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 Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 8:27 pm
i really like your poems and story as well biggrin you are very talented thank you for sharing them i'll post the other one of mine in a bit. biggrin
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Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 8:35 pm
The core is said to be
the reson for why we do what we do.
we are on the search for a solution
That instead will
lead us on the path
to self destruction
by, overcastic (me)
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Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 8:39 pm
Twitching,
Eyes red,
Mind out of control.
You look at your cure,
reaching for it,
but it's too far away.
You get it finally,
seems like eternity.
And taste,
A good taste,
The taste you long for.
The twitching stops
Mind at ease as you
drift off into oblivion.
I'm in heaven.
Knowing tomorrow,
it will start all over again.
by, overcastic (me)
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Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 8:44 pm
Life isn't anything but a party.
AS the lights above shine down on you.
You dance.
You sweat.
You twitch.
No one seems to notcice,
as you fall to the floor.
Cuts still visable on your arms.
Bottle in your hand.
To think that
your life ended with just a pill.
Life isn't anything but a party after all, Right?
by, overcastic (me)
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Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 8:52 pm
*is very glad to be straight edged*...
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Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 9:31 pm
LOL!!!! yes isn't that great? *smirks
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Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 9:48 pm
overcastic LOL!!!! yes isn't that great? *smirks yes.. but I get teased a lot..
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Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 11:18 pm
I have more stories.. but I cant post them here...
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Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 9:41 am
Fiend470 I have more stories.. but I cant post them here...
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Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 10:15 am
yes please post your stories so we can all read them biggrin
getting made fun of sucks..sorry..i know how you feel i used to get alot of it to
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Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 11:03 am
I cant post them here because they are not pg13.. unless maybe I edit them a bit...
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Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 11:59 am
i have a few poems that i worte years ago...but well i'm not sure if they would be considered over pg-13 or not....mmmm *thinks
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Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 4:11 pm
Fiend470 I cant post them here because they are not pg13.. unless maybe I edit them a bit...
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 1:23 pm
*PMs to Robin* if anyone else wants to read some... ask..
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 1:04 pm
i wouldn't mind reading more i love poetry biggrin
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