his Blades were currently being affected by this child's trap.
" Heh, Like that is going to work! " He said laughing, Jumping into the Air and Releasing another Giant fireball jutsu. " Fire style, Fibeball jutsu. " He said, Flying off into the fog. " He looked around, There were hundreds of shadows, all around him now. " Crap... the Shadow clone jutsu... " He said sighing.
" No, not the shadow clone jutsu, I learned that you can copy my Techniques, and now I'm going to have to use only Katon techniques, that you should know. " he said laughing.
" Too bad for you I never study. " He said, He copied the Technique, and smiled, Everything coming into better focus as he Gained another tomoe. " Yes, I got another one. " He said, getting into a position to attack, and moving his hands quickly, he smiled and breathed in heavily, and let out nothing but air. But! about five Clones apeared around him, all posessing his Second tomoe. " Now, you guys take care of my back and my sides. This guy is mine. " he said smiling, Noticing te Old man had all six of his blades back. " Now, Let's do this! " He said smiling, Running forwards, He plunged his Nodachi into the Old man's stomach.
" Heh, Nw that I have you here, Feel the wrath as you are killed! My true ultimate Technique! Six Slash! Destruction style! " He said, laughing as he swung his blades, Cutting the being infront of him into seven peices. " What the? " He said as the Katon clone turned into flames.
" Heh, too bad for you, you can't see well old man, I put a clone directly infront of me, so you wouldn't see me jump to the left and escape. " He said smiling, The Nodachi that had been plunged into his stomach turning to flames, Closing the wound, but also causing massive damage to his Stomach.
" Heh... You got me child... I guess I'm not what I used to be... " He said, breathing heavily, He fell to his knees. The swords plunged into the ground as the large old man landed on his stomach. he flipped over and started to laugh. " And to think, I was going to stop my blindness... Why hadn't that Stupid Uchiha warned me that the Eyes began t deteriorate once you killed your friend... " He said laughing. " You child, I've gone blind, but these eyes can cease your blindness.... Take them. " the old man said laughing.
" Thank you very much... But no thanks. " He said, Jumping above the man, he threw Kunai directly into his chest, Killing the old man instantly. He then walked over and plucked out both eyes. He placed them on his own, and absorbed them, Ceasing any blindness he may have been attracting.
~An hour later~
Saruto sat next to the old man's body, breathing heavily. " Man, I never knew training my Sharingan would be so hard... " He said letting out a loud sigh, he fell on his back and went to sleep.
" Hello saruto- " the Kage said, Seeing his laying in the old man's blood, He ran over to look at the old man and Gasped. " This is that stupid ex Kumo shinobi isn't it... Well well well... Maybe it is a good thing I didn't cross this child... " The Kage said, picking up the child and carrying him to his home. ( For more information on the blades, pm me, and I will show you my Pride and joy for the Kumo clan )
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 2:24 pm
Rpc Name: Shi Motarasu Kurosaki Village: Kiri Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Kurosaki What you know about the clan/bl: Rp Sample:
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 4:55 pm
I used the same sample that i used for my auto-rank app (not yet approved)
Rpc Name:Shika Nara Village:Konoha Rank:Chunin Bloodline or Clan applied for: Nara clan What you know about the clan/bl: The Nara clan are shadow users that have a close bond with deer. They use their shadows to hold and control others. This ability is mostly used to delay the other ninja's movements, although some attacks do cause damage.They do their jutsus by controlling already existing shadows, so the larger the shadow the more they have to work with. Once their shadow meets that of another's the jutsu was a success. Their shadow doesnt move instantly, it takes time for it to reach it's target. They can change their shadow's shape at will. Rp Sample: Shika Nara stepped into the large room and looked around. The room had an old architecture, although she had trouble telling it's origin. She couldn't tell just how large the room was, because it was very poorly lit, but it must have been very large. Pillars surrounded the small group of cloaked figures in the middle, and seemed to go on forever. A guard prodded her to go on with a sharp poke of a kunai. Shika had lost track of time, as she had been unconscious for the last several hours. As they approached the circle of figures, their conversation broke. After a long pause, the tallest figure stepped forward into the light, showing a heavily scarred face, none of them recent. He reached up to adjust his glasses, which had been in danger of falling off of his crooked nose. "So you are the one they sent? I would have expected more than a lowly Konoha ninja." He glared darkly at Shika, who was the main player in the retreival of this man. Her mind repeated the mission briefing. Her task was to locate the missing-nin who had been responsible for killing 4 Sunagakure Academy students. Suna had asked Konoha for assistance, because all of their ranking members were unable to respond. Shika was to lead a team of three Suna genin, in an attempt to reclaim the C-ranked criminal, while they could still determine his location. Easier said than done she thought to herself. The three genin were waiting on the roof of the structure, spying through a small hole, waiting for her signal. The ninja slapped her in the face. "You do understand don't you? They sent you because they don't really care. They didn't want to bother sending a full team of Suna ninjas, they instead sent one weak Konoha ninja." Shika looked down at the ground, hoping her plan would work. It took every ounce of her emotional capacity to stand up to this monster. She mumbled something in retort, but it was drowned out by the mans taunts. "So what do they expect a weak ninja like you to do? are you going to use the famous 'Konoha negotiation' to bring me in? No-one from your village has what it takes to be a ninja, which is why you are the laughing stock of the villages." Shika frowned. She hated it, but she knew that it was impossible to reason with this guy. He was too self absorbed to give in. In the darkness, she knew her shadow would be of no use, but that would soon be fixed. She clapped her hands in front of her, and before the guards could react, a loud explosion came from above. The beautiful architecture was giving way as carefully placed explosives dropped the roof. Debris, surrounded Shika and the ninja, as the sun shone on them like a spotlight. The weak ninja who were acting as guards were now closed off from them, and the plan was in affect. Shika wasted no time, and performed the necessary handseals as the dust cleared. "Kage Mane no jutsu!" but he dodged it and ran through the forest. Shika followed him, untill he stepped into a field. looking out from her hiding spot and into the open field, she cursed her luck. She was against a fast ninja, who obviously knew what she could do. Now he stood in the middle of a field, just out of her reach, and she knew no other jutsus which stood a chance against him. it was past lunchtime, and she knew that the longer she waited, the more the shadows would move away. The sun was in exactly the wrong place. A quick glance around the field and she found her answer. a shadow had managed to creep into the other side of the field. A cloud had drifted into the clear sky. Shika sprinted into the field, and threw a handful of kunai. She had just learned the perfect jutsu for this. Sliding to a halt, she had already performed the necessary seals, and called out, "Kageton - Kage Senbon Rendan" and her shadow broke in to a volley of needles. The ninja jumped in front of the clouds shadow, after dodging all of the attacks. The stage would have been set, if the ninja wasn't a raiton user. The last thing Shika wanted to hear, was exactly what she heard. "Yurayura Ranpu no Jutsu!" A flash of light blinded her for a moment, and broke her shadow long enough for him to get back into the clear. This time however he was trapped between the approaching cloud, and the shadow of the forest behind him. She didn't pause for a second. he was still close enough! She held the seal and once more declared "kage mane no jutsu!" just as three blurs came into view. The ninja had attempted to reach for his large sword, but had found himself immobilized. "I hope you understand what your choices are at this point" Shika said quietly. She bowed her head so the fool could see two swords at his throat. Two Suna ninja stood behind him and the third landed behind Shika. "Your plan worked perfectly. The guards wont be able to clear their way in time." Nagisa gave a weak smile. "We are still close to Sunagakure, please go ahead. I should be able to hold him untill we reach the gates, but i will need someone to take him from there." Her quiet words forced all three ninjas to listen very closely.
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 10:44 pm
Rpc Name: Mamoru Kurosaki Village: Konoha Rank: Kage Bloodline or Clan applied for: Kurosaki What you know about the clan/bl: I made it I should know everything. Bakudo's are consider genjustus and hado's are ninjutsus. These are only attainable by completing the Kido Training Courses. Kurosaki's wield special swords (considered to be "Zanpaktou's" put will discuss that later) Rp Sample: Mamoru walked around Konoha marveling at its beauty. When suddenly he was ambushed by a lesser demon known as Caym. "What is that you want, demon?" he asked.
"Only your precious spot as a hokage," Caym said sounding like Gollum of LOTR.
"Well I am sorry you can't have it, Bakudo 9 Horin," he said while an orange and yellow tendril started to bind Caym.
“Fool to think this genjutsu can hold me,” Caym said while breaking free of the genjutsu.
“Hado 4 Byakurai,” Mamoru said. A pale white light shot out of his fingers and soared at great speeds towards Caym.
Caym dodged still getting hit by the attack. “Ouch, so much pain. But then it wasn’t even that effective,” he said snarling.
“But, how is that possible, nevertheless Hado 73 Soren Sokatsui,” a blue light bigger then Byakurai headed straight for Caym, “This time he should be down and out.”
Caym didn’t dodge he took it head on. The attack slammed right into him but he only had some minor scratches. “Tch, ha, do you except me to go down that easily. Think I might not be a Bijuu but I’m really tough just like them.”
“Then I will go full out Shikai no jutsu,” a burst of charka flowed from Mamoru, “Now, Bankai no jutsu.” He preformed two jutsus at once only because he was going full force with this guy. “Now taste defeat Kanmon tame za Sumizome Seken (Gateway to the Dark World).” He started to change color his hair went black his body went pale white and his eyes turned blue. His outfit turned inverted and his chakra color changed it was now black with orange highlights. “So you wanna play uh?” Mamoru said, “Well then lets play.” He charged forward at the demon in attempts to cut him down. The demon dodged put he was not quick enough to dodge the second attack and he was sliced thru the middle. Yet he was still alive. The jutsu Mamoru used wore off and he started breathing heavily. “Aren’t you dead yet?” he asked.
“Almost, why don’t you finish me off?” Caym asked.
“Because killing such a person that has no ability to fight is not worth my time but you have caused such a problem here in Konoha I must do something,” he said thinking about what to do. “Bakudo 61 Rikujokoro,” he muttered as six bars of yellow light encased the demon. “Now that you can’t even wriggle around anymore I will have no problem killing you at this range. Hado 32 Oaksen,” a wide arc of energy came out of his hand and hit the demon. “It is over.” The demon died and the Hokage had fallen to the ground. “Kanmon tame za Goshujin Seken,” he said as his sword came to life, “Take me back to my office Ryūjōmaru.” The dragon lifted Mamoru and took him back to his office and returned back to its original form.
[Caym = Great President who takes the shape of a thrush; rules 30 legions]
[What I would like to see out of Kurosaki Clan members is at least 5 Hados, they can be kido only or bakudo only. But just remember Bakudos are considered genjutsus. Use of shikai no jutsu, bankai no jutsu and two gateway jutsus. Use of shunpo is totally up to you its just like the teleportation jutsu but you can’t be followed, except if your battling a “Mind’s Eye of the Kagura” Shunko is optional too it is only to be used if your going for Special Jounin.]
[Also apparently I have to apply for a clan that I made. But it is okay.]
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 4:11 am
This is where you would go if you wanted to apply for a bloodline. Go to the other bloodline section. [The one that says "never closed"]
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A City Of Fools Vice Captain
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