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 Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:18 am
The first thing I see is that I just love the reds. They match so nicely. You need some around the neck because the torso is kind of screaming,"Put red on me now please!" The blues are iffy. I see two shades of blue that I guess kinda look alike if you're looking at it fast. You should fix that ;]. You can just remove that neck ribbon and change the shirt to something that matches the other blues you have. You could use that night jewel thing you have as a neck ribbon as the hair piece because god knows you need more blue on that big red head you have. Now we shall move on to the whites. They don't all match. Some are lighter and some are darker. Try and make it uniform. Oh and I recommend that you remove that clown stuff on your face asap.
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:37 am
0_0' I'm almost afraid to post here...
Rate me please!
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:18 am
Carpe Lunam 0_0' I'm almost afraid to post here... Rate me please! Well many things on this avatar need some fixing. First, you need to add more of that golden orange on the torso and legs. Next if you skin is blue you should have a little blue in the hair, like a hair pin or something. Like basically this can be summed up by saying that if you put a color on your avatar balance it out throughout the avatar. It just seems like you tried to match the skin. and tail. Distribution is key <3.
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:32 am
Defenestrate Windows Xanitrix Tear apart my current~
I wanna do the arena soon.
: ) I never liked the blessings. They make the avatar so unbalanced. I mean you have way too much brown on it now and the black is added so randomly. Basiclly three things here match. The greens-and even that is kinda off.-, The blessing and the superior form, and the whites. And when I say they match that is it. There is very little balance to them. Not that you could. It isn't you fault its the item you used. Maybe theirs a back item you could use to help a little? I like it though and I think the arenas will take to it nicely. Good luck and junk :]
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:35 am
Defenestrate Windows -YanGelus- what do you think or my avi :3 i called it 'golden sexiness' I think the golds on this avatar at all over the place. Not one of them matches another. You also did not balance this out at all. The wings you have are so gigantic it is quite the eye sore. Speaking of eyes, I like the eyes to match the rest of the avatar. You lack blue any where. I mean honestly it does an all around very poor job of matching. From a OCD matching stand point this is not very good. I am sorry if I am being mean. Please don't think I am just being a jerk <3. I am just rating you <33. Maybe if you lost the wings, added white anklets (silver laurel) and added gold to the top it would look a little more even. Or you could incorporate a bit of blue?
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:38 am
Defenestrate Windows exel marudashi >W< i am loving defe's comments... *goes look for an avi to submit* i like yours too razy but she is SO specific i just love it XD Well lets start this rate off correctly. I am a guy. I have the p***s to prove it. And no I am not gay.-I get this all the time.- Moving on to your avatar. Your avatar has three different shades of gold. You have dark gold-the head band-, lighter gold-the jacket and the gold sparkles-, and then lightest gold-the leggings-. I don't know if you did that for a reason or not. From a matching stand point it is not pretty. Another thing is that there is no white by the feet. That bothers me. Now lets move on to the tea cup. I know many of you guy in this guild love tea cups. Well the Dappy Dandy one doesn't fit this avatar. I can see the red on it and it really sticks out to me. Also, as I have said before, Eyes should match the avatar. And finally, You show off your skin tone. If you do that please show it on other parts of the avatar. I know most of you will fine that really really picky... But that is what I am. Learn to love it. It is a cute avatar though. Lemme see that skin uhn tiss uhn tiss uhn tiss oh... sorry Um I like it, I don't think you made it to match but you should add more hints of red ahh those eyes!
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:41 am
Defenestrate Windows ms froog ooh, rate me Raz and Defe please heart Well first off, the first thing I notice is that the blacks don't match. They are many different shades of black. I would have liked to see them match a whole lot better. Next we will move on to the whites. For the most part they match well. The headband does get darker on the sides. Also you did an ok job matching the blues. Balance on the other hand is another story. You should have more than just a small flower hair pin to attribute to the blue on your head. Just try and use the color proportionally. If you have a pico urn, theres a hat that would help with the blue on the head. And cover up some of the bluish black hair. But like I said in another thread, I really like this avatar. Cause I know your not the biggest fan of matching tones.
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:44 am
Defenestrate Windows The first thing I see is that I just love the reds. They match so nicely. You need some around the neck because the torso is kind of screaming,"Put red on me now please!" The blues are iffy. I see two shades of blue that I guess kinda look alike if you're looking at it fast. You should fix that ;]. You can just remove that neck ribbon and change the shirt to something that matches the other blues you have. You could use that night jewel thing you have as a neck ribbon as the hair piece because god knows you need more blue on that big red head you have. Now we shall move on to the whites. They don't all match. Some are lighter and some are darker. Try and make it uniform. Oh and I recommend that you remove that clown stuff on your face asap. Maybe remove the blue vest all together? I <3 the reds too. so vibrant I like the face, its cute n-n
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:46 am
Defenestrate Windows Carpe Lunam 0_0' I'm almost afraid to post here... Rate me please! Well many things on this avatar need some fixing. First, you need to add more of that golden orange on the torso and legs. Next if you skin is blue you should have a little blue in the hair, like a hair pin or something. Like basically this can be summed up by saying that if you put a color on your avatar balance it out throughout the avatar. It just seems like you tried to match the skin. and tail. Distribution is key <3. I love love love the colors. They are so unique I don't think the jacket is necissary. find something that matches the tail hair well and put it there?
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 11:12 am
k.k.razy I like the face, its cute n-n
i like the face too, specially the clown nose, so i guess i wont change it :s
as for the balance, i know the head could use a little more blue, but i wont change the torso suit. i think its not that bad xD
thans anyway def ^^ it's a pleasure reading your comments
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 3:34 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:09 pm
Oh my! XD i didn't meant to submit this avatar but thanks for the comments lol, and yes Mr. Defe, i read your sigy so i knew you where a guy XD
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:33 pm
♦ ♣ ♥ ♠
Rates for Daypaw?
I like to know what I can fix :3
♦ ♣ ♥ ♠
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 7:43 am
Thank you very much. =) I'll try to make the changes.
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 12:58 pm
Rate this tektek please? (Would it be alright to get a rate from both of you? hehe)  [It was better until I found out most of it didn't layer on gaia. . . arggg. gonk ]
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