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Kiiyashi

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 5:35 am


Hiro Devoncroix of Antov
-smiles at your Lets eat grandma!-

((It was clear enough and someone should use the inclearity to their advantage since I didnt put a weakness and what do you mean how did I do it its a jutsu????you do the hand signs use your chakra to form the wolves. Next you can throw and stab the kunai into a wolf making it explode Throw then it stabs into the wolf causing it to explode throw+Kunai+stabbed into wolf=Explosion.


((Clear enough that you had suddenly summoned a massive amount of shadow wolves, something that should be beyond genin level? Not how you did the jutsu, how you had enough power to do so. Something like "Drawing power from the demon wolf inside him" or something random like that, just so long as it is a) believable, b) grammatically correct and c) makes sense.

Confusion is not a weapon to be used while roleplaying. Ingenuity is. Having literate posts so that your opponent knows exactly what's going on helps make the roleplay easier for everyone.

Another example being:
Kiiyashi kicks Hiro.
Now, this one can be confusing, you know I am kicking you, but where, how hard, what type of kick?

Kiiyashi dashes towards his foe and leaps into the air, spinning around as he attempted to fly kick Hiro in the chest.

Now with this one, you could step aside, parry, block, take advantage of the fact that I am in the air. Because now you know exactly what is going on, you can now counter with perfect clarity and continue the roleplay!))
PostPosted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 8:43 am


((OK, I think I've got this all figured out. First, I'd like to just say that I am extremely busy. That means that I don't have time to read everybody's profile, just the ones I'm RPing with. So, Hiro, I didn't know the details you had for your character until I looked at it today. It didn't take long for me to notice how overpowered it was.

The main problem is that you're using a tailed beast which is a no-no. By doing that it's like you're copying Naruto. Also, the story about your people dying and just you and your older brother remaining makes it look like you're copying Sasuke, too. The first rule on the homepage says not to make a clone of Sasuke; that doesn't mean clone Sasuke and Naruto and mix them into one character.

You also have too many elements. Since you're a genin you should be using mainly non-elemental moves and one, maybe two elements. You're using all of them which isn't fair. Oh, and all the moves you have listed are really powerful, except the Genin Twist which I like (it's funny). Remember that you're just a Genin.

Also, you haven't been doing this longer than I have. Don't make claims about things you don't know anything about. I cannot stand people who merely assume things like that; it's arrogant and disrespectful. Also, how long you've been role playing is irrelevant. "Quality over quantity." Just because you have experience, that does make you good; being good makes you good. Example: White Water Lilly came in here with no experience and she is one of the best RPers I have ever met. You can't just jump too conclusions, you need to know what you're talking about.

The next broken rule: flaming. I know you will argue with me, but you both were flaming at one point. For your argument to be valid and taken seriously, you must stick to the argument and the argument alone. Never insult a person when you debate something, it only leads to a fight. I know Kiiyashi caught himself one of the times he did it; he apologized to me. But you both need to apologize to each other for your behavior.

On to the next debate, you would not be able to flash jump out of that attack. Flash jumping is merely moving extremely fast for a short distance. That does not mean the user becomes intangible; he would have just ran into a wolf and killed himself. The only way to dodge would be to go up or down which would require earth or air powers which many people do not have. There are other ways to get out of it, but those moves are too advanced for Genin and Akio knew that.

Akio, I just want to say that you are awarded with brownie points, congratulations! You did a very good job by politely asking for clarification and avoiding this argument. You're showing a good amount of self control which is a very important characteristic, especially when role playing. I am very pleased with you, good job.

My opinion about the weakness description is actually on Hiro's side. You shouldn't tell people how to defeat your move. All that's required is a full description of what your RPC did that is understandable to your opponent. The counter should be figured out by the defender, not told to him. A battle like that would be extremely boring and pointless.

I think that covers all the arguments brought up while I was gone. I hope everything's clear now. Hiro and Akio, you may continue the fight if you want to but I can understand if you'd rather not. Feel free to ask me any questions, I'm just here to help.))

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 11:10 pm


((Yeah, sorry bout that...

For the description I mean describing it well enough so that they know enough about what is going on, like my example not writing something like "Kiiyashi charged at Hiro, a flaming sword of chakra in his right hand. Hiro would be decimated unless he used a water jutsu."))
PostPosted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:32 am


((So Are we going to continue or restart the fight, or will this topic be deleted))

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 3:29 am


((It's up to you guys.))
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