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 Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 5:25 pm
Bloodline: Iron Sand
Why do you want it: So I can RP and I hardly every used this bloodline before so I want to try it again
What will you do with it: RP
What you know about it: Allmost everything I can.
RP Sample:(Useing puppets at the same time)
Cody walked up to the building. Smileing as a ninja group droppd down. He turned around and grabbed his bag and pullled out a scroll. He then bit his thumb and summoned his Puppet Kristalltod. The Ninja started off with a simple attack. They threw 5 kunai and Shuriken each. Cody smiled as he had his Puppet Kristalltod block them with his Steel wings. When the wings blocked the attack Cody opened up his Chest Cavity and sent out the thin wire coated with poison to stop them from getting to close. Sadly one of the men was allready behind him. The ninja threw a Kuani at Kristalltods Weak spot his mouth Joint. Cody had no other puppets at the time so he had to use his bloodline. Cody started forming hand signs as he knew that ninja was about to attack. Once he finished his hand signs for the Jutsu Kaneton Release - Kane Shouheki (Metal Release - Metal Barrier). A large amount of Iron sand was pooring out of his Gord on his back and formed a large wall behind him to stop the ninja from hurting him. Once the ninja moved Cody was smileng and doing hand signs once more this time he yelled "Satetsu Kaihou (Iron Sand World Method)" Large spikes came up and hit the enemys killing them on contact due to the fact that Cody had the sand poisoned
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 2:11 pm
Bloodline: Byakugan
Why do you want it: To further my abilities as a ninja, just like anyone else.
What will you do with it: I will use this bloodline to aid me in the style of taijutsu, since the gentle palm technique is much more effective in my eyes than standard taijutsu.
What you know about it: Byakugan is one of the great eye bloodlines, and enables the user to see a number of things. First, the user can see the flow of chakra in others, and can pin point their chakra holes to where they can accurately strike at them. These eyes also enabled a near 360 degree field of vision, the small infraction being a tiny blind spot at the back of the users head.
RP Sample:
Ahhh... nothing like beating the straw out of a training dummy. Kairin thought. Unlike most people who were off doing missions all the time, she preferred to stay behind and practice her gentle fist, and train her use of the Byakugan. Lately her laziness had gotten the better of her during small spars, and enabled her friends to attack from easily spotted positions. This was a large disappointment, and she didn't want it to happen again.
The training dummy that she had was special, it was rigged so that a trap would spring if you hit a certain sequence of spots, or just one spot. With this all in mind her training commenced. Kairin stood so that the dummy was in striking distance, slipping into her stance. After two seconds of waiting she thrust her right hand forward, expelling chakra from her palms as it struck the right shoulder of the dummy. Small bits of loose straw glided off of it, a small c***k noise sounding off in the distance. Her lazy mind had gotten the better of her.
"Byakugan" Kairin whispered to herself. Veins formed around her eyes and enabled her special vision, the trap now becoming plainly obvious. A score of kunai and shruiken shot out from one of the trees to her exact position. With her special eyesight, she jumped to the left and got cocky, thrusting towards the flying weapons and expelling chakra from her hands. Nothing happened to their pattern, but they all easily slipped into the straw dummy which clearly had not been the target.
A small breeze blew past the area, and her face slipped into a frown. Training was entirely useful indeed, but it wasn't something most would do to blow off stress, or to have fun. Currently, Kairin was having none. To make something useful of the double she brought her palms facing outward to her chest. With her elbows bent at acute angles, she thrust both of them upon the straw dummy, forcing chakra into it.
The poorly rigged straw was designed to take light blows, and the somewhat large chakra insertion enabled all of the traps. From all directions, weapons varying from kunai to swords flew in her direction. Kairins mind was bogged with all of the weapons that she had to keep her mind on, easily dodging a large batch of it. One nearly slipped past her known defense and into a nice place among on skin, but she quickly spun around and kicked it away.
"Still no fun... I should just go find some random person to spar with. I won't fatally wound then, 'least I don't think I will." She said to herself, placing her hands against her head with elbows raised, walking away from the torn and battered straw dummy. Seems like this one had a particularly small life span.
(( Haven't made my profile yet, just figured I'd get this squared away before I started on it. ))
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 3:31 pm
Everyone on this page: Approved.
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Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 8:30 pm
Jade ♪♫ x-Jewlz-x
Your Friendly NeighborHood V.C.
Denied. You need to incorporate much more about the kekkai genkai other than the moves. You didn't say anything about the way the see, how they see, and what exactly they see. The two moves you used could simply be mistaken as random taijutsu styles.
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:44 pm
Bloodline: Byakugan
Why do you want it: Always have sharingan want to change it
What will you do with it: Protect my village/allies
What you know about it: Everything posted in the forum xD
RP Sample: Michio ran as fast as he could. He had just escaped the murderer who killed his parents. he huffed and puffed outraged that he was unable to do anything to save their lives. But what could you expect from a 10 year old scared boy. ""I've got to do something.. but.. no they'll kill me.. god damn it." He turned back barley able to see his own house and about to keep running when all of a sudden he heard a large explosion. *BOOM* He quickly turned around and realized his older sister was fighting them off and she was dead now. His anger was no longer felt upon himself rather the two that murdered his family. He stood up straight holding in his tears. Michio made the same hand signs his father had taught him a few days prior to the attack. "Byakugan!" His pupils become more distinct, and the veins near his temple was bulge. He looked around the fire passed tree's and other buildings and was able to find his sister barley alive on the ground her chakra barley passing through her body and the two bastards who had done it were in the front of the house. He quickly ran over to his sister. "Taza... are you alright?" She sighed and passed out before she could say anything. He pulled her away and hid her behind some bushes. "I won't let them get away... I promise tazzy.." He took one of his sisters kunai and went after them. One was raiding someone else's house. All Michio could hear were the loud screaming coming in from inside. He climbed up a tree that reached the window of the 2nd story. "Okay.. he's coming upstairs.. then I'll get him." Michio could see veins circulating the mans body as he got more and more angry his chakra traveled throughout his body faster. The man came into the room before he could kill his best friend, Michio jumped through the window. "Ugh your brat.." The man was stabbed in the back and the kunai was still in there. He pulled it out and ran towards Michio. At this point all Michio could see was a web like veins with chakra flowing like crazy. But something was different his chakra color wasn't normal. "Where are you!" The man went on a rampage knocking everything in his path over. Michio jumped on his back, "I may not have perfected the art of Gentle fist yet.. but I will use what i know to destroy you.". The man shouted in pain and fell back as Michio hit the man all around his back blocking out multiple chakra pathways by producing a small amount of chakra to his hands, when he did Michio jumped up off him. He struck the mans leg and lower arm, then quickly grabbed the kunai and slit the mans throat. He looked around and noticed the other man was coming. "Kenji.. hide in the closet.. I'll get rid of them." Michio climbed up a dresser and was standing on top of the door careful not to make any sudden movements. The other man came in running and had almost twice as much chakra as the first man and it was strange just as the guy he just killed. "Noata what happened?" The man panicked and pulled out a 40 inches long katana that was 7 inches wide and applied chakra to it to sharpen it. Michio noticed that the blade was now glowing and could see where it was that the chakra was coming from. "Who the f*ck did this!?" As he shouted Kenji let out a yelp from the closet. The man turned and went for the closet. Just then Michio jumped down struck the mans lower leg which knocked him down. As the man attempted to get up and turned around Michio slid in between the guy's legs tripped him by hitting pressure points all around his other leg. "Want to know something about byakugan old man?" He turned around and attempted to behead Michio. "I can see the pathways your chakra travels.. although I cannot see what your face looks like, i can see wherever you chakra travels.. and by doing the simplest thing, which is cover my hands with chakra, by merely touching you i can stop that flow. Or just kill you from the inside.." He jumped behind the man and struck his lower back and both ankles. As the man landed on his own blade Michio turned him around and pulled out the blade, it was hot from the weird chakra the man produced. Michio walked over to Kenji and helped him out. "We aren't safe here anymore.. we need to leave Kenji.." He closed his eyes momentary and his pupils were no longer visible and the veins near his temple were no longer visible. He looked at the man, "Oh.. what a shame.. he was young too.." They both walked out and Michio ran to his sister. By the time he had got there Taza was no longer there. He once again activated his byakugan in desperate attempt to find her. Only being able to see 50 meters away he felt like a failure for letting his sister down, not only was he unable to protect her, now he couldn't give her a proper burial.
((im sorry but if this isn't good enough i cant do more))
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 5:40 pm
Jade ♪♫ x-Jewlz-x
Your Friendly NeighborHood V.C.
Both the ones trying for Byakugan:
You have not showed HOW the vision is!
1st Trier: You showed knowledge of the taijutsu, more or less, but nothing about the 360 degrees vision
2nd Trier: You did not show HOW the vision is, or anything regarding the clan except how you could see the guys through the walls.
Tell me about the chakra points, and how you see chakra not actual faces and what not. Tell me how the chakra vision allows you to utilize your gentle fist
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 10:12 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:03 pm
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Shruikan Tenshi Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 4:39 am
guys we're not trying to be mean, but we have to see you know how to use it. Its not just the appearance, or the attacks. You have to show us what they can do. As jade said, we have to see you know of the 360 degree vision, the taijutsu style and what happens when the attacks connect, the ability to see chakra points and then how it corrasponds with your taijutsu. The byakugan is more then just gentle fist, or just the ability to see chakra points and far distances. You need to corporate them all. If you show us you can do that, then you'll get the approved. We are only trying to let you know what you did wrong, and we want to see you can do this. Okies? Now try again mrgreen
~Shruikan Tenshi
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Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 8:26 pm
Bloodline: Enjin Clan (Monkey's Bond)
Why do you want it: Because it's fairly unique and isn't over-powered
What will you do with it: Augment the abilities of my fighting style. Being a medical ninja, people wouldn't expect it.
What you know about it: I know that it was deprived from monkeys and junk.
RP Sample:
Cory quickly bounded through the trees, the steel plate with the mist insignia placed upon his hat.
"Wow!" he exclaimed, looking at the sky through the various rifts in in the trees. Suddenly, he stopped, hiding in the thick covering of leaves as he spied on a small caravan of shinobi from the cloud village.
"Time to have some fun!" he whispered to himself childishly. Jumping out of the trees, he landed on one of the shinobi's shoulders like a cat pouncing on it's prey. The shinobi toppled easily under Cory's weight and momentum, Cory slapping his face three times before lithely stealing a scroll from the victim's pocket. Another enemy shinobi tried to slash at Cory with a nodachi vertically, Cory jumping back with such speed that it looked like he just dissappeared. The nodachi came down on the shinobi Cory had knocked over previously, right on the stomach. His stomach bled, and Cory wanted to help gravely, but that was out of the question for the moment. His new assailant went in for another strike with the nodachi, Cory taking out a weapon of his own: A kodachi. He parried the strike, jumping back again while performing handsigns.
"Primal Scream!" he announced, chakra leaving his lungs to create a blast of sound which blew the shinobi backwards. Using the opprotunity, Cory fled the scene.
((I got lazy))
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Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 3:06 pm
Aqua Fall 12 Bloodline: Enjin Clan (Monkey's Bond)
Why do you want it: Because it's fairly unique and isn't over-powered
What will you do with it: Augment the abilities of my fighting style. Being a medical ninja, people wouldn't expect it.
What you know about it: I know that it was deprived from monkeys and junk.
RP Sample:
Cory quickly bounded through the trees, the steel plate with the mist insignia placed upon his hat.
"Wow!" he exclaimed, looking at the sky through the various rifts in in the trees. Suddenly, he stopped, hiding in the thick covering of leaves as he spied on a small caravan of shinobi from the cloud village.
"Time to have some fun!" he whispered to himself childishly. Jumping out of the trees, he landed on one of the shinobi's shoulders like a cat pouncing on it's prey. The shinobi toppled easily under Cory's weight and momentum, Cory slapping his face three times before lithely stealing a scroll from the victim's pocket. Another enemy shinobi tried to slash at Cory with a nodachi vertically, Cory jumping back with such speed that it looked like he just dissappeared. The nodachi came down on the shinobi Cory had knocked over previously, right on the stomach. His stomach bled, and Cory wanted to help gravely, but that was out of the question for the moment. His new assailant went in for another strike with the nodachi, Cory taking out a weapon of his own: A kodachi. He parried the strike, jumping back again while performing handsigns.
"Primal Scream!" he announced, chakra leaving his lungs to create a blast of sound which blew the shinobi backwards. Using the opprotunity, Cory fled the scene.((I got lazy))
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Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 3:16 pm
I referred to the 360 degree vision, but in an indirect way. You could say I beat around the bush on the fact, or merely forgot the detail, but the trap was behind her. Also, would you rather me scrap that example and make a new one? There arn't any chakra points on a straw dummy.
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Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 3:48 pm
Aqua Fall 12 Aqua Fall 12 Bloodline: Enjin Clan (Monkey's Bond)
Why do you want it: Because it's fairly unique and isn't over-powered
What will you do with it: Augment the abilities of my fighting style. Being a medical ninja, people wouldn't expect it.
What you know about it: I know that it was deprived from monkeys and junk.
RP Sample:
Cory quickly bounded through the trees, the steel plate with the mist insignia placed upon his hat.
"Wow!" he exclaimed, looking at the sky through the various rifts in in the trees. Suddenly, he stopped, hiding in the thick covering of leaves as he spied on a small caravan of shinobi from the cloud village.
"Time to have some fun!" he whispered to himself childishly. Jumping out of the trees, he landed on one of the shinobi's shoulders like a cat pouncing on it's prey. The shinobi toppled easily under Cory's weight and momentum, Cory slapping his face three times before lithely stealing a scroll from the victim's pocket. Another enemy shinobi tried to slash at Cory with a nodachi vertically, Cory jumping back with such speed that it looked like he just dissappeared. The nodachi came down on the shinobi Cory had knocked over previously, right on the stomach. His stomach bled, and Cory wanted to help gravely, but that was out of the question for the moment. His new assailant went in for another strike with the nodachi, Cory taking out a weapon of his own: A kodachi. He parried the strike, jumping back again while performing handsigns.
"Primal Scream!" he announced, chakra leaving his lungs to create a blast of sound which blew the shinobi backwards. Using the opprotunity, Cory fled the scene.((I got lazy))
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