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PostPosted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 2:46 pm


You have a lot of talent and your gallery is very impressive. One thing you may want to work on is your shading as it's a bit flat. Try working more values into your pieces to create a greater sense of depth. Reserve the white of the paper for the whitest of highlights and the darkest black for the deepest shadows, and gradate everything else inbetween. I used to shade like you do too, but I found that studying the bones and muscles underneath the skin allows you to get those shadows placed perfectly, and shading in straight lines/hatching will help to build form.
Like I said, you've got a lot of talent and you're very consistent with the quality of work. But there's always room for even a master artist to improve. smile
PostPosted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 3:30 pm


I ahve nothing to say about it other than it's amazing... I can't draw that well compared to this. It's really good and in my oppinion the sketches would look good with color, more shading, and thats all I have to say

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