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Chieftain Twilight Captain
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 Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 7:11 pm
well, the best always come from the heart. ^_^
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 9:33 pm
Heartfelt teasing about virginal sacrifices? Somehow that seems...weird. xp
Just curious, how much of my story have you read?
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ScarletFrost Vice Captain
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Chieftain Twilight Captain
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 4:53 am
i am an odd one dear. and only the begginning. i have been busy, but whenever i do read it it sucks me in.
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 10:41 pm
I know you're odd. That's why I trail after you. blaugh Well, I hope you get to read it all soon, because it's almost finished. It is turning into an unholy Manson-Carpathian crossover, but what the heck, it's just for fun, right? sweatdrop
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ScarletFrost Vice Captain
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Chieftain Twilight Captain
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Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 2:11 am
mrgreen i will soon dear.
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Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 7:56 pm
Yes but how soon? ^_^* I'm really anxious to hear your opinions on my story.
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ScarletFrost Vice Captain
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Chieftain Twilight Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 9:51 pm
i know dear, i'm sorry! gonk between parenting Opal, setting up my personal businesses, trying to get a job, donating plasma weekly, RPing, running errands for people (including yourself), and looking for romance, i hardly have time for anything else. ._. i am trying to squeeze as much as i can in, but you know.. it's kinda hard... sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 10:07 pm
Hey, don't strain yourself too much on my account. The story is supposed to be for R&R only! But I know what it's like to be so busy. I still have the tracks on my arms from plasma donations. sweatdrop
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ScarletFrost Vice Captain
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Chieftain Twilight Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 10:10 pm
i wil get to it eventualy. smile
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:30 pm
When you do get around to perusing my romantic tale of vampiric destiny, you have to give me a detailed rundown of what you thought. A "That was a good story, keep writing," is not going to cut it! ^_^
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ScarletFrost Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:17 pm
Oh my sweatdrop
You know i decided to pick a random chapter before reading it, and picked chapter 7? That was uggh...very weird xD Wow you wrote this - I'm impressed. Its very tasteful and not smutty like most of these stories.
I did find it a bit weird you chose to incorporate the song from a Disney film, but the rest is great. I always found Marilyn Manson songs to paint a great setting for erotic moments.
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:53 pm
you know Apple, there are an awefull lot of erotica and even just very erotic romance novels that are NOT smutty at all. smile it's just a matter of finding the right authr. ^_^
myself, the Erotica i have started isn't "smutty" per say, but is still decidedly... perverted. ninja which was the whole point. i wanted to prove a point to someone, who then convinced me to do what i said i wouldn't do! xd i told her that if i were to write an erotica it would make all erotica illegal worldwide! ... actually, i think she one, because it doesn't seem as bad as i thought it would be... sweatdrop
still, i wouldn't reccomend that you read it, it involves rape, and beastiality, and TPE, and will soon inlcude lolita and incest.
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Chieftain Twilight Captain
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ScarletFrost Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 2:21 pm
I've read trashy novels with sex scenes obviously written by virgins as well as dark and twisted coupling by the amazing Jacqueline Carrey. Christine Feehan is kinda between the two, and I was trying to imitate her style. sweatdrop
This Is Halloween (in chapter 9) doesn't sound very Disney when it's sung by Marilyn Manson, and it's from a Tim Burton movie anyway. blaugh Apple, have you read the whole thing or just one chapter?
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Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 10:48 am
Still haven't gotten a chance to read more than the first few paragraphs of this. I'm considering copying all the text down and saving that on my thumbdrive so I can read some during work when I feel like taking a few minutes break.
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ScarletFrost Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 1:56 pm
Cool! I can't wait to hear your feedback. blaugh
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