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 Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:25 am
LOL, I know, right?! burning_eyes
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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 3:30 am
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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 10:19 pm
And chapter 9 is online alsooo.... Workin' on the 10th.. xd
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 3:12 am
You're aliiiiiiiiive~! surprised
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 6:34 am
Chapter 10 is ready, but I can't post in on the guild because is very x-rated... xd VERY!
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:03 am
Gaaahhh! gonk I keep starting it, but I can't finish. I just don't have enough info on Assassin's Creed... xp I'm afraid I'll have trouble keeping track of the characters, and all..? sweatdrop crying
but from what I see here... eek wow, you write fast. I wish I could write that fast xd
I'll try to finish it...but I really want to know more background on it first..? xd
I have bad experience with reading fics from fandoms I don't know about sweatdrop I end up confused and mixing it all up. I keep going back to previous chapters 'coz I don't get what's going on sweatdrop I don't know why it still happens, no matter how AU... gonk crying sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:11 am
niu shen Gaaahhh! gonk I keep starting it, but I can't finish. I just don't have enough info on Assassin's Creed... xp I'm afraid I'll have trouble keeping track of the characters, and all..? sweatdrop crying but from what I see here... eek wow, you write fast. I wish I could write that fast xd I'll try to finish it...but I really want to know more background on it first..? xd I have bad experience with reading fics from fandoms I don't know about sweatdrop I end up confused and mixing it all up. I keep going back to previous chapters 'coz I don't get what's going on sweatdrop I don't know why it still happens, no matter how AU... gonk crying sweatdrop Hey niu shen. No, no worry about it. You can read it without the knowledge of the game. I constructed the action and the surrounding in order for people not to know the AC action. Is totally independent from the game. It only has a few of its characters. Ezio, of course, Leonardo (but that is in history too) and Ezio's uncle, Mario, at one point. smile The only thing is, some characters are invented, some existed in real history, like some places I used. smile
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:52 pm
Nyoukai Chapter 10 is ready, but I can't post in on the guild because is very x-rated... xd VERY! LOL. xd I really want to read your fanfic, Nukey. But I can't bring my innocent mind to process all that info at once. Haha. xd xd xd xd
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 4:26 pm
I've been meaning to read this for the last few days, but with this cold and working 10pm-6am, I don't have a lot of waking hours, haha. I've read the first 2 chapters and I like it! I'll finish up soon. =P
So yeas, very good job so far <3
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 6:59 pm
Nyoukai niu shen Gaaahhh! gonk I keep starting it, but I can't finish. I just don't have enough info on Assassin's Creed... xp I'm afraid I'll have trouble keeping track of the characters, and all..? sweatdrop crying but from what I see here... eek wow, you write fast. I wish I could write that fast xd I'll try to finish it...but I really want to know more background on it first..? xd I have bad experience with reading fics from fandoms I don't know about sweatdrop I end up confused and mixing it all up. I keep going back to previous chapters 'coz I don't get what's going on sweatdrop I don't know why it still happens, no matter how AU... gonk crying sweatdrop Hey niu shen. No, no worry about it. You can read it without the knowledge of the game. I constructed the action and the surrounding in order for people not to know the AC action. Is totally independent from the game. It only has a few of its characters. Ezio, of course, Leonardo (but that is in history too) and Ezio's uncle, Mario, at one point. smile The only thing is, some characters are invented, some existed in real history, like some places I used. smile I'll try to read it as soon as I can 3nodding xd
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 11:05 pm
Ok, so... I've made a MISTAKE while writing!!! Those who read the story will see that I always talk about the SFORZA's "dinasty". In the second chapter and few others I even mentioned FRANCESCO SFORZA.
Indeed he was the first Duke of Milan as a Sforza, but, I placed the action in the year of 1482 and historically the man died in 1466. Since I respected so much of the time's events and everthing, yeah this is A MISTAKE!!! That serves me well for not reading his life, just Milan's history. Anyhoo, I start the documentation and even his son Galeazzo Maria Sforza, dies in 1476... assassinated! Has was a tyran... Movin' on...
But lucky! He's son came to reign Milan, the Duke Gian Galeazzo Sforza, who was a boy, buuuut, he also was the nephew of Ludovico Sforza, another of Francesco's sons, with other woman who could not rule because of that "title")! But he was the "ruler in the dark" since Gian was pretty young. Funny, because Ludovico was Da Vinci's patron too while the artist was in Milan. So, I replaced Francesco with Gian, the story doesn't change, it's the same, just a name changed!
So, my point is, THE SFORZA DINASTY remains, but If you see somewhere FRANCESCO SFORZA, please tell me so I can change it! Sorry again for the inconvenience and sorry that just after 10 chapters (well 12, another two are ready) I saw my mistakes! I hope didn't confuse you so bad *shame*! Sorry again! Promise "nebur" to happen again! *pokes eyes out*
Sorry! Gomen! Mi dispiace! Je suis désolé! Scuze!
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:03 am
OMG!! Nukeleous, I'm sorry. I haven't been on long enough to be here and read all these posts. gonk
I have a lot to read but can't right now. I'm busy reading a bunch of manuals that I need to finish before Wednesday. I'll see to it that I'll read those chapters as soon as I can.
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 10:55 am
Chapter 11 is online on deviantART, but not on the guild because of its X-Rated content. smile
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 1:44 pm
Ok guys, I posted in the guild the Chapter 10 and 11, but only the safe parts, not X-rated for the kids here. Also you can find the complete chapter 12 in the guild too...
For everything that is missing you can go on my deviantART account, is in my signature and "corrup" your minds there... blaugh burning_eyes
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 11:21 pm
OK, so I've read the Assassin's Creed fan fiction, from dA, because I am a sucker for YAOI and what you wrote is just, WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!! The... "censored" parts are... -=faints=-... OMG! I SOOO LOVE IT! WRITE, WRITE, WRITE!
And I can't believe it, you put everything in context, in real history, I've checked!!! burning_eyes burning_eyes burning_eyes Impressive... I am so curious about the... girl... and her reaction to... Ezio and Leonardo and... what will happen to the Duke... -=screams=-
Guys, just OMIGOD!!! You must read it, is just amazing! I swear!!! heart
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