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 Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 6:20 pm
Eh, dropping writing club. But I'm still writing nonstop anyway so it's not like it matters.
All you do is lie.
I sit here &try not to cry.
Only one boy has forced me to
&I don't plan on letting it be two.
You know, I went through a lot fo crap
Just for taking you back.
Never did you see the inside of me.
It's torn up &burned.
My heart has been broken each time I watch you turn.
My feelings mean nothing to you.
That's nothing new.
Just please don't forget:
I haven't stopped loving you yet.
This one is called 'My Heart has Shattered....'
I sit back and remember all of the times
You told me you loved me but you weren't mine
My mistake was believing you.
Now I see it couldn't possibly be true.
But everytime those wrods touch me I think
'Maybe? Could he? Could he really?'
Though it's a silly wish I really do.
Things have changed between me and you.
Instead of lying to me you now lie to her.
It's funny considering she called herself my best friend.
Just another lie. Now do you see?
Someone told me forecer and a day.
I suppose all I'm doing is awaiting that day.
Somehow I don't think that it will come though.
Rain, shine, hail, snow...
Through all of thesse I'll wait for you.
One day I hope to get that one last kiss.
That's just another silly wish.
Even after all of this you do not see.
Love is al you shall recieve from me.
Yes, my bitterness is deep,
But that's only because you left me.
The pain slowly seeps through so you can see.
It hurts but there's nothing left to say.
I suppose now I'll say goodbye. Good day.
There are a bunch more, but I sort of want feed back before I post them.
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Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 5:31 pm
i say this poem has a very unique style to it
hehe i mite have to say this
but ur poem mite be better than mines
but can u read mines? =D
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Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 5:39 pm
I would love to as soon as I get the time. Life is very hetic this week. Probably I'll be gone all weekend. Monday maybe I can try? Or tomorrow if I'm lucky? Anyways, would you mind telling me what you mean by 'unique style'?
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Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 12:36 pm
Guess who hasn't posted for like a month? Yes me. Bet I wasn't missed though. Anyway, here's a few. Hope you like them.(:
You see the rain you see the sun
You see the starts in the sky
You see the hope and you see the love
Just not the rain flowing down from above.
You hear my wish you hear my cry
You see the tears filling my eyes.
The shadows tthey come from all around.
They take shape among the crowd.
The people feel it the people see
All that's displayed in front of me.
You hear their voices &you hear them scream.
Now if only you can see what they view as a dream.
The pain it fills my heart and sould
Because all you want is to be left alone.
If I could I'd tell you this.
The shadows return. Hear the angry cat hiss?
Give me the chance &you can see.
Give me the love I desperately need.
Be the light in my dark divide.
Fill the hole that's gaping inside.
OhmyBuddha that's an old one. Whatever though. I'm just working my way forward in my poetry book so I guess they'll all be pretty old for a while and then I can post even older ones.! : D
I watch as people pass me by.
I see the hurt hiding in their eyes.
They know pain &they know love.
They hear the voice from high above.
They have watched the ones they care for leave.
&So they wander from sea to sea.
Their hope deminishes as they breathe
Because never again shall they have thee.
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My hope deminishes like all the rest.
Take this &leave: you have my best.
Watch the shadows come alive.
The ground will shake &some will die.
Never can you compare to them.
Yes, they're wrong but you too have sinned.
So in this last minute of the hour
I pray for some almighty power.
Perhaps with that then you will see
How nice it sounds saying "you &me."
Okay now the one I'm about to type is like my all time favorite that I've written:
I see your smile &I see your face
&I remember all of those days
With the sun shining &stars aligning
&I wonder why it had to change
&If again it will be that way.
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