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 Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 5:41 pm
Avatar - The Untold Chapter
Chapter 4: Dural and his Minions
A large boom echoed through the forest. Aura and her friends ran to see what the commotion was about, but then a large fireball was hurled at them. Otaku save Aura from the attack. Then all of a sudden, Dural, Commander Hou and Lyra were upon them. A battle raged on. Otaku bravely orders everyone onto Appa, while attacking Dural. Aura jumps on the enemies while her cousin and Sokka bring Lyra down to her knees. Commander Hou dodges Otaku’s hurling rock balls and everyone uses this distraction to escape on Appa. “They’re getting away!” Hou shouted to Dural. Dural throws fire balls at Appa’s tail but then Desislav came out and attacked him. Wide eyed at his servant, Dural attacked Desislav. Commander Hou shot out at the Bison, but purposely missed as she wondered whether they’re on her side or not. Lyra notes Hou’s act.
The Bending Brigade stared down at the man who had saved them, wondering what would happen next. Dural ordered Hou to go after the Bison and not miss again. He then orders Lyra to kill Desislav, which she does with pleasure.
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 5:49 pm
Avatar - the Untold Chapter
Chapter 5: Past Dreams
Desislav watches with horror as Catherine screams at him. “What have you done?” she cried, kneeling over her dead husband. Desislav backed away, horrified, but fire soon engulfed his hands and were aimed - At Catherine.
Desislav woke up, screaming Catherine’s name. He then realised that he was not in the field and he was healed of his fatal wounds. An old man approached Desislav, explaining that his sister in law found him and brought him here. He then explains that he has a friend from the Northern Water tribe that healed Desislav’ wound. The old man said that his name is Iroh and Desislav introduces himself respectably.
Iroh asks if Desislav is still a bounty hunter and Desislav explains what happened. Iroh then says that Princess Zerafina is not dead, as it is believed she is, and that she will come to the throne with the Avatar’s help. Desislav ponders this statement and then Iroh says, “Now, will you like some tea?”
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 6:06 pm
Avatar - The Quest for Zuko's Mother
Chapter 1: The Quest
Katara and Aang walk through the gardens of the palace. Aand convinces Toph to help pack for the journey ahead. At first, Toph is hesitant but agrees. Zuko paces back and forth, worried about the outcome of the journey. Katara tells Aang to leave Zuko alone, he needs time. They pack all of the supplies on Appa, knowing that Zuko didn’t care what form of transportation they used, as long as they got the quest done. Then a voice loudly shouts . . . “AANG!” Katara and Aang run over to Sokka, thinking that something was wrong, but it soon turns out that he simply found his space sword. Aang and Katara then explain to Sokka about their new quest. Sokka doesn’t take this information seriously, knowing that Ursa murdered the firelord so that Ozai could rule. Momo stops his blabbering and Toph laughs at his stupidity, asking whether he was kicked of Kyoshi by Suki. She then turns to hide her ever growing feelings for Sokka. She respected Suki of course, but she couldn’t help these feeling overcome her.
Toph wonder what’s taking his ‘lordliness’ so long and walks away to find Zuko. Sokka waves his sword in the air and asks her to tell Zuko he found his sword. Toph yanks open the doors to Zuko’s room and ask what was taking him so long. “Ready when you are!” Zuko heard Aang call and rushed down the stairs, Toph struggling to keep up. When in the court yard, Toph yells at Zuko asking what the whole running was about. Zuko replies angrily, “You don't know what it's like don't knowing where your mother is." Katara steps in between the two, not wanting anyone to fight.
Toph earthbends Zuko into the nearest pond. She then shouts at Zuko, calling him an ungrateful jerk. She argued that he had friends that were willing to help him and that some of them had suffered worse than him. Toph storms off, asking for someone to fetch her when Zuko had his act together.
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 8:36 pm
This is a really great idea... Thank you!
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 5:10 pm
Avatar Serik This is a really great idea... Thank you! No problem! Aww. Thanks you guys! now I feel good 'cause I'm contributing something to this Guild.
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 5:55 pm
Now everything makes sense in a quick, easy read!
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 1:51 pm
lol, yea.
I think this is such a great idea, that I'm going to use it in other places. lol, if its okay! X3
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Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 5:19 pm
Dramatic Rose lol, yea. I think this is such a great idea, that I'm going to use it in other places. lol, if its okay! X3 Sure that's okay. I don't think anyone wants a jumbled up world full of crazy ideas that don't link to anything at all.
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:58 pm
Look guys, I'm having trouble keeping up with some of the role plays. I can handle the three role plays I am currently keeping track of (The untold chapter, the quest for Zuko's mother, and the anti-avatar chronicles) but the couple of other role plays I haven't even looked at yet!
So if you find that you really want to put chapter summaries for the other role plays, feel free to post it here!
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 5:20 pm
Avatar - The Anti-Avatar Chronicles
Chapter 1: Destroyed
Viko and Syra walked through the ruins of the latest Avatar’s destructions. Anger gripped them and confusion swarmed them. Feng notes the destruction and asks how powerful this new Avatar is. Syra states that he is very powerful - no one should underestimate him - but he can’t control it. Feng thinks that a battle against the Avatar would be a great fight but Viko is convinced that they stand no chance against him. Aria lands into the clearing and greets them with bright eyes. Viko doesn’t understand Aria, how she could be so joyful and happy when the world around them is crumbling by the Avatar’s hands. Aria questions why they are still wandering around the ruins - there were no survivors. Viko admits that he’s had a lot on his mind and Aria agrees. Feng fights back against Viko and Aria’s down pleas explaining that the quicker they find he avatar, the quicker everything goes back to normal. Viko says that the Avatar is still in the city and they need to get out. But he wonders how.
Feng suggests the tunnels underneath the city but Viko casts the idea away, as the tunnels have been ‘plugged up ever since Avatar Aang was alive’. Aria suggests that she could find an exit. Viko then has an idea and uses his water bending to break the wall. He then fell to his knees exhausted. Aria is unsure of how everyone could get out and the Avatar would be coming quickly - he would’ve heard the rumbling. The group decides that their only chance is to run.
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 5:29 pm
Avatar - The Anti-Avatar Chronicles
Chapter 2: Escaped
They start on their way to the nearest city. Aria scouts ahead with Anil by her side. Feng starts creating a smoke cover. Syra asks of anyone was an earthbender. Aria and Feng create a cover for them and Syra pushes everyone onwards. They all run through Feng’s smoke cover. Three hours later, they run into the forest and decide to camp for the night. Feng decides to make some tea and Viko suggests that Syra creates a fire. But Syra explains that she needs wood first. Aria asks Feng if there’s Jasmine. Feng admits he doesn’t know and announces that it was time for a taste test. Viko and Syra hunt in the forest for wood. Aria sits down and combs Anil’s fur. Viko cuts down a branch using his water bending and he and Syra return to camp.
They threw the wood down and ask around for a bowl. Aria says that no one has a bowl and Feng sighs saying that ‘this is why we need an earthbender’. Viko asks Feng why he wanted to make tea with nothing to make it in and Aria giggles. Feng apologises, admitting he wasn’t thinking. Viko asks why they were all camping together. He explained that he and Syra were hunting down the avatar for revenge. Feng explains that he received orders from the firelord to hunt the avatar down (?) . Aria’s smile faltered as Viko asks why she was here. Aria explains that it was a long story.
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 5:52 pm
Avatar - The Anti-Avatar Chronicles
Chapter 3: Past and Present
Aria explains that eight years ago, she and her mother, Aura, went to visit her grandmother, Katara. Aria was in the middle of telling her little adventures when screams broke out outside. They all went to have a look to see what was happening and there he was; Kiota marching down their block. He smashed into their house and fought Katara and Aura. They put up a good fight, but it wasn’t enough. They unfortunately died. Aria was left with burns up her leg. She didn’t want to take out revenge on Kiota, she simply wanted to confront him.
Meanwhile . . . Kiota stood surrounded by his allies. He asked them what their goal was. Ember suggested ‘Victory!’. Kiota shouts that she’s wrong and earthbends her up into the air. Kiota challenges someone else to guess. Kunikida guesses destruction. Kiota says ‘basically’ and blasts his companion into the air. Kunikida lands on his feet.
Aria continues to explain her past. Anil was the only one left, other than her, that was why she carried him around everywhere.
Meanwhile . . . Rose walked by her companions and asks Kiota if they could attack the next city. She wanted to cause more destruction and the thought of good guys living was . . . ‘ick’ to her. She was the grand-daughter of Azula and craved to put the firelord in his place. Kiota states that the fire nation was an interesting target and asks for the opinion of the rest of his gang. The all agree, Ember especially as she didn’t want to be blasted 10ft into the air. Rose rolled her eyes at their forced answer and walks away, saying that the earth kingdom was such a dump. She kicked a piece of broken pottery on her way out.
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 2:57 pm
I think it is useful if I say so myself !
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 3:39 pm
I know spirit guide hasn't been going for a while, but once it does, will you update that too?
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Posted: Fri May 28, 2010 4:47 pm
The Quest for Zuko's Mother Continued:
Zuko apologizes to Katara, who had been watching, and retreated to his room. He thought about his mother, and then Toph punched in his door. They made amends, and Zuko became suprisingly excited to leave. Everyone was slightly puzzledby the interaction.
Sokka remembered the man who had found his space sword, a guy named Hyhm. He was a relic traveller, and asked only one thing from Sokka in return for his sword; to meet Fire Lord Zuko.
The rest of the group was getting antsy to leave, and Sokka's request from Hyhm was cut off. It would have to wait for now.
The gang finally packed up, and seemed pretty light-hearted, and flung a few jokes at Sokka. Zuko came out, with not one, not two, but three bags. Finally the group was off on another adventure!
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