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Confessor_Ryoko

PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 11:24 am


Ryoko:1
Dontae:2
vote!! ^^lol
PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 2:07 pm


they both were...very easy reads...nothing just jumped out to me...so imma base my voting on this battle simply by which line took me by suprise...which neither of you had that...so NEST imma vote on what i didnt like about them...dante your s**t was too...nOObish...all this ***** and IMMA MURDER you...i personaly dont like that...Ryoko you tried to put two many big words in there and they didnt work...but all in all imma have to vote....another bit of advise...dont put those /'s after every line...it gets annoying...look at the vets flows...we dont use them...it makes it look cleaner....

VOTE: RYOKO

Daddy Kwick v2.0


Confessor_Ryoko

PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 4:27 pm


DaDdy KWicK V2.0
they both were...very easy reads...nothing just jumped out to me...so imma base my voting on this battle simply by which line took me by suprise...which neither of you had that...so NEST imma vote on what i didnt like about them...dante your s**t was too...nOObish...all this ***** and IMMA MURDER you...i personaly dont like that...Ryoko you tried to put two many big words in there and they didnt work...but all in all imma have to vote....another bit of advise...dont put those /'s after every line...it gets annoying...look at the vets flows...we dont use them...it makes it look cleaner....

VOTE: RYOKO

thank you for the advice. I'll use it.
Ryoko:2
Dontae:2
PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 8:59 pm


VOTE: Ryoko.

Why: Black's rhymes were just too cliche for my taste. Its like he read the book of how to start freestyling and used all of the examples. I mean no offence to him, we all had a time where we were at that stage,

"u just been murdered, signed Dontae Black/
cause thats how i'ma win a straight KO
Girl u must be a quack, if u think u can beat black/
but i don't like u so i'ma just show u a door/
don't matter what u bring u still gone end up in defeat/
My flow is the equivalent to crack/ "

a lot of cliche stuff.

Ryoko's punches, though not all that powerful, hit harder than Dontae's, she had a better finisher, and was more creative.

.-.DivineTechnique.-.


Dontae Black

PostPosted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 9:17 am


aiight cool final score

Ryoko: 3
DB: 2

congrats Ryoko, we should do this again sometime
PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 8:48 am


Ms Booboo

They were both pretty... simplistic.

I'm going to have to go for DB. He had a better flow and more punches. Confessor, try to work on your flow a little.

VOTE: Dontae Black.
same thing i said to myself when i read the battle but you know it cool i gotta vote for Dontae cause his flow was better and his punches were better. Confessor i didn't like the rhyme scheme

Vote: BLack

Damn i didn't realize this s**t was over aww ******** it my vote stays the same its just worthless now

Nfamous


Dontae Black

PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 1:21 pm


Nfamous
Ms Booboo

They were both pretty... simplistic.

I'm going to have to go for DB. He had a better flow and more punches. Confessor, try to work on your flow a little.

VOTE: Dontae Black.
same thing i said to myself when i read the battle but you know it cool i gotta vote for Dontae cause his flow was better and his punches were better. Confessor i didn't like the rhyme scheme

Vote: BLack

Damn i didn't realize this s**t was over aww ******** it my vote stays the same its just worthless now


haha thanks Nfamous, Ryoko should change the headline. I don't think she's been on lately tho..
PostPosted: Sat Feb 04, 2006 8:34 am


Dontae Black
Nfamous
Ms Booboo

They were both pretty... simplistic.

I'm going to have to go for DB. He had a better flow and more punches. Confessor, try to work on your flow a little.

VOTE: Dontae Black.
same thing i said to myself when i read the battle but you know it cool i gotta vote for Dontae cause his flow was better and his punches were better. Confessor i didn't like the rhyme scheme

Vote: BLack

Damn i didn't realize this s**t was over aww ******** it my vote stays the same its just worthless now


haha thanks Nfamous, Ryoko should change the headline. I don't think she's been on lately tho..
I'm sorry. I'll change it. I've just been real busy. thx for the battle Black. I appreciate it. ^^

Confessor_Ryoko

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