|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 11:06 am
Book 1 Chapter 4
What I could only assume was a few hours later, I began to wake from unconsciousness, and believe me, it ain't fun.When you wake from unconsciousness you don't just wake up and get on with your life. For a few seconds you are dazed, confused, and have no idea who or where you are. Then all of the sudden everything snaps back into your head, to tell you the truth, it was a pretty rude way to wake up. After I went through all of that, I heard that familiar female voice speaking, she was saying, "What are you talking about? I am the great Ninja Yuffie!" "Huh?", was what answered her. It could only have been Sora who said that was speaking, so I sat up and took a look around. We were in a small little room, probably in the Hotel. Me and Sora were laying on opposite sides of the bed, and from the sound of things, he had just woken up too. "I think you might have overdone it a bit Squall", Yuffie said while looking back over her shoulder. Squall! I looked over and saw the man we had fought, I could not believe I had fought and stood up to the legendary SeeD Squall! "It's Leon", he corrected. For a second I was confused, but then I remembered that he changed his name. "Why did you change your name?", I inquired. "Because I wasn't able to stop the Heartless from destroying our world, my old name is a disgrace to me now." "Enough about his life," Yuffie butted in, "how did you get a Keyblade?" "Yes, that has puzzled me as well," he agreed, "how can you posses a Keyblade when your friend already has it?" "Well, it is kind of hard to explain, but I will try to. You see, I am not from this world," I started to explain. "Well who isn't from another world in this place?" aked Sora. "No no no, I mean I am from a different Dimension, I was taken out of my home and given extrodenary powers by a mysterious being, those powers allow me to make any weapon out of thin air, copy any special power, and travel between the Dimensions." I finished, it was a small explanation, but I thought it was sufficient. There was a long pause, and it was beginning to get uncomfortable. But I didn't want to break the silence while they were registering this information, finally Leon spoke. "Well, that was definatley moreinformation than we expected top hear, but it definately explains things", he responded, "So, why did you come here?" "I came to stop the Heartless from destroying the worlds, what else could I be here for? But I think it would be good for you to explain the situation to Sora." "Ok", he complied, and we proceeded into an explanation of the Heartless and Ansem. But when we were about to enter another room to meet with one of Leon, and Yuffie's acquaintances a Heartless suddenly appeared in the room. "Yuffie! Go!", shouted Leon as he turned to face the Heartless, "Okay guys, lets go!"
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 2:07 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 7:37 am
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 7:48 am
Chapter 5 The Courtyard
As soon as Sora and I were at his side, Leon lunged at the Heartless, but it jumped over the stab and instead got a smart kick that sent it flying through the window. Leon quickly vaulted through the window after it. Sora and I followed him through the door, and when we caught up with him he had already destroyed the Heartless, but I could see plenty in the shadows, just out of sight. Leon must have seen them too, because he told us to ignore the smaller Heartless and find the leader.With that he ran off, probably to protect the innocents. So with our orders Sora and I ran the other way down the alleyway, ducked down through a low arch, and came out in the courtyard of the Second District. Suddenly a group of four shadow and two soldier Heartless appeared to block our path. "We can't get around them, we're going to have to fight. We'll split it, three for me, and three for you," I said as I analyzed the situation. "Alright, would you do the honors?" Sora replied as the two uf us called out our Keybaldes. "It would be my pleasure." With that I jumped into the center of the group, dividing it in half. As I pushed away my half Sora made sure that the other half could not attack me from behind, he nimbly stepped in front of them and immediatly cut one down. Meanwhile one of the soldiers leaped at me, I managed to dodge out of the way and knocked it across the courtyard. While my back was turned the two shadows jumped on me and proceeded to beat me hard on the head. To shake them off I did a fast spin that flung them off of me, and while they were down I finished them off. When I finally turned to face the soldier I saw it running through a door, probably to get help. "One's escaping!" I shouted to Sora as he eliminated his last foe. "Not for long," he answered, and both of us chased after it. We ran through the door and down into another courtyard. The moment we got down there we heard a ZAP and a moment later Donald and Goofy came crashing painfully down on me and Sora. "The Key!" they said when they saw Sora's Keyblade, but then they looked over to see my Keyblade and exclaimed, "What? Two Keys!?" "Yeah," I sighed, crawling out from under the pile, "but it seems we don't have time to talk now. we've got company." A second after I said that the ground started to shudder, and giant stone pillars rose to block all our exits. Next about ten soldiers appeared around us, trapping us in their circle. This was going to be a long day.
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 7:53 am
Chapter 6 A Fight and a Friend
"Got a plan for this one?" Sora asked as the Heartless circled us. But I only got to say one word because all at once they lunged at us, "Jump!" The four of us jumped, but as it turns out, I wasn't so lucky. One of them managed to hit my shoe, which sent me spinning to a hard landing on my back that nearly knocked the wind out of me. I did manage to croak out, "Get them! While they're in the middle, don't let them out!" though, and with that we surrounded them. While fighting we did get a few injuries, but we had a good supply of potions that worked miraculously when treating our injuries. Fortunatly, whatever they did to us, we brought it back to them tenfold. I was glad to say that I wasn't tired when we finished them off, because I knew what was coming. The moment we defeated the last Heartless the cavalry arrived, first the ground started to shake some more, then I saw a gleam of light in the sky and a giant, purple, enchanted armor fell with a loud CRASH, right in front of us. "Oh man," my companions complained as they prepared for more. "Don't worry you guys," I called back, "Guard Armor may look tough, but he is really a pushover compared to other Heartless we will face eventually. "If you say so," was Sora's answer. "Okay, this guy needs to be beaten one piece at a time. Sora and I will go for the arms and you two will go for the feet," I explained to Donald and Goofy, "When we are done with the hands we will join you, okay? "Alright," they said in unison. But the Armor decided to make the first move, it flew into the air. "Oh man," I sighed, I knew exactly what it was doing, and shouted, "Get out of the way!" Too late, we all got crushed under it, but it quickly got up and prepared for another attack. I got up and ran forward to prevent it, and when it started to spin its arms I brought my blade to meet it, it fell to the floor, stunned. "Come on, while it is down!" I called as the others joined me. Together Sora and I ran up to one of the hands and put all our weight into a double-blow that destroyed it. When we moved towards the other hand though, Gaurd Armor jumped up and then split up. The remaining hand made a reckless dash at Sora, so I ran in front of it, and swung my blade. Unfortunatly, my Key got caught between two of its fingers and I was pulled along for the ride. I then dug my heels into the ground, used the hand's momentum to spin it around me, then swung it high and brought it crashing to the ground, sticking its fingers into the ground. After we finished the hand off we turned around to see that Goofy was trapped under a foot (the other already being destroyed) barely keeping himself from getting crushed, and Donald was inefectivly blasting magic at the torso, which was spinning like a top. Sora and I both wordlessly ran forward, Sora knocked the foot off of goofy, and I followed up by jumping as high as I could, and then brought my Key point first into the thick, metal shell. The force of my blow was so powerful that it went through one side and completly out of the other! The foot dissapeared in the tipical puff of black smoke. I was about to turn around, but Donald got hit hard and was sent flying into me before I could. It took me a little while to get up, but when I was up I saw Sora, Donald, and Goofy were holding the torso back, giving me time to recover. So I picked up my blade and ran to help them. A moment before I reached the armor I heard a loud THUNK, and when I looked up I saw a lance going straight through the Armor's head. Next there was a sudden blur of green, and a strange figure jumped onto the torso, grabbed the lance, and jumped incredibly high into the air, head still on the lance. The four of us watched in awe as the figure flew almost beyond sight, and then fell down incredibly fast, landed easily, and then brought the head smashing to the ground. The be-headed torso then disappeared in a brilliant flash of multi-colored light. The figure stood up and turned to face me, he was about my age, tall, wore blue pants, a green T-shirt, and had short brown hair. He also looked quite strong, courageous, and even foolish with the wide grin he had plastered on his face, in other words, he was the kind of guy I could easily get along with. "So there are others like me," he laughed, "My name is Albert, what is yours?"
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 8:01 am
Chapter 7 Things aren't what they seem
"Kenny, what do you want with me?" "I have come to join you, you didn't really think you were the only Defender did you?" he answered. "Excuse me," Sora interrupted, "but what is going on, and how did you jump so high?" "Ah, my apologies," Albert explained, "I'm not really explaining things for you, I am just like him." He pointed at me and continued, "I am a Dimension Defender, and I have control over the wind, that is how I jumped and landed so easily." "Man, I guess it was kind of selfish to think I was the only one that was given special powers. But why are you joining me?" I asked, I was trying to wrap my mind around all of this. "Because I can't do anything unless I join you, you were given the power of travel. That is a power that is given to only every other Defender, I have been given the power of repair, my job is to seal the dimensional rifts you create and help you on your journey. Whether I like it or not I must follow you, the Voyager is the leader and the Mender is the assistant." he replied. Whoa, this had just put things into a whole nother perspective. I wasn't just someone that followed the hero and made sure he completed his adventure, I was the hero in another story. But there was something I did not understand, if we were sent here, did that mean something was going wrong? Was there something that was manipulating the dimensions into chaos? "Do you know why we were sent here if everything is supposed to play out like normal?" I asked, hoping to god that I was just thinking to much. "Man, you really are clueless aren't you? He must have wanted you to find out from me," Albert sighed, "There is a powerful enemy, I don't know his name, but he is pulling all sorts of strings to make sure that the dimensions collapse. From what I heard he is just some sick b*****d who likes to see people suffer." Damn it, I had hit the jackpot. Mental note: From now on, don't think so much. I turned to face Sora, things were going to get even more dangerous than I thought they would, but if I thought right, the difficulty would only come when we went face to face with Ansem. Our enemy was sure to be with him, waiting till the most critical moments to tweak the way things were meant to be. "Sora," I said, "It is now more important than ever that I go with you. If I don't then this lunatic is sure to win, sending this world into darkness." Sora nodded, he may not have understood everything but he did understand that if I did not come, all would be destroyed in this world. Donald though, seemed skeptical. "Why should I believe that?" he demanded. "Would you take the chance of leaving us here? If what Albert says is true, then even the King is in danger!" I shot back. This seemed to hit a nerve, he may not have believed me, but he did care for his King's welfare. If there was any chance that the King was in danger, he would have to try to take preventative measures. Still, there was one problem. "Well, our ship can only fit three people, it would be impossible to take the two of you with us," snapped Donald. "That won't be a problem, take me to the ship," I replied. With that the five of us went through a large pair of doors, and into the First District. Our adventure, had just taken a dramatic turn.
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 8:07 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 11:28 am
How do you people think th latest chapters are?
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri May 05, 2006 2:02 pm
not bad i lie it u can get good with this....could just me my over active imganination but i think this sounds like it could be a kool game when u finish, but i doubt to get it to be at the moment. biggrin cool
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 10:36 am
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 1:24 pm
[~]"I refuse your Reality.. Not bad, My only problems would the first person perspective it's written in, as i'm not a great fan of First person writing.. but other than that it's not bad. For any of those who Know who I am you'll be happy to know my FF8 fanfic is making slow progress ^^ And substitute my own..."[~]
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 6:58 pm
Do you put that blue text over everything you say?
And if not, why did you put it there?
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 11:17 pm
[~]"I refuse your Reality.. It's my auto post format.. And i have it set up to post that saying at the beginning and end of my posts.. Ok? And substitute my own..."[~]
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 6:34 am
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|