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i love all the thing u have shared so far and am i greedy to say i want more????
well here is a poem im coming up with on the spot i hope u like it

LOOK AT ME

tried hard not to drift asleep
but the rain was so musical
it reminded me of the happy days
the days you had a smile
days you stopped and asked about my day
i miss thoses days
i miss the real you

sitting crying to myself
cause you left me here to die
people run their tests
the say nothing is wrong
but you never want to listen
so you send me back

i dont need their test to say what is wrong
i know what is wrong
you
you use to welcome me home with open arms
now you turn aways at the sight of me

do i really look that ugly to you father?
so ugly you dont want to ever look
i know it pains you to look at me father
i know i look like her
i know how much you loved her
but please just look at me
before you send me back look at me
your daughter
not your mother

i still used alot of words but i thought i would try with a topic close to home sooo i did that it is still not as great as ur work but hey im only 14

idk like 16 maybe even 18 idk
i dont mean to sound like u is old or any thing im srry if i did but u just write like u have been doin it longer than me

i love it srry i dont have any thing to write right now but i looked in my journal and found some old ones i wrote that is good u should check em out