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| Hatsume |
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83% |
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| Okojo |
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16% |
[ 1 ] |
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| Total Votes : 6 |
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 Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 2:24 pm
For this one, I'll have to say Hatsu, because you took the time to completely describe what you were doing, and I loved that. Even when you did a couple things wrong, your writing was still great and I loved to read your posts. Great job :3
Okijo, while I liked your posts, you need to put more description and detail into them. You failed to describe fully what you were doing, as well as how you reacted to Hatsu and what she did. While you did good, I think Hatsu did better.
And so, this one will be left up to Mock. Good luck to the both of you ^_^
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 3:43 pm
I hated having to judge this match. The thing is, both did an amazing work, and one's weak point is the other strong point, and vice versa. I mean, Hatsume's best qualities is what Okojo lacked, and his best qualities is what Hatsume lacked. If you two fused into one being, we would end up with an amazing RPer!!! xp - or an average one, if all things were to balance out... stare whatever, it was just a joke.
What I'm trying to say, is that there was no way to do a parallel comparison of your skill. As you can well see, both judges have even made different rulings.
I must say that Oko has one of my most favorites styles of descriptive writing in this Squad. While Hatsu has a very unique one herself. This decision was made difficult because Hatsu had a lot of mistakes, some grammar ones, but mostly syntax and several misspellings. While Okojo had few.
Sure, Hatsu's posts were longer, but Okojo always went straight to the point, so we can't really say that he lacked enough description. And to write more, is not always a good thing, especially when you're bound to make more mistakes. Hatsu's posts however, did presented a unique feel to what her character was experiencing, and I liked that. In the end, I couldn't made a decision based on this alone.
Truth is, I thought outside the box. From what I've been seeing, Okojo always was this great RPer. While Hatsu has been improving at an incredible pace. She's still dealing with several issues to her writing, having assimilated so much new information in a short time, that she has yet to get used to joining the new knowledge she has gained with her own proper style - that you can always feel in her posts.
I'm not saying that Oko didn't work hard on his posts. I know him better than this. But Hatsu worked harder. If Okojo had put as much effort as Hatsu did, his posts would surely be outstanding.
Finally, I don't believe that this decision will affect much. No matter what rank these two get on this whole tournament. Given time, you're both sure to climb further up. I'm positive of this. So, to congratulate Hatsu on her hard work and dedication, I'll be giving the victory to her. I hope neither of you get offended by this, since in my opinion, this match was ultimately a draw.
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 3:43 pm
~ Tie Breaker ~
Winner: Hatsume!!!
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