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Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 6:21 pm
Kira took of his sand gourd again, relaxing as the weight seemed to just float off his shoulders. With that weight on he was overheating really fast. Kira took out a bottle of water and began to drink, drinking the whole bottle. It was okay, they had an oasis, and despite Shay's claims, it was save to drink. (1/6)
He opened up the scroll, and studied the jutsu inside. Leaf Sahdow dance. It would be a good technique for setting up powerful finisher moves and killing blows, and it would be really easy to pull off because he had just learned Leaf Spinning Wind, and the two seemed to be like sister Jutsu. (2/6)
Kira charged the dummy, and he smiled as he noticed how fast he was going. A few months ago, when he was still a weak little academy student, he would not have even considered making it here just yet, but here he was, in the blazing heat of the hidden Oasis, the Chuunin Exams just hours away, it was so exciting just thinking about it! (3/6)
Kira got close to the dummy, and dissappered as usual, using Leaf spinning wind. If this was any normal foe he was facing, he or she would be surprised and confused by the attack. Kria then added a few more movements, appearing behind, to the left, to the left again, in front, where he rose his right leg and sent the dummy flying skyward. (4/6)
The dummy's head was almsot knocked off from the force of the powerful kick, and the fabric rippled in the sunlight, straw falling like a light rain. Kira jumped up, instantly appearing behind the dummy, like it's shadow. If this was a real person, they would not be able to counter this attack. (5/6)
Still underneath the dummy in midair, Kira grabbed it with both hands, throwing it into the ground. As it landed in the sand, severly beaten up and dirty with sand, Kria came down, landed a heel kick, causing the dummy to ripple from the force of the blow. Kria walked into his tent, changing into a light white garment, a white t-shirt and light white jacket, and loose white pants. Shadow Dance Learned. (6/6)
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Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 6:47 pm
Kira was now lounging under a palm tree by the oasis, his white clothing portecting him from the sun's heat much better than before. The Gennin was slowly drinking water from the bottle, enjoying the fresh taste of the liquid. It was now time to train. (1/6)
Kira took out his next scroll, yet again another Taijutsu scroll. If he was goign to pass the Exams, he had to capitalize on one of his greatest strengths, his short range and Taijutsu skills. The next jutsu was Leaf Great Whirlwind, bound to be a helpful damaging move. (2/6)
Kira set up the dummy again, and he had tried his best in his spare time to try and fix it up, but it just wasn't sturdy. He had two more in his bag, jsut incase he broke some, which he was boudn to do. He was not wearing his Sand gourd. (3/6)
Kira began to charge at the dummy, his feet making a phish phish type sound as he gently moved the sand beneath his feet. Kira was now closing in on the dummy, and he began to focus on his attack and what msut be done. (4/6)
Kira began to jump, and he could feel himself movign at a fast rate, spinning through the air. The Attack was working! Kira kicked the dummy in the head with hsi right foot, and in the side of the torso with his left. The dummy went flying. (5/6)
Kira reset the dummy. He was going to the try the technique with his other foot. When the Gennin reached the dummy, he spun the other way, doign the same attack, but with his left foot first. Satisfied, Kira took a rest in the tent. He learned the attack (6/6)
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Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 7:48 pm
Tanzu decided to practice the Kaze Explosion. Seemed appropriate, seeming his element was wind...hand seals at the ready, he formed a Kaze clone, setting it out far away from everyone. He focused his eyes on it, muttering the words...it only disspated. (1/5)
Next attempt. He muttered the words a bit louder, but that only made it poof like a Kage Bunshin. He cursed, forming another. (2/5)
Another. This time, it made a small shovkwave among the sand, but he was still unsatisfied...(3/5)
And another. For this attempt, the shockwave reached his skin, but didn't affect him...(4/5)
Finally, the shockwave was completely succesful. However, since that he was a high chakra shinobi, it rang throughout the desert...and created a whiplash of sand on his face. He blinked, rubbing the gravel away...
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Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 8:09 pm
(( Erm. Tanzu. That's not what that jutsu does.
Kaze Bakuhatsu (Wind Explosion) Requirements: Kaze Bunshin Description: Wind is gathered with chakra into a swirling ball that is hurled towards the opponent. The blast explodes on impact, causing cuts on the target's body if a direct hit. The actual force of the explosion of the Kaze Bakuhatsu feels as if a Gouken Stage 2 Punch is hitting you. A cool down period of two posts is required before this jutsu can be used again.
I think the only reason the bunshin is required is because the formation concept is the same. I got the impression it was an exploding bunshin too, but sadly not. ))
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 8:22 pm
((...facepalm. God...agh. I don't wanna edit it, though! gonk ...))
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 4:39 am
Kira got out from under his tent, and began to train again. He would have to train hard if he was going to win. It was early morning, and Kira was in a spot with some sunlight. The boy set up a new training dummy, but this one was just a simple black punching bag. The punchign bag had red Kanji on it, similar to his gourd. The kanji on the bag read "Guts" in some places, "Training" in others, and "Pain" in some other places.(1/6)
Kira opened up the next scroll, the next and last of the Taijutsu scrolls he had brought with him. It was leaf Violent Wind, another useful attacking Taijutsu. Kira was not wearing his gourd, and instead he was trying to complete the technique without all the extra weight on to dsitract his body from the attack. This strike needed to be precise to work. If he could get thsi down, he would have a powerful counter attack and opening strike, as well as a demobilizing blow for the Exams.(2/6)
Kira charged at the dummy, picking up speed as he blasted sand out of the way, making mini craters in the ground. He was getting closer to the dummy now, and he performed a trip kick, sweeping his right leg across the bottom of the dummy. Kira hoped his attack had enough oomph. Kira felt really good. He knew he was advancing in his training, and that soon he would be able to keep up with Shayera, Tanzu, and even David, without having some fancy shadow attacks or a demon.(3/6)
Well, it didn't have enough oomph after all. Kira smashed his leg right into the training dummy, but he hit the dummy to high and not fast enough, causing him to hyper-extend his leg a little going through with the spinning finish. If he had gone too hard trying to do that, he would of hurt himself and put himself out of the exams. That would of been a stupid way ot get DQ'ed. He would never go down like that, ever.It was painful, but no lastign damage was done. After a few minutes of resting and rethinking his approach, Kira started again. (4/6)
The Gennin charged the dummy again, taking off at much faster speeds then before, confident he knew where to hit the dummy. This would be the final try and if it worked, Kira would have learned the Jutsu. Sand was flying as Kira approached the dummy, still at a breakneck speed. He added a few more movements around the dummy, jsut to add confusion. He then Performed a powerful and swift trip kick. (5/6)
The attack landed jsut how it should have, and the dummy went spinning away, almost flying through the air in an awkward position. Any ninja hit by this tehcnique and went spinning like that would not be able to make handseals or do any kidn of counter attack. They would be helpless as they flew into a wall or other object. Kira conisdered this technique now that he mastered it. It would be a better attack to use to counter approaching foes. Leaf Violent Wind had been learend.(6/6)
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 9:19 am
((Mono, you can do that with Tanzu, just lemme do this...))
Tanzu decided to train his Tai style with an add on to the normal gauntlets, Suna Tsume. Sand swirled around him, clinging to him as gauntlets, then appearing as rugged, sharp claws. Attempting a slice, the blades just faded through the wind, scattering like normal sand. (1/4)
Remaking the claws, he decided to make them a bit heavier, like normal gauntlets. Though, he misjudged the amount, so he ended up putting 200 pounds on his fists. It didn't hurt him at all, just made it awkward. (2/4)
Another remake, and closer to it. The weight was right, but he was so focused on that, he forgot to apply chakra continuously as a recycling stream...(3/4)
Finally, he was able to slash a clone without any dispersion, making it fade away...(4/4)
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 9:22 am
Shayera Nara ll Lover ll Fighter ll Die-Hard Kunoichi ll
Shayera sits up, stretching and rolling her shoulders to relax her tense muscles. I sit down for ten minutes to rest and I sleep for twelve hours, she thinks, disgusted. She unrolls a sleeping bag in the far right corner of the tent, organizing her things to the right of it, between the sleeping bag and the wall. Water bottle, food, a few extra sets of clothes, Kyodai, and her equipment holsters. She yawns, still exhausted, and goes outside to see Tanzu and Kira training, grabbing a cereal bar on her way out. "Morning, guys." She says sleepily, rubbing her eyes and taking a huge bite of breakfast. Chakra Points: 33/33 Tactical: -4 posts for learning jutsu Assassin: Disabling jutsu won’t miss on Chuunin-and-lower
Desert Shadow ll "God will punish the wicked. And before He does, I will." ll
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 9:23 am
(Guys, every jutsu paragraph has to be a good four sentences. Two liners for each paragraph will not be accepted as learning a jutsu)
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 9:31 am
Kira had finished training, and he had set up a hammock between to palm trees. He got up, and turned to Shayera and Tanzu. "Hey guys, anybody want to take one for the tema and be a victim for some Genjutsu? I need to practice some before the exams. I need to make the most otu of my bloodline ability." He said, asking for volunteers.
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 9:38 am
Shayera Nara ll Lover ll Fighter ll Die-Hard Kunoichi ll
((I'm editing them, Gregar. No worries.))
Shayera looks at Kira, silent for a moment. You've got to do it eventually, she tells herself. "I'll do it. I'm going to need to know how to deal with genjutsu for the first stage. I haven't experienced it yet and I need to." She says softly. Chakra Points: 33/33 Tactical: -4 posts for learning jutsu Assassin: Disabling jutsu won’t miss on Chuunin-and-lower
Desert Shadow ll "God will punish the wicked. And before He does, I will." ll
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 10:01 am
((As am I. Thank you for kindly correcting us.))
Kira smiled, happy that Shayera would be brave enough to allow him to test his Genjutsu. His strong point was supposed to be Genjutsu, as it was literally in his blood. The whole point of the Ranmaru bloodline was to be able to have extended mastery of Genjutsu. The Gennin took his stance, his legs shoulder width appart, his arms making the tiger handseal. Since he was not in a battle, this would be the simplest way to channel his chakra. Kira took a few deep breaths as he went to work, preparing to use his Genjutsu. (1/6)
Kira had now channeled his chakra well, and was getting ready to unleash the technique upon his teammate. it would not hurt her, of course, as it was just a mere illusion and nothing more than that, but illusions could always seem very really to the human brain, and that could cause quite a bit of panic in Shayera. This was all of course if the technique worked the first time. A lot of preparing was needed, because it would be better to go slowly now and make sure he knew the Jutsu, then to go to fast and screw it up where it counted, in battle. (2/6)
Kira now felt he was ready, and he hoped that it would work the first time, saving him a lot of trouble to do it over again. He unleashed the attack, his chakra invisible as it moved towards Shayera. She might start to feel dizzy. "Demonic Illu- GAH!" There was a huge discharge of chakra by Kira, sending him backwards. After getting up, he cursed under his breath. The Jutsu had failed, and now he would have to do it over again. Kira scowled. That was no fun. Ge got up and began to take his stance again. (3/6)
Kira was angry and dissapointed. He had thought he did everything right, he had channelled his chakras, he had focused on the jutsu. He had put the right amount of malicous intent into the Genjutsu, and he even performed the jutsu and went about everything slowly! Yet he still messed up! Kira calmed down. If he was angry, he would not be able to channel his chakra correctly. He needed to be calm, like a gently flowing river, and flexible, like the sand in the deserts where he grew up. Kira was now focused, and ready to perform again. (4/6)
Kira was in his tiger handseal stance again, channeling his chakras. He had to make this work, his teammates needed him to be at his complete best to be able to help out. He had already learned a fairly adept amount of Taijutsu and Ninjutsu, but he was severely lacking in the Genjutsu department. That's what this training was for. Kira looked a Shayera, grinning. He felt like this Jutsu was goign to work. "Okay, here goes! Try not to pass out...." Kira moved his chakra towards Shay. (5/6)
The boy could feel the chakra as it began to fulxuate around Shay, as it would now start messing with her mind, senses, and ultimately, her emotions and will. Kira now began rapidly performing the handseals for the Jutsu. Shay would now feel her vision begin to blur if she was hit, and then eventually she would black out, and after the dark would come to illusion created by her own mind. "There we go... Demonic Illusion! Viewing of Hell!" This Genjutsu would be unbreakable unless physical pain was inflicted on Shay.
((OKay, so basicly, you watch him screw up, then you get to make up the illusion shay faces.))
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 10:05 am
David GreysonSunagakure | Ichibi Host | GeninTactics | Speed | Strategy | Insanity'Such happy brats' David thought to himself as he watched them go about their training. It really was quite amusing to watch them get all happy over a successful technique. Really. They appeared to have forgotten about him, not having even looked his way in several hours now. Not that he minded, his privacy was something he had come to truly enjoy. But there was something they could do for him. "Oi." He suddenly called out, to get their attention. "Who wants to be a punching bag?" He had a few techniques he needed to get practice with, and thus far had found nobody quite to do so. There had been that one girl, now that he thought of it, but he had left town right after meeting her. Oops. Well, hopefully she could find a good training partner. If these kids didn't want to help him, well, he'd just have to start playing with that big scroll he took. [Chakra Point Total: 35/35] [Smoke Bomb Total: 5/5] [Makibishi Total: 25/25] [Shuriken Total: 15/15] [Flash Bomb Total: 5/5] "Life should be as fun as possible, who cares what other people say?" [Mission/Learning Post: ?/?] [Mission Points: 60] [ Profile]
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 10:18 am
Shayera Nara ll Lover ll Fighter ll Die-Hard Kunoichi ll
Shay feels herself drop to her knees in the sand before the world around her becomes distorted and goes completely black. Her vision comes back slowly, and she looks up to see Zephyr holding out a hand to her. She reaches up to take his hand, wondering how the hell she got on the ground. A hand comes out of nowhere and grabs Zephyr by the collar, hauling him backwards. Her eyes widen in horror as she watches her father use a jutsu to bind her head-to-toe. Her father throws Zephyr against the wall and draws a kunai, placing the sharp blade against his throat. "Get the hell out of here." Her father growls, the alcohol making his voice thick and deadly. Zephyr tells him to go to hell in that bluntly defiant voice she used to love so much. Her father throws zephyr on the floor, hitting him with a Katon jutsu that causes his body to burst into flames. Zephyr reaches towards her, pleading. "Shay, help me." He begs. She tries to scream, but no sound comes out. Her body is bound so tightly, she can't even open her mouth to scream while Zephyr burns in front of her. Her father walks over to her, grabbing her by the throat. "You should have been better, Shayera. Maybe then you could have saved him. But you're too pathetic. You can't even save yourself. You're worthless, just like your mother. And you will die, a slow and painful death, just like she did." His alcohol-soaked breath is so thick she wants to retch. His fingers dig deeper into her throat as she chokes, spots appearing in front of her eyes. Part of her vision go black as she gags. Her father slams her head viciously off of a wall and she crumples to the ground. A vicious kick to the stomach has her crumpled over, coughing up blood. "Get up, Shayera. Get up and fight for your life. If you don't, you don't deserve to live." He grabs her by the hair, snapping her head back, and sends his knee crashing into her face. She feels the right side of her jaw shatter, spitting blood. "I've never loved you. You will never be good enough to love. I wanted sons, but I got you and your sister. At least Enix was good enough. She's a medical kunoichi. She has a woman's job. You're pathetic." He hits her across the face, sending her sprawling. The trouble with this illusion is that it isn't just something her mind is making up to trick her. It's a memory from her past. Her last memory of her father before she woke up in a hospital, almost dead weeks later. Back in the oasis on Nagi Island, Shay's almost lifeless body is on its knees, sobbing freely into her hands with unfocused eyes. Chakra Points: 33/33 Tactical: -4 posts for learning jutsu Assassin: Disabling jutsu won’t miss on Chuunin-and-lower
Desert Shadow ll "God will punish the wicked. And before He does, I will." ll
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 10:21 am
((I'll do it once I finish with Kira as long as you promise not to kill me. And "that girl" Sora is on hiatus until the 18th))
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