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Cobra_X

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:41 am


"Hmmm..." Kenji said as he looked at the profile, "It could use some work...here, let me give you a few tips: First, it could use a picture, if there is one available, just for those of us who aren't standing in the room with you and reading it. Also, if you could break out the sections a bit so they are spaced apart, that would be good too. A lot of the time, when paragraphs are placed right next to one another, it can make a profile very hard to read. Now I like your story and personality profiles. They are a bit short, but they are to the point."

"I would however be very interested to see more of a description of this 'Mirror Clan' ...it sounds unique. Also, your profile should list the abilities that you know as a shinobi, if you know any that is..."
Moving to the back of the desk, Kenji maneuvered around Haruko, givign her a quick smile before opening a drawer and pulling out Haruko's profile and his. Walking back to Ato, he handed him two scrolls to look at.

"These are both Mine and Haruko's profiles. Now, you are new, so your profile doesn't have to be this large or ornate, but it is important that a profile hold as many specific details about you as possible, abilities, style, strengths, weaknesses, so that we can more properly assess you within the village and help you develop as a ninja. Take a look at those and let me know if it gives you any ideas."
PostPosted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 8:14 pm


((Take Two)


Username: Ezekiel Grey
Character Name: Kigami, Ato
Rank: Academy Student
Age: 13
Sex: Male

Appearance: Ato is short, thin and pale, granting him a deceptively sickly look. His smoky grey eyes sink slightly into their sockets, and are the only part of his face visible under the bundle of blue scarves that serve as a mask that hides his scarred face--his clan's attempts at discipline. When training, he typically wears black pants and a simple black shirt fitted to his body. His feet are wrapped in bandages, as are his hands. When combat is imminent or when Ato is sent on a mission, he covers his hands with fingerless clothe gloves that provide extra grip and his feet with simple, flexible shoes. He also uses this occasion (and his free time around the vilage) to don his clan's coat; It's a deep blue, the back highlighted by a pair of white right angles intercepting each other--his clan's symbol.


Bio: Ato is an excellent ninja born to a mediocre clan, and he has suffered for it. The Kigame(Mirror) clan is a family hidebound by old traditions and rituals, its old ties to family and community perverted into paranoia and xenophobia. As a result, its techniques and fighting styles have been jealousy guarded by the heads of the family for centuries. As a child, Ato set his sights on these techniques; His brilliance was too powerful to be hidden under his clan's dogma, he thought. He discovered a few of them, and was caught. As punishment, he was scarred a number of times equal to the techniques he "stole" from his clan: two. For years he stayed quiet, his loyalty to his clan unyielding. Now, with his entrance into the shinobi academy, he has the chance to learn more of his clans techniques, become the ninja he has always aspired to be, and lift his clan from the shadows of mediocrity.


Personality: Ato's most notable feature is his exuberance; He answers simple questions in earnest, and simple pleasures delight him. He takes his path to shinobi-dom very seriously, however, and insults to his path will bring his angry, scarred personality to light. He is severely loyal and so makes an excellent friend. He is prone to moments of darkness, during which he will retreat into his mind and wander alone; The ghosts of his past still attack his conscience--was it right to steal from the clan, even if the knowledge was rightly his and would bring his clan out of obscurity?


Abilities:

Kekkai Genkai - Awaiharetsu (Roughly translated into "Explosion of light")

The combination of the clan's two elements (Void/lighting and Wind) surging through a ninja from the mirror clan's chakra system leads to a chaotic and constantly changing stream of energy that every so often melds with the ninja's blood. This results in two things: An "explosion" technique unique to the clan and a severe problem recovering from injuries normal ninjas would ignore.
The explosion technique of the Mirror clan uses the clan's ability to send their chakra out into the air on a miniscule level--much like a puppet user's chakra strings-- and perform jutsus from different directions and locations that would normally not be possible. One example would be performing a firebreathing jutsu from behind an opponent-- that you are currently facing head on. Certain ninjas in the clan are also able to perform several different jutsus at once. The possibilities of such a technique are dangerous, both to their opponents and the bloodline users themselves.
A side effect of the bloodline trait is a case of hemophilia--all members who exhibit signs of Awaiharetsu also show signs of hemophilia. This makes it difficult for a ninja to ignore simple cuts and scratches. Another difficult obstacle for ninjas of this clan to overcome is the "thread" of chackra connecting the ninja to any jutsu he performs. Though the thread lasts only a few seconds after the jutsu is completed and the thickness is less than that of a hair, a particularly perceptive ninja would e able to find them and cut them before any techniques can be completed.
As of now, Ato knows two techniques using his bloodline trait.

Haretjutsu-- Ato can extend his chakra over a short distance (10 yards) and perform a jutsu from this location facing any direction. This is often used in conjunction with his wind attacks.

Hyakuteiru-- Ato can extend his chakra and then thicken the diameter so that it resembles a tentacle or tail of chakra sprouting from his body. Other ninjas of old could create several tails, but Ato only has the capacity for one at this point.


Jutsus known:
Elemental Affinities: Air, Void/Electricity

Kyojiki no Jutsu ("Giant Breath") Ato performs a short series of seals and sucks in a breath of air, releasing a large gust of wind at an opponent, similar in strength to a punch. It can also be used to quickly propel objects through the air.

Ezekiel Grey


Cobra_X

Aged Gaian

PostPosted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 12:10 pm


"This is much better! Kenji said after he had read through the profile once again, nodding his head in approval as he read each section..."It could still use a picture for your file, but something like that can be added later. Just remember that as you learn new techniques, they should be entered onto your profile. It is always a good thing to keep your profile up to date as you grow. Now, on to the next lesson..."

Kenji walked up the chalk board and began to write a few sentences on it without any explanation as to what he was doing. The writing was legible, but something was weird about the letters, almost as if it were recently learned. After finishing the sentences, Kenji stepped away and dusted the chalk off his hands and gloves..."Alright Ato, take a look at this RP post and respond how you would normally in your own RP response. Be careful to use proper Spelling, Grammar, and Punctuation. this is a Semi-literate to Literate RP, so we are forgiving, but prefer proper sentence structure and flow."

On the Board, Kenji
After training in the Ukude Forest for hours, the sun had already begun to set and the landscape was growing dark. On your way back to the village you get the strange sense that someone is following you in the shadows. At one point, as you turn around, just barely catching a glimpse of a shadowy figure ducking into the bushes, rustling the leaves slightly, but giving no more information as to who or what they were.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 5:03 pm


"Hai, Sensei!" Ato nodded in salute, then turned to the board with a stern gaze, grabbing a piece of chalk as he did so. The writing on the board looked odd, but Ato couldn't pinpoint exactly what it was. Besides, it wasn't his place to judge his teacher. After a few moments, he lifted his piece of chalk:

On the Board, Ato

Ato ducked quickly and stepped into the long shadow of a tree, all the while keeping an eye on the bush. How long have they been following me? he thought to himself, wondering why it had taken him so long to notice someone else in the forest. He would be dead if the figure were skilled and wanted him eliminated; Perhaps it was an animal, or someone from the village. "Get out, you've been caught." He said, trying to calm his nerves. He felt his hands move through the motions for a jutsu, and took a deep breath.


"How is that?" Ato turned to Kenji.

Ezekiel Grey


Cobra_X

Aged Gaian

PostPosted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 8:29 am


"Not bad, not bad at all. Let's see how you would respond to this though..." Kenji walked back up to the board, taking the piece of chalk from Ato and began writing something else...

On the Board, Kenji
The air was still and the shadow was silent until two shuriken quickly shot out of the bush flying straight for your location. A figure dressed in a black assassination uniform then emerged from the bush and began to rush you as he drew a kodachi from the scabbard on his back.

Stepping back from the board, Kenji held the piece of chalk out for Ato to take and write his response.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 1:51 pm


"Hai," Ato said, but it was soft as he strained to read the writing on the board. He thought for a moment, then picked the piece of chalk out of Kenji's hand with two fingers. "I've got it," he muttered to himself.



On the Board, Ato
Ato let his breath out and a sharp, almost solid gust of wind shot out from his mouth, stopping the shuriken in their paths and rushing past to intercept the ninja. Then he drew two kunai from his satchel, one in each hand.

Ezekiel Grey


Cobra_X

Aged Gaian

PostPosted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 2:17 pm


"Alright, well that's not so bad. One thing that might help is to announce the skill that you used. it is great that you used something from your profile, but I'm only just noticing now that you failed to mention your elemental affinity in your profile. It might be a good idea to add that. Otherwise though, you are doing a great job."

Kenji dusted his hands off and moved to teacher's desk and sat down, putting his feet up in a relaxed position. "Alright Ato, why don't you take a seat and tell us a little bit about yourself...we always like to learn a bit about our new students and hear it from their own mouths, not just what's written on the profile."

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((Hey Ezekial, sorry I've been so slow to respond to to you. Cobra ish lazy. sad ...but anyways, here we are, ad the next section is just OOC to make sure you understand a few basics.

First up : Tell me what god modding is, and why it's bad.

Second : Tell me what metagaming is and why it's not good in an RP setting.))
PostPosted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 8:47 pm


"Yes, Sensei" Ato bowed low, then sat down into a chair, feet planted squarely in the ground. He sat stock still, back straight.

((No worries.))

God Modding/God Mode is when a player either has his character dodge everyone attack, land every hit without the other player's consent, or be obscenely powerful-- or any combination of these.

Metagaming is using resources or knowledge gained from out of game sources to help your in-game character (choosing a path that you the player knows leads to the treasure room)

God modding's also called cheese mode

Ezekiel Grey


Cobra_X

Aged Gaian

PostPosted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 9:42 am


After a small bit of silence, Kenji wasn't quite sure if he had asked the question or not, but then again, the question was somewhat redundant as well...either way, everything looked fine as far as his responses and his profile, "Time for the fun part of these classes..." Swinging his legs down from the desk, he got up in a bit of an excited manner as he walked around Haruko who was still seated on the desk, watching everything unfold around her...

"Alright then Ato, there's only one more part of this class, the practical exam. You vs. Me at a location of your choice within our training grounds or the surrounding wilderness. We need to see if you're ready to be named a Genin of the village!"
PostPosted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:33 pm


((Gah, completely missed a part of my post D: ))

"Huh...?" Ato didn't move for a moment. The idea that he would have to fight his teacher didn't occur to him. "Y-yes sensei," He said, not entirely thrilled of the prospect. "The Dojo, please. Like the stories." His mother had read him stories of great ninja battles taking place inside and atop ninja dojos. Maybe he would feel the energy of the past and be strengthened.

Ezekiel Grey


Cobra_X

Aged Gaian

PostPosted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:43 pm


"Alright then Ato, the Dojo it is!"" Kenji wasn't quite so sure what he meant by 'like the stories' , but he could wager a close enough guess and decided to just let it go. Kenji walked tot eh door and opened it, exiting for the Dojo with a small wave to Haruko as he bade Ato to follow him.

((Exit to the Dojo))
PostPosted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 7:50 pm


Wordlessly, Ato followed him.

Ezekiel Grey


White Water Lilly
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 5:07 pm


Once both Kenji and Ato exited the room, Haruko hopped off the desk and proceeded to tidy up a bit before following the two boys. 'Sheesh, always leaving just like that. The caretakers are getting annoyed with cleaning up after our lessons. First the windows, now dirty chalkboard and scrolls scattered around the room.' After picking up their profile scrolls, Haruko opened the top drawer of the teacher's desk and placed them inside. Haruko was about to close and lock the drawer when she remembered she forgotten an important item, 'Opps, almost forgot about the headband.' reaching back inside the drawer with her left hand, Haruko took out a ninja handband before procceeding to lock the drawer with her other hand. After giving the room a quick lookover, Haruko began heading out of the room while placing the handband securely inside one of her many pouches

{Exit to Training grounds - Dojo}
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