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You might wanna try this site out, instead of the writers' forum.
http://www.fictionpress.com/It takes a while for your account to be activated, but it works I suppose.
Ooh, thanks I'll check that out. ^^
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I'm also guessing it's about zombies, right?
I can't say much from the prologue.
I was hoping it wasn't going to be too obvious. That's why I tossed up various newspaper titles to try to fool the reader.
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But I like how strong the emotions are so far, and you keep a nice track for details. Thumbs up for that.
Thank you very much. But I think Sere deserves some of the credit to. She helped me a lot on improving and expressing my character's emotions along with heavy grammar corrections.
I started this at like 4am after no sleep but I'm not gonna make excuses I'd probably would have made the same mistakes with a full night's rest lol.
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