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[Q] Sailor Eltanin, Senshi of Spirit

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kalindara

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Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:52 pm

Can I just recommend that attacks 1 and 1b have the same last word? Spiritual XXX, Demoralizing XXX? Either word you've already used, or a different one... Just so it's obvious in the attack names that they're linked / upgrades, not a brand new attack.

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Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:59 pm

Done~

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Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:26 pm

This is me:

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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 12:29 am

My one beef: his first attack doesn't have much to do with how you're doing spirit, which is 'morale' -- drop it and just do the morale ones you've done. I would actually recommend changing the element to 'morale' rather than 'spirit', because it seems to be equated too much to soul -- I would even recommend 'heart', or 'drive'. So: honestly, drop 'spirit', it's too far off the path of what you're aiming for, and the arrows also seem a bit off the mark smile

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