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 Posted: Tue Nov 08, 2005 5:21 pm
Poison_Desires CorpseBrideObsesser 
plz be honest but i really wanna know what you guys think of this...constructive critisism plz xp and just ignore that writing at the bottom thats just my god awful signature..." ok to be honest hun, I think it needs ALOT of work.
Victor and Emily were never that fleshy and chubby. They were a bit more skinny and Emily's hair WAS NOT that frizzy.
But otherwise, it's okay work, dear. heart
keep tryingand you'll get better.
A doodle a day keeps the artist's block at bay. lmao heart
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Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 4:10 pm
ok using your guys and other peoples oppinions and suggestions i redrew a couple things what do you think of it now? any more suggestions greatly wanted!
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 11:22 am
[corpseBRIDE] ok using your guys and other peoples oppinions and suggestions i redrew a couple things what do you think of it now? any more suggestions greatly wanted!
i'm sorry to dissapoint ya sweetie, but the change isn't very visible.
Maybe you might want to try to tells us what exactly you changed?
i mean it's ok... 5 out of 10 is what i'd give it, not to be harsh...
here's some of mine. Compare it to that.
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 12:49 pm
gonk r u kidding me!!! ill never be that good!!!!!!!!!!
i made Emilys hair less poofy both there faces thinner and i made Victor body thinner..
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 2:02 pm
its fantastic. They both are great
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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 7:52 pm
bledel_gircrazy its fantastic. They both are great
thank you so much. ^^
that means alot.
Remember: A doodle a day keeps the art block at bay. lol whee
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Posted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 5:42 pm
err...yea..im working on my Emilys.. confused and yes i realize her hands are deformed but i think im getting sick so i was tired i just wanted to get it done..
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Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2005 11:21 pm
[corpseBRIDE] err...yea..im working on my Emilys.. confused and yes i realize her hands are deformed but i think im getting sick so i was tired i just wanted to get it done..
nice improvement. ^^
I like how Emily's figure is more slender and thin in this one.
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Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 9:55 am
*post's a pic from her deviantart page* heart
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Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 12:40 pm
nice. this is another one of mine.
her arm wasn't supposed to be infront of her close up's eyes. ^^"
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Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 12:43 pm
Poison_Desires [corpseBRIDE] err...yea..im working on my Emilys.. confused and yes i realize her hands are deformed but i think im getting sick so i was tired i just wanted to get it done..
I like how Emily's figure is more slender and thin in this one.
no offense, but I really have to say you need alot of work.
although some improvent is noticeable in this one.
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 2:28 am
Poison_Desires CorpseBrideObsesser
plz be honest but i really wanna know what you guys think of this...constructive critisism plz xp and just ignore that writing at the bottom thats just my god awful signature..." ok to be honest hun, I think it needs ALOT of work.
Victor and Emily were never that fleshy and chubby. They were a bit more skinny and Emily's hair WAS NOT that frizzy.
But otherwise, it's okay work, dear. heart
keep tryingand you'll get better.
A doodle a day keeps the artist's block at bay. lmao heart i think that she did an awesome job... i know she asked for critism..before you critisize you should definetely know what your talkin about...Emily's hair was actually a little more frizzy...Victor and Emily are evenly portioned...i know i cant draw like that but can you? you shouldnt really critisize that harshly if you cant keep up to what you think is "good." im sorry but maranda is really good and is still practicing... she just started to draw corpse bride..give ger a break! LOVE YOU MARANDA!!! heart
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 2:33 am
Poison_Desires [corpseBRIDE] ok using your guys and other peoples oppinions and suggestions i redrew a couple things what do you think of it now? any more suggestions greatly wanted!
Maybe you might want to try to tells us what exactly you changed?
i mean it's ok... 5 out of 10 is what i'd give it, not to be harsh...
here's some of mine. Compare it to that.marandas look a lot more like Emily.... yours has nice details and all but doesnt look a whole heck of a lot like Emily...Maranda tried to draw Emily the way she is not the way you want her to look and yes her changes werent significant but they were definetely for the better.. compare the first pic to the second..im her friend and see her changing her pics and showing me happily. you shouldnt try to bring someone down because to me thats what it looks like your doin. I LOVE YOU MARANDA!! heart
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Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 3:47 pm
BrokenYokeLover Poison_Desires CorpseBrideObsesser
plz be honest but i really wanna know what you guys think of this...constructive critisism plz xp and just ignore that writing at the bottom thats just my god awful signature..." ok to be honest hun, I think it needs ALOT of work.
Victor and Emily were never that fleshy and chubby. They were a bit more skinny and Emily's hair WAS NOT that frizzy.
But otherwise, it's okay work, dear. heart
keep tryingand you'll get better.
A doodle a day keeps the artist's block at bay. lmao heart i think that she did an awesome job... i know she asked for critism..before you critisize you should definetely know what your talkin about...Emily's hair was actually a little more frizzy...Victor and Emily are evenly portioned...i know i cant draw like that but can you? you shouldnt really critisize that harshly if you cant keep up to what you think is "good." im sorry but maranda is really good and is still practicing... she just started to draw corpse bride..give ger a break! LOVE YOU MARANDA!!! heart thanx Kel.. sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 7:04 pm
this is kinda Maranda's topic thingy so why are you even posting your pics...couldnt you send it over pms..... jeez... rolleyes
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