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 Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 7:53 pm
hellhound9 Crap, well that was embarrassing. Thanks for pointing that out. That kind of stuff bugs me, especially when I wrote it. na I do that stuff all the time ^^ no problem tho
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Posted: Fri May 22, 2009 1:26 pm
Please give me your brutally harsh thoughts.
The truth of it
Down on your knees
Open up wide
Give a big smile
As you take it inside
Don't worry as you listen
It's all lies, lies, lies
Where's someone to save you
To hold as you cry
To pull you up from all this
Let you run and hide
You listened to their promises
Just like yours
As see-through, cold and cruel, lies lies lies
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 12:47 pm
My favorite part was
You listened to their promises
Just like yours
As see-through, cold and cruel, lies lies lies
This is and great Im glad to say not all poems on here are BS-Im not a huge fan of 'love' stuff if U see my peoms-THIS WAS GREAT AND I HOPE U CONTINE WRITING
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 7:39 pm
WOW, thank you so much, I've never had my poetry praised so. I happen to have a poem I wrote not a long time after that one. It's similar but the expressionm is different.
Death Sentence
Searching for some answers
Tried so, so hard to find
Strained every inch of it
Til it just laid down and died
Battered and broken and ripped and torn
Stand at your own grave forever mourn
That you is gone this machine is born
It's all gone away, gone away, gone away
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Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:38 pm
When you read this don't let the title mislead you and make you think "lovers" unless that's where it takes you, because that isn't where this poem is pigeon-holed into.
Love in the desert
We felt the wind
Like the tides of fate
Pushing us in all directions
Our spirits sought perfection
The wind knew, we could not wait
We ran together
Left the world to stay
Our fears all the same
On the wild winds, ours to tame
Like the sands, all gave way
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Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 9:35 am
The truth of it was my favorite, though when i first read it, the first few lines sounded pretty perverted >,<
or that could just be me x.x
i really like them ;D
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Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 9:57 pm
I N V E E S A B L E The truth of it was my favorite, though when i first read it, the first few lines sounded pretty perverted >,< or that could just be me x.x i really like them ;D LOL. It's open to interpretation. Thank you very much.
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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 10:38 am
I wrote this one awhile ago, in case you're wondering, Raison d'etre basically means reason to live or reason for existence.
Raison D'etre
I woke up today
Feeling kind of empty
I know this life is a spell
Meant to hypnotize me
I asked is there a truth
A reason to our fate
Is searching the only answer
for our raison d'etre
I can hear everything
I can see
I can feel it all
I am at peace
But if I am in your thoughts
My own reason to be
If I exist you could...
Come and save me
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