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 Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 4:45 pm
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 5:02 pm
LosingxMyself Kirei~ I love it, but the random red bothers me. Maybe add some purple to go with the eyes..... The Toscano Jacket one... I think it's the hat with the green eyes and the skin. It just doesn't really go. Sorry! Okay.  Got rid of the blue altogether.  I don't think it needs any purple. People don't generally wear clothes to match their eyes .___.
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 5:07 pm
Hacked~ Yes <3 So going in the favorites! Both of them!
Kirei~ The first one bothers me. Just the thing as a whole. I really think its the skin >.< I'm just weird like that.
I love the second one, but the legs seem bare. And I do! XD I'm weird like that XD
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 6:08 pm
Edit on the Nightmare item:
Hmm =/ Now I find the white overbearing.
Edit on the sash thing:
Fuu.... Not sure what I think of this one, actually =/
Edit on the Jacket:
I bet what was bothering you was the facepaint/eye/masquerade eye glow layer I used.
xD Just a guess though.
Edit on Midnight Kei:
Mm... I tried changing the black kottan bell reunion shoes for the white ones, but it made the black hose stand out a lot [Tekek's 'doesn't align' glitch] so it bothered me ^^
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 6:26 pm
I have another one The nightmare: 
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 6:42 pm
Haruhi~ I think you had it right the first time, for the first, second, and fourth. My bad. But the third one is much better. And on the second one, the only thing I don't like now is the stars and the shoes. Maybe change them to blue shoes? But the petals were a nice touch.
Hacked~ This one is much better ^.^ But it seems really simple. Try spicing it up with a background or a companion. I love companions. XD
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 7:02 pm
Talsi's Sash  Is it just me, or do the shoes seem a little off? Midnight Kei  Sorry, still a striped background, I just hate using back grounds alot of people use crying Toscano Jacket  Not completely sastisfied with the pants sad The Nightmare (Hypnos Jacket)  or  I like this one alot to, I actually got the concept from another tek tek conest using an avi similar to this one, and it won me the contest biggrin
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 7:06 pm
LosingxMyself Commonsense~ The first one is awesome. It's dark and goes with the shirt well. But the crown is bothersome.... The yellow in the second one doesn't really go with the color of the jacket. And the scarf is makes the avi a little off. You have some work to do, but it's coming along nice! I think it's the mouth that bothers me in the third one. Change it, and it'll go in the favorites ^.^ This one actually came out good! But the zebra stripe thing kind of throws me off. A  or B  Talsi's Sash The Nightmare (Hypnos Coat)
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 7:06 pm
LaVolpe~ The first one. You're right. The shoes are a tad bit off, though I couldn't tell you why XD
I like the second one, but I don't love it. I think, I think it's the eyes XD The random dash of orange doesn't look right. Try black or white eyes.
This one, is much better then the other Toscano Jacket one, but the skirt you have on her, doesn't really go. Have you tried taking the skirt off?
I love Love LOVE the first one of the Hypnos Jacket. Soooo going in the favorites!
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 7:10 pm
Commensense~ Definitely B. Yay for dark avi! It's going in the favorites ^.^
The mouth is better but the skirt and stockings/socks now bug me. Am I being picky? Please, if I'm being bad, just yell at me xD
This is MUCH better, but it seems really plain. Put something in the background or add something to her head. ^.^
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 7:32 pm
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 7:35 pm
Hacked~ Love the additions. I like the first one to best. Just let me move it to the favorites ^.^
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 7:58 pm
Toscano Jacket  Too much gold on the legs? Midnight Kei  It does look alot better 3nodding
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 8:00 pm
LaVolpe~ Mmmm. Just a bit. Maybe black or grey shoes?
Yay! I said something that actually helped! New record! XD I love this. Tis going on the favorites list XD.... This is going to be a looooooong list x.x
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 8:03 pm
LosingxMyself Commensense~ Definitely B. Yay for dark avi! It's going in the favorites ^.^ The mouth is better but the skirt and stockings/socks now bug me. Am I being picky? Please, if I'm being bad, just yell at me xD This is MUCH better, but it seems really plain. Put something in the background or add something to her head. ^.^ Thank you! You aren't being picky. It's your contest. being picky is the requirement for one who runs a contest. xd Talsi's Sash A  or B  or C  The Nightmare (Hypnos Coat) A  B  C  D 
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