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Panthers7
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 1:58 pm


(( Is mine still in consideration? ^.^ ))
PostPosted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:56 am


Name of Jutsu: Burning Palms Style
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: It's about B rank
Chakra Nature:Katon
Effect: It can be both since it just puts the hands "on fire"
Description:puts the hands on fire
Requirements: at least be a chuunin or a genin for three years to use this
Range: hand to hand combat

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:00 am


Panthers: approved
Amaroq: approved

I'm approving mine because it doesn't do much right now. Jase will turn it up a notch though. He recently figured out how to do this.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 1:44 am


Name of Jutsu: Magen • Ekiheki - Demonic Illusion • False Battle
Classification: Gen
Rank: S
Chakra Nature: None
Effect: Offense or Defense
Description:
The user's eyes will glow brightly red with the Sharingan. If the opponent looks at the user in the eyes, he or she is trapped in the Illusion. The illusion is simple, it allows a battle to happen in the opponent's mind, leaving the user to escape or set up the battlefield as he or she wishes. The opponent will be able to get out of the genjutsu when either it is canceled or he or she had used half of their chakra in the battle taking place in the mind, preventing the technique from leaving the opponent trapped permanently in a false battle. Once the false battle is over, the opponent will still be in the same state as he or she was when they originally entered the battle. No chakra loss or damage taken.
Requirements: Three Tomoe Sharingan
Range: As far as the bright glow emanating from the Sharingan can be seen.
Other: To learn this technique as an Uchiha, you have to seek out Uchiha Kazu to learn it from him, it is his signature Genjutsu.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 11:26 am


Name of Jutsu: Enshi - Death By Smoke Suffocation
Classification: Gen
Rank: C
Chakra Nature: Katon
Effect: Offense or Defense
Description: The user will exhale a smokescreen that is initially harmless. If the opponent inhales or smells the smoke, the Genjutsu begins. The opponent will begin to cough uncontrollably leaving openings in their body due to their uncontrollable muscle spasms.
Requirements: Katon Element
Range: Medium (Ten Meters)

Name of Jutsu: Hitoriaruki - Walking Alone
Classification: Gen
Rank: B
Chakra Nature: Katon
Effect: Offense or Defense
Description: The user will exhale a smokescreen that is initially harmless. If the opponent inhales or smells the smoke, the Genjutsu begins. The opponent will feel a burning sensation on their feet and they will realize that they are standing on hot coals. As they look around the entire area is filled with hot coals. This causes the opponent to feel false pain leaving them to have to jump constantly, making it incredibly difficult to preform taijutsu in most cases.
Requirements: Katon Element
Range: Medium (Ten Meters)

Name of Jutsu: Suro-Nieru - Slow Cooked
Classification: Gen
Rank: B
Chakra Nature: Katon
Effect: Offense or Defense
Description: The user will use a normal Katon Ninjutsu as a simple distraction, the goal is to cause the opponent to feel the heat of the technique. If the technique was close enough the user will activate the genjutsu. The opponent will begin to feel the heat from the technique all over their body and they'll begin to feel incredibly hot. They begin to feel as if they are being slow cooked in an oven causing them to sweat profusely wearing them out faster than usual.
Requirements: Katon Element
Range: As far as the prerequisite Katon Ninjutsu is

Name of Jutsu: Haininaru - Reduced to Ashes
Classification: Gen
Rank: B
Chakra Nature: Katon
Effect: Offense or Defense
Description: The user will use a normal Katon Ninjutsu as a simple distraction, the goal is to cause the opponent to feel the heat of the technique. If the technique was close enough the user will activate the genjutsu. The opponent will feel the heat of the technique and begin to see their skin burn from where they felt the heat. The burn will spread across their body. Then they will begin to see those burns turn black and crisp as their body begins to turn to ash as they slowly fall apart in cinders. Once the genjutsu is over, the victims will will be broken or they will be incapacitated if they are below the Jounin Rank.
Requirements: Katon Element
Range: As far as the prerequisite Katon Ninjutsu is

Name of Jutsu: Hikau - Fire Eater
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Chakra Nature: Katon
Effect: Defense
Description: The user will make a tiger seal and exhale deeply. Once the flame comes within range they will being to inhale through their mouth. In this vacuum they begin to suck in all fire within 10 meters of them. Once the fire is consumed, a smoke screen will disperse through the user's nose and mouth.
Requirements: Katon Element
Range: Medium (Ten Meters)
Other: This technique can only be used to consume fire techniques up to an B Rank level.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 2:46 am


Name of Jutsu: Raiton: Duiru KuroiKiba (Lightning Release: Drilling Black Fang)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: A - Rank
Chakra Nature: Raiton
Effect: Both, if used correctly.
Description: A simple, yet effective technique, the user performs a small string of handsigns. They mold their chakra into spikes and force it into their hands. Next, they slam their hands into the ground. A series of spikes then shoot out into the ground (2 if Gennin, 4 if Chuunin, 8 if Special Jounin, 16 if Jounin and 32 if Kage/Sannin) at a fast rate. When activated, the spikes shoot out of the ground, flying upward. If the user can manipulate the black lightning, they can get the lightning spikes to go wherever they please. However, it takes a major amount of energy.
Requirements: Must be taught by the user of the black lightning, Kuroi Raikiba.
Range:
Size of fangs: 2 inches.
How far upwards the fangs can go: 10 yards.
Other: Keep in mind, although it is black lightning, it has all the same traits of normal lightning. But the color will be taken advantage of in later techniques.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 2:36 pm


Scooter: I am fine with all of your jutsu except the last one. Make it only able to consume up to b rank Katon jutsu and it's accepted.

X-TMT-X: an interesting and fun technique to say the least. I'm fine with it and unless panthers has a problem with it i see none.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 5:31 pm


Name of Jutsu: Raiton: Wareme Shougekiha (Lightning Release: Chasm Shockwave)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: S - Rank
Chakra Nature: Raiton
Effect: Both, if used correctly.
Description: In order to perform this technique, there must already be a chasm in the ground. Using their black lightning, the user places their hands on the ground in front of the chasm and transfers chakra into the chasm. This creates a shockwave effect. The shockwave can be triggered whenever the user wishes. When an opponent in falling in, the user can activate the shockwave, shocking them to the point of death. But if the user decides to activate it after their enemy is already in the chasm, depending on how big the chasm is, they can trap the enemy in the chasm using the lightning. Unless they find a way to get out using the earth around them, the lightning will not deactivate until the user wishes.
Note: if they have control over the black lightning, the user can decide to lower the shockwave, slowly coming down upon a trapper enemy to shock them that way.
Requirements: Must be taught by the user of the black lightning, Kuroi Raikiba.
Range: Depends on the size of the chasm. The maximum would be 10 yards (Gennin), 20 yards (Chuunin), 25 yards (Jounin), 30 yards (Kage/Sannin), in distance across.
Other: Like I said in the last custom technique, keep in mind, although it is black lightning, it has all the same traits of normal lightning. But the color will be taken advantage of in later techniques.
The cost of A - ranked chakra for every post the technique is active.

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Panthers7
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:48 pm


Scooter Xero


Yes, the only thing I see really wrong with these jutsu's is they seem a little bit too strong. Not as them being over-powered but rather over-ranked. From Enshi -Death by smoke suffocation down to Suro-Nieru- Slow Cooked, should be C-ranked. At least that's what it seems like from your description of them. ^^ But good jutsu's. Make sure to tack off chakra for each time the Genjutsu is up. Or, put up a duration point of those techniques. ^^
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@TMT: Raiton: Wareme Shougekiha

The only think I see is, not really wrong, about this what does it take to keep the Technique after it is created?
 
PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 10:38 pm


Mk, Move each of them down a rank that you mentioned and gave them Rank E Jutsu Maintaining costs.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 7:59 am


Jutsu razz rehensile Hair
Creator: Tsukino17
Rank: C-Rank
Element: Universal
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type: Supplementary
Description: Allows the user to move thier hair like extra appendages,even grow it and shorten it at will.Use it to grab onto enemies and hold them in place. Can whip the hair at targets to knock them backwards in a similar Fashion to Jiraiya in the Naruto ultimate Ninja Storm 2 game.
Requirements: Sensory Clan
Range: 1 foot
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild? : Yes

Jutsu Name: Fire Needle Barrage
Creator: Tsukino17
Rank: B-Rank
Element: Universal
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type: Offensive
Description: This technique essentially hardens the hair on the user's head and shoots it continuously at the enemy. At the same time that Tsukino kneads the chakra needed for Fire Jutsu and fires the hair needles, She is also activating her hair roots causing the hair to grow at an accelerated rate thus making limitless rapid-fire possible. The sharpened points of the hair can turn the target's entire body into a pincushion.But these hair needles unlike the Hair senbon technique, explode when they make contact with the target due to the fire chakra molded into them. The sheer speed of this technique makes it the fastest attack with the widest range possible to Tsukino.
Requirements: Medical Nin or Sensory clan
Range: Long
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild? : No



Jutsu Name: Hair Senbon
Creator: Tsukino17
Rank: C-Rank
Element: Universal
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type: Offensive
Description: The user causes thier to harden and turn towards the enemy before firing needle shaped pieces of thier hair that are as sharp as Senbon. Cannot continually shoot like the fire needle barrage but the spikes are much larger since the size can be altered based on the desired destruction.
Requirements: None
Range: Long Range
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild? : No

Jutsu Name: Needle Jizo
Creator: Tsukino17
Rank: B-Rank
Element: Universal
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type: Offensive and Defensive
Description: This is a technique where the user encases themselves in a countless number of sharp needles, but in truth, the spikes are the user's hair. Chakra grants the strands of hair the hardness and shape of needles, endowed with a capacity to injure and kill on par with that of metallic weapons. In addition, if activated in response to an opponent's attack, it can also be used as a counter. The hair is made hard enough that it can withstand blows from certain types of weapons such as arrows . Can cause large hair spikes to grow from the hair already encased around her that can kill a target should they land on it.
Requirements: None
Range: Close to Mid
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild? : No

Jutsu Name: Wild Lion's Mane
Creator: Tsukino17
Rank: B-Rank
Element: Universal
Classification: Ninjutsu
Type: Offensive
Description: .This technique uses chakra to temporarily enhance the head's metabolism and manipulate the hair that grows longer as a result of it. There is also chakra flowing through the lengthened hair, making its hardness comparable to that of steel wire. By thickly bundling the hair, its strength is further increased, also increasing its destructive power, allowing it to smash through stone.The Hair then zips towards the enemy for a final blow. Its name may come from the fact that, as seen just before striking, it takes the shape of what resembles a lion's mouth.
Requirements: None
Range: Long
Would you like to share it with the rest of the guild? : No
PostPosted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 1:11 pm


Tsukino17




- ) One of the major things I think these assortment of techniques needs to require, is for the user to have long hair to begin with. Secondly, I don't really see the relation between some of the techniques, and the Sensory Clan. It just doesn't really fit or equate to what the Clan is about. So I would rather say that the techniques can work only for users that hold or have long hair.

- ) Prehensile Hair : Accepted. Seeing as it is comprised of only hair, it shouldn't be too hard to get out of, yet at the same time make it difficult for them to move out of it.

- ) Fire Needle Barrage: Again, I don't really see how this can truly fit for a Medical nin only to utilize or what I stated above. It truly seems more like a NInjutsu-ist based attack to say the least. Again, I believe it better to be the main requirement is to have long hair. Secondly, it should be noted that the technique does indeed take a steady cost of chakra to utilize per post. That way, we don't have a person just sitting there, releasing the technique. =^^=

- ) Hair senbon: Accepted

- ) The only real thing I want to make sure of, is that with the use of this technique, that you ensure that the character cannot move during the process of this technique, and won't be able to move until the hair is retracted.

- ) Accepted!
 

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 1:35 pm


Panthers7
Tsukino17




- ) One of the major things I think these assortment of techniques needs to require, is for the user to have long hair to begin with. Secondly, I don't really see the relation between some of the techniques, and the Sensory Clan. It just doesn't really fit or equate to what the Clan is about. So I would rather say that the techniques can work only for users that hold or have long hair.

- ) Prehensile Hair : Accepted. Seeing as it is comprised of only hair, it shouldn't be too hard to get out of, yet at the same time make it difficult for them to move out of it.

- ) Fire Needle Barrage: Again, I don't really see how this can truly fit for a Medical nin only to utilize or what I stated above. It truly seems more like a NInjutsu-ist based attack to say the least. Again, I believe it better to be the main requirement is to have long hair. Secondly, it should be noted that the technique does indeed take a steady cost of chakra to utilize per post. That way, we don't have a person just sitting there, releasing the technique. =^^=

- ) Hair senbon: Accepted

- ) The only real thing I want to make sure of, is that with the use of this technique, that you ensure that the character cannot move during the process of this technique, and won't be able to move until the hair is retracted.

- ) Accepted!


I'll edit that info in and thank you!

P.S Luckily my character does have long hair. lol
PostPosted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 6:09 pm


Tsukino17
Panthers7
Tsukino17




- ) One of the major things I think these assortment of techniques needs to require, is for the user to have long hair to begin with. Secondly, I don't really see the relation between some of the techniques, and the Sensory Clan. It just doesn't really fit or equate to what the Clan is about. So I would rather say that the techniques can work only for users that hold or have long hair.

- ) Prehensile Hair : Accepted. Seeing as it is comprised of only hair, it shouldn't be too hard to get out of, yet at the same time make it difficult for them to move out of it.

- ) Fire Needle Barrage: Again, I don't really see how this can truly fit for a Medical nin only to utilize or what I stated above. It truly seems more like a NInjutsu-ist based attack to say the least. Again, I believe it better to be the main requirement is to have long hair. Secondly, it should be noted that the technique does indeed take a steady cost of chakra to utilize per post. That way, we don't have a person just sitting there, releasing the technique. =^^=

- ) Hair senbon: Accepted

- ) The only real thing I want to make sure of, is that with the use of this technique, that you ensure that the character cannot move during the process of this technique, and won't be able to move until the hair is retracted.

- ) Accepted!


I'll edit that info in and thank you!

P.S Luckily my character does have long hair. lol
lol, your very welcome. Just edit that stuff and everything is accepted. =^^=

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 3:05 pm


Name of Jutsu: Yuurei Obake (Ghost Phantom)
Classification: Gen
Rank: D-Rank
Chakra Nature: N/A
Effect: Both
Description: At the time the jutsu is activated, a ghostly phantom will appear and distract the enemy. The appearance of the phantom will change with each scenario. This Genjutsu is weakest in a bright setting, so it will not work if the sunlight is shining. The jutsu works in the shadows, fog, mist, rain, or any other scenario that is dim and can allow for tricks of the mind to appear. The phantom will never appear to be attacking the enemy, but will speak to them or move in such a way as to be a distraction.
Requirements: A dark setting (plus the chakra to use it).
Range: 10-15 m.
Weaknesses: Sunlight, or if the enemy attacks or makes contact with the specter, then the genjutsu will fade away.
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