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alright, while your rp sample is pretty good i just want you to give me a brief description of how the bloodline works in your own words, no copy and paste please, thank you

Ok. It allows the user to see almost 360 degrees apart from the blind spot thats somewhere around the back of the neck. Hyuuga's have telescopic vision so they can see through solid objects but it has a set distance. They also have the ability to see people's chakra system, and they use this ability in conjunction with their taijutsu style called the gentle fist. They can use the gentle fist technique to hit chakra points and seal them so that the opponent can't use jutsu. Skilled Hyuuga's can generate chakra from chakra points other than their finger, like their knees mrgreen . And the gentle fist taijutsu is one that targets the internal organs.

He paid his 1000 Lance please add Brileone to the list

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RPC Name: Kanzuki Nara
Village: Mist
Rank: Sannin
Clan applying for: Nara
What I know: The Nara clan use their shadows to bind their foes to them effectively disabling them so that other members of the squad can handle them, or so they can bind them so they can use a more effective technique on them more easily, such as the shadow neck bind technique. The techniques require alot of on your toes thinking as the weakness of the Nara clan is their shadow length, while there are ways of extending shadows, it can only go so far, and an opponent can easily counter a Nara by knowing how far they can extend their shadow and how long their shadow currently is, though with trickery and deception, a Nara can overcome theses problems.

RP sample: Kanzuki stood his ground as a squad of enemy nin advanced on his squads position. He looked around and counted 3 of them total, "Well so much for no opposition." sighed Kanzuki as he eyed his 2 squad mates,"We'll go with the normal plan." he told them as he reached into his back pocket to pull out a light-bomb. " Well then, time to die." he said as he threw the light-bomb behind him. As it ignited his shadow extended massively in front of him, and temporarily blinded his foes. He then formed the handsigns he needed," Kage Nui - Shadow Sewing" he said as from his shadow massive tendrils formed, as always he focused on the nin furthest away from him, the tendrils shot a the poor unsuspecting enemy nin who never saw what was coming, the tendrils pierced the nin through his chest, as the tendrils withdrew, his corpse slumped to the ground, next he focused on the nin who was the 2nd closest to him, he slammed his fist on his shadow on the ground in front of him," Shadow Release - Crescent Moon Blade ." he said as from the spot where he hit the ground his shadow formed a crescent shaped blade that flew towards the nin, as he turned it was too late he saw the blade a moment too late and as he attempted to dodge, the blade impacted on his neck, creating a large bleeding gash, he fell to ground screaming in pain. Finally Kanzuki turned towards the last opponent, the one closest towards him. By now his shadow had begun to recede, but he had enough shadow between him and the last nin to cover it, "Kage Mane no Jutsu - Shadow Imitation Technique " he said as he shadow bound the last enemy nin to his will. Unable to move the enemy nin stared at Kanzuki's squad with a look of terror on his face." Finish him off." Kanzuki said with a smirk as his squad mates were happy to oblige. They walked up to the poor soul and and a swift motion, decapitated him. Then one of Kanzuki's squad mates went to the nin who was screaming in pain of the ground and finished him off by making Kanzuki's gash abit deeper by severing his head from his body. Kanzuki just let out a sigh," We werent supposed to face any opposition man this is such a pain." he laughed as he patted his squad mates and observed the scene of a job well done.

Hmm...I kinda agree with Lance on this one. Though I'm also no expert on the Nara clan. I would say the lightbomb has effect for one post for sure, but that's tricky. Lance, would you please pm Defined Spontaneity for me and ask if we could get a third opinion

Alright.

Personally, I agree with you, that only a single light-bomb would not disorient an opponent for more then a single post. Keep in mind, that this is a scenario, in reality, he wouldn't just auto like he did in there. I actually think it's a bad RP sample. He did not include any example of him taking damage. I find escaping unscathed to be rather stupid. Note how in mine, I allowed to explain everything.

Now, three techniques, I think that as a Sannin it might be plausible, however in every manga or the anime for that matter, I have never seen a Nara use three of their clan's abilities in such a close succession. Not only do t hose shadow tendrils move rather slowly, you have to maintain them. It's not like you're not losing a huge amount of chakra using them. Having to maintain a technique, disallows the use of your hands for handseals, therefor what I believe... is that he does not know so much about the clan as you are led to first believe. Also, the amount of chakra loss is rather high. Shikamaru is always extremely tired after just using a few of those tendrils on a group, and he doesn't use but one technique.

Thank you very much Defined for your input. Alright here goes:

Lance, since you know malfrost very well and I know he's new to the rping, I would like for you to help him out in real life with this. If he wants the Nara clan I would like him to supply one more rp sample. Don't write it for him just aid him with it and let him try again. Practice makes perfect XD

Brileone: To be the head of the clan you have to be pretty much the strongest member and I guess the first one to apply for it. Granted I will be watching the heads of clans closely cause the heads will play a huge role in this guild, and if I think someone would make a better head of clan, then I will demote and promote accordingly

alright i'm going to need a better description of the bloodline as you understand it, tell it's strengths and weaknesses; your rp sample looks pretty good, but i just need to know that you have a good understanding of what the bloodline can and can't do