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aight here i go

introducin, me 1 of da muthafukin best
wen i spit ma first bar i put u otha rappas 2 rest
yea hattas, da name is Rauz*
and u skarred cuz my rhymes got da perfect flo

i do ma best each and every round
so i can continue scorin lik touchdowns
dey tell me not to go so hard
but i always do so i can shut up u retards

im 1 of da best rookies in dis thang
but i do wat i can so u can remember my name
wen i start my rhymes it's lik acid in yo brain
cuz dis s**t hav u otha rappas goin insane

which makes me wonda y u otha rappers r in this competition
cuz im rappin like a muthafukin man on a mission
trevor, u might as well give me the title right now
cuz all my verses r lik gunshots... KAPLOW

*"Rauz" is pronounced lik "Ro"
So how did i do

I'm a ******** boss runnin' squads just like a don//
The darkest and deepest of battles handlin people like a pawn//
I watch you like a movie as my people's sprayin' uzis//
Heat scatters metal, bullets leave you boilin like jacuzzis//
Steam released on the scene leavin heat like a sauna//
Smoke fillin the room up like a hotbox of marijuana//
This b***h is still alive but his mind is feelin' feeble//
So D. Limit's steppin in strapped widda desert eagle//
I'll use a silencer to witness some dramatic screams//
A nightmare to enemies but to me it's all a dream//
Can't defeat my team, 'cause my stategies an abomination//
'Cause Limit takin' over constructing plans of domination//
Oh such a sensation, Pulling triggers leavin bodies cremated//
This ***** talked alotta crap but I stopped it, leavin' him constipated//
I'm full of hatred, baddest next to satan, known as a beast//
Live my dreams in reality, while living reality in my sleep//

I wrote like 32 bars and when I went to preview it, gaia signed me out and erased my post. You don't understand how pissed off I was. This is what I could draw from memory but it's not the original.

I'm still tryna figure out who I am...
dominate everything to appease the beast--
that's been reciving grief cos apparently I can't do everything,
according to the pagans who don't believe in me.
I'm the jack of all trades but master of none
It would hardly be dumb to think I'm half dragon
the way I spit fire with these bars from my tongue
Even though I'm spitting harder than some
I realised that it might not be a star I become
And accept the boring everyday in the path that I run
Thats a loss I don't greet with anamosity
Cos the rest of your life arrives fast when it comes
And when I saw the trailer for 17 again
I realised that time has never been a friend
Cos ever since I was 10 I wished I was 7
Can't waste time wishing. I better sped ahead
To me, honestly, all these teen prodigies
Have got me obviously, going green i've gotta be--
the best. And don't see why I need to be tested.
It's a hard hustle but I don't need to rest.
It's a hard hustle But I'll grind forever,
Cos I swear defeat is so hard to take.
It's a hard hustle But I'll grind forever,
But tommrrow, forever seems so far away
Everyday a star is born...so are 6 million people
Before you waste your time ask: Do you feel Lucky?
I've considered making tune for six figures a beat
But before I waste my time I gotta ask if you feel Lucky
It's hard to give up on your dreams. I search for an alternative,
And even the google homepage is feeling Lucky...
But this morning I awoke and I gave up on my dreams.
And the monkey on my back to it's weight up off of me
Because the uphill struggle was more than I could take
Every morning I awake, I'm a day further from my dreams.
(Theres a voice that screams)
"Hi anybody. I'm very sorry.
But you've been replaced. Try get a hobby.
Nobody can be Somebody to Everybody.
You're Anybody! So's Everybody.
Hi anybody. I'm very sorry.
But you've been replaced.
Nobody can be Somebody to Everybody.
You're Anybody! So's Everybody..."

Know what I mean?

Wow, these niggas is lame...