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 Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 5:11 pm
Hey Syu!
I have to say he's an adorable guy. I really enjoy your comparisons to summer and the east and the sync that Zoisite shares with Finn. Childish but still loyal, I like that.
The one thing I have to ask is why is such a polite, childish boy in Hillworth? I understand that he enjoys fighting but he seems like a nice kid with an immature side. I'd love to know how he ended up there.
Other than that, it looks pretty good! I agree with LP the format makes it a little hard to read, but I like him. C:
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 5:21 pm
When he was in middle school he hung out with a bad crowd and picked up street fighting (as pointed out in his fighting hobby, durhur) as well as a couple other temporary habits typical of a delinquent. It wasn't very serious, mainly just skipping class a little too much and staying out way later than he should've been. His parents were really worried about his behavior ("WRY IS MAH BOY ACTING SO STRANGE NOW. :C -SOB-") and sent him to Hillworth.
If that's not much of a reason, I'm also alright with sending Finn to Meadowview. C: So overcrowded there though, lulz
Strange. Haven't gotten any such complaints for my other quests. Oh well. xD Done!
Thanks Never. <3
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 5:48 pm
I think it's a good explanation. Overreacting parents can cause a lot of problems, I have friends who have been forced into going places because of that. I'll love to see how he is with the other students there. Friendly fights maybe? xD
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 5:59 pm
Yes. Quite troublesome, overreacting parents. :C
It was mainly his mother's idea. She fusses over him a lot and always panics when Finn comes home scuffed and bruised (which is very often, lol).
I'm sure Finn would love that. "Let's have a friendly fight, eh? C:"
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:13 pm
Rewrote the Finn-Zoisite Personality section so it doesn't sound like it's 2 souls crammed into one body. lawlz.
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 11:46 pm
Rewrote his profile, changed some virtues and flaws. Rewrote the "why" sections.
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