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 Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 10:02 pm
Haha, not at all! Crits are here for a reason.
I can see what you mean. I'll tone down Shayne's hobbies so it doesn't seem so OMGAMAZING and time-consuming, because Shayne likes having free time too. xD
And sadly, I only have a bit of theater experience. Front of Housing, anyone? xD
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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 11:00 am
I thumbs up the changes. It sounds a lot more realistic, to me. Ha ha, I was makeup crew chief and a performer in high school. But I had friends who did that. <3
I’m really loving all the detail you put into everything, though. It definitely helps in picturing her as a character. Then again, you’re good at putting in a lot of detail, so it’s not surprising. I’m especially curious about seeing her in an RP, though I guess that’s not possible at the moment. Ha ha. I wonder what will happen when she runs into someone who just… doesn’t find her very amusing at all… or someone who doesn’t have any sense of humor, or at least not the same kind of humor she’s used to.
I like Hermes’s attack with the thickening mist. Is there a Senshi of Fog? “This fog is as thick as pea soup!” Er, anyway. I was curious to see why you chose to use snakes for her attacks. Snakes/ a snake is associated to Athena in Greek mythology, rather than Hermes, so I was just wondering if you had a reason behind it.
Edit: AB+ or AB-? biggrin
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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 4:06 pm
I like the FoH crew at my school. We order pizza while the play is going on. xDb
Oh, thank you for the compliment! <3 If people don't find Shayne amusing, she'll either tone it done (if it's a lot of people) or sort of like, put up with them/subtly ignore them if it's just a person or two. c: As for someone with a different sense of humor, she'd quit the jokes. rofl.
Well, the main difference between fog and mist is that fog is thicker, so . . . xD Anyways, no I don't think there is.
There is, actually! I got the snakes from Hermes' caduceus, which is two snakes surrounding a rod.
rofl. AB+ xD
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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 4:43 pm
*facepalm* That's right... I was thinking of Asclepius at first and got really confused. He only has one snake, Hermes has two with the wings. That makes sense.
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