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[RAFFLE] Kathryn McAdams/Civilian (Crit?)

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tefla

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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 5:06 pm

Thank you for the crit Mouse and Lolli.

:: goes into revision mode ::

Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 7:31 pm

July 28, 2011

Changed "What time is it Flaw" to "Forgetful"

Edited Obsessive Flaw to take out her moodiness towards her friends.

Took out "Rising Pressure" flaw for a different flaw.

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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 9:45 pm

I like the changes so far Tefla!

I know this would be more work and this isn't really a crit at all, but you had sort of been going towards Kat having strong morals towards drugs and alcohol-- Is that something that's going to show up as you RP her, and if you're inclined to do so that would make an excellent virtue. It's only being brought up because that seemed to be a thought you had and it intriqued me a little.

Worth a thought maybe?
You know I suck at actually buckling down and RPing, but I am so glad you're getting back into the shop and can't wait to see her all finalized and ready for Destiny City.

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 3:17 pm

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UNF you have no idea how hard you win for giving her a thin-skinned / defensive flaw. That's just plain awesome.

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