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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 12:20 pm
Ryuuji Teku Age: Unknown (but she's old) Birthday: July 21 Height: about 5'5"; shorter than Kurama but tall enough to lie on Hiei's head Weight: very light Hanyou; half wolf demon and half space pirate
Abilities: When killed or on the verge of death, demon side kicks in. She's usually in her space pirate form. Demon side ish very powerful and evil. Uses claws mostly; has Blades of Blood (like Inuyasha). They are very sharp, can cut through almost anything. Fangs: can bite hella hard. She can also turn into a real wolf. Teku has these seeds she throws to grow and wrap its vines around the opponent. She's pretty handy with a sword. Not a master though. Space pirate side: much sweeter and more merciful. Can fly, her weapon ish a lightsaber, and her defense ish a spirit barrier. She has super strength, teleportation, and can phase through walls but not take others with her.. Healing Powers: when she wants to heal, she projects angel wings. She pulls out a feather and lays it on the wound and it starts to heal. Also creates a barrier around the victim. Barrier ish impossible to penetrate except by the victim themself. Can also heal through hands but it takes a lot of energy and usually falls asleep afterwards.. Created a necklace that has some of her power in it. The charm on it ish a feather, her trademark. The necklace creates a barrier around the one who wears it. Teku ish the most powerful being on the planet. She could blow up the whole world if she wants. She's in a class by herself all the way at the top. Her power cannot be measured, it's so great. However, like all beings, she has weaknesses. And Teku's weakness ish her feelings. If she becomes close to a person and they get hurt, she feels their pain. And if it's someone she really loves, then it becomes physical. Like if they got cut, she would get cut on the same place. If they die, then she may die with them.
Personality: Space pirate: very sweet and caring. Wouldn't mind dying for those she cares about. Only when someone's in trouble, then she gets serious. Can't help but love everyone. Her true self ish her space pirate form. Though she's powerful and can kill anyone, she still gets scared. She fears for the people around her, she doesn't want them to get killed. She's scared she won't be about to protect them, doubts her power. Very physical with the one she loves. VERY physical. Always wants to help out any way she can. It takes a lot to piss her off. Demon side: unmerciful If she doesn't like you for whatever reason, she'll kill you. Very creative in her murders, especially torturing. In her demon form, she acts superior. Teku's extremely pretty and sweet. Almost every guy that meets her or even sees her falls in love with her.
Past: Teku was created, not born, by a miss Sushiami. Sushiami would be like her mother and she put in all of her abilities. Teku's personality was based off of what she was made of. (space pirate had the healing so she's sweet, demon side has the evilness so she's evil) Sushiami met the father, Kyiki and they both got together and created Teku. Kyiki's DNA was put into her (thus the demon side). But Kyiki was evil and he killed all around him, even Sushiami. Since Teku was made on another planet, she fell down to earth. Ryuuji Otogi (Duke Devlin from Yuugioh) saw her fall and he came to her. He took care of her wounds and such. Once she wakes up, she sees his face. She remembers nothing and so Otogi teaches her and cares for her, like a father. Teku even started to call him 'father.' Teku slowly regains her memory. Now that she knows everything, she has to leave. Space pirates, where they lived, had a bounty on their head. To protect her father, she leaves. Before she left, she was given the other piece of Otogi's earring (ya know that one die earring he has? Teku has the other one). However, bounty hunters came for Teku. They murder Otogi right in front of her. (well, she thinks they did but Otogi ish really alive. See, they burned the house where he was inside but Teku lost her earring inside it when she went to go retrieve him. The earring was near Otogi and he was safe, since the earring had a little bit of Teku's power in it. in one of my stories, i wrote about her finding out Otogi ish still alive) Teku's demon side kicks in and she goes on a killing spree. She eventually meets up with Sesshoumaru and both fell in love with each other. (the story on that ish in my fanfiction section) Both killed together and Teku became recognized as the most powerful being on the planet. After all the killings she did, her space pirate side revives and takes over. She sees all she's done and leaves Sesshoumaru, along with her old life. Not long afterwards, she was captured for the bounty on her head. She reverts to her space pirate form and doesn't escape. She was put into a demon auction; her number was 622. The auction took place, Youko Kurama attended to check it out (years after YYH ended). Teku ish up and she looks really messed up, she wasn't treated well. It ish revealed that she ish a wolf demon and Youko immediately bought her. Human side Shuuichi (Kurama) takes over and sees her. He takes her back to his Ningenkai apartment. He cares for her till she awakens. He tells her about his life and the Ningenkai. Not having anywhere else to go, she lives with Kurama for a while and they get to know each other. Eventually, they fell in love with each other and are happy. Teku eventually meets Hiei, Kuwabara, and Yuusuke. They like her, even Hiei. She lives happily with Kurama and have all sorts of new experiences.
Looks: Eyes: lavender (from mother's hair) Hair: navy blue (from father's eyes) length down to her lower back; bangs like Kagome. wears a white shirt with a small red star in the middle of the chest area. black, japanese school girl outfit style. converse shoes, hightops, black very VERY pretty, a real woman. no matter what she transforms into, she's very pretty. Demon form: same as before only has wolf ears, tail, fangs, and claws. narrow eyes, still womanly. hair goes black but hard to tell. No matter what form she ish in, the die earring still remains on her right ear.
she be my main character. i use her a lot.
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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 12:21 pm
and i have created one more, Yuusuke's long lost sister, but i have yet to fully create her. she has a look and all and past and whatever, but not the general stuff or stuff...
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T 0 XX I C--K 0 I Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 1:42 pm
Mary sue test go here and take the test to see if your character is a mary sue or somewhat of one.
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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 2:16 pm
damn, according to that test, Teku ish a Mary-Sue. -_- that sucks. now i gotta refine her again.
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T 0 XX I C--K 0 I Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 2:23 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 8:33 pm
One of my oc in my journal is somewhat an mary sue. sad I find it hard to believe but oh well.
Are mary sues really that bad?
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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 10:39 pm
I think the test is inacurate if we three ALL got mary-sue...I did too, but so what if my character is like me, as long as I don't whore myself to people, which I don't. I just don't like RPing a character that isn't like me. Also, why get 20 points if you used a USERNAME!? I can understand real names, but usernames? Come on!
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 2:23 pm
Yeah that is linda stupid.
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T 0 XX I C--K 0 I Captain
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T 0 XX I C--K 0 I Captain
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 2:41 pm
I did one of my characters and she isn't a mary sue.
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 4:03 pm
Koibito_No_Kurama_Kun Yeah that is linda stupid. I'm glad someone agrees. mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 6:40 pm
I got that Kaika is a mary-sue. KAIKA!!!!! It's stupid.
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Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 11:55 am
yesh that test ish kinda biased yet good reference to see what's in a Mary-Sue. -_-i think i'll take it again...
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Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 3:55 pm
Minamino_Teku yesh that test ish kinda biased yet good reference to see what's in a Mary-Sue. -_-i think i'll take it again... Yeah, it shows what's more or less bad in a mary-sue, but it WAS unfair for those of us who don't like RPing a character that isn't like us....I like making Inferno like me, it gives a good reaction to what the REAL characters might think of me. xD
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Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 11:43 am
Inferno04 Minamino_Teku yesh that test ish kinda biased yet good reference to see what's in a Mary-Sue. -_-i think i'll take it again... Yeah, it shows what's more or less bad in a mary-sue, but it WAS unfair for those of us who don't like RPing a character that isn't like us....I like making Inferno like me, it gives a good reaction to what the REAL characters might think of me. xD well, it's not that the test was unfair. it was just that the points at the end i think were a bit biased. the scoring should have been a bit more spread out. that's my opinion.
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Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 3:18 pm
And also, it was kinda unfair for those of us who's characers are imorta/ non-human and highschool students.
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