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Tamawolien

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 9:32 pm


Ooh indeed! XDD
PostPosted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 6:18 pm


I think you're Crystalline Echo is a much stronger version of your previous essence. Nice work on tweaking it. Somehow I envision your Raevan being able to manipulate the crystals that are part of its being to somehow amplify the sounds around it or something of the like. Good luck!

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:53 am


Oh that would be neat! *makes a note* Thanks~ <33
PostPosted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:50 pm


No problem! I very much look forward to seeing your concept come into being someday. ^_^

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 1:37 pm


*nodnod* Me tooooo~

Added a couple of powers :3
PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:45 pm


OKay here it goes!

Your soul resembles a lot like a succubus, but more Irish and it doesn't kill it's victims... Erm rather they kill themselves xD
And if I remember Laz is a succubus.

And maybe add a bit more on how Kyou found the essence, your description seems a bit short.

But overall, good job!

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:47 pm


XD *nods* Incubus I think... I did note the similarities there but I think I could play mine differently enough that it'd be okay...

Good point on the essence, though, I'll think about that!


Edit: Fix'd!
PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 11:05 am


Fel Essence
Crystalline Echo
The sound of the thunder from the great storm was so loud that the very stones of the earth soaked up the sound, and now most of it has been lost to time. However, one particular echo of that thunder was trapped in a small crystal cave, until some of the crystals there absorbed the sound - where they hold it even to this day.

One day, while exploring the caves in the cliffs near Bill's Ranch, Kyou heard a strange sound echoing through the caverns. Following it, he found that it led to a small crystal cave where the sound appeared to be trapped. Intrigued, the scientist spent several days studying the cave and the sound - finally bringing a small bottle from the Lab and reaching into the cave to retrieve a small bit of the crystal that the echos were trapped inside.

I must say, I am very fond of your fel essence concept. I think a few people have attempted some sort of echo concept and have failed because they were unable to think of some sort of vessel or form for the echoes to take so that Kyou could draw them. So not only have you made it so that the echo's have some kind of form but you've made it a pretty crystal which I'm sure will look good when mixed into a raevan design.
(Out of interest, what colour crystal would it be? In my mind I personally visualise a green crystal... But I was wondering what you thought.. XD)


Soul
Gancanagh
A Gancanagh is a type of male Irish faerie that is said to seduce young human women, and sometimes boys.

Wiki Article on Gancanagh ... Another Article on Gancanagh ... Another Article on Gancanagh ... Another Article on Gancanagh

Mmmm. |:
Not too sure on this soul.
Like Tnau said it does sound too close to Laz's incubus soul, and whether or not you play him differently isn't the case.. There are plenty of other souls out there which would make a good match for your crystalline echo. In fact - when I was browsing through your references for Gancanagh I saw this faerie that actually sounds more suitable;

The Gandharavas


Land of Origin: India.
Other Origins: None known.
Other Names: None known.
Element: Earth.
Appearance and Temperament:
The Gandharvas are extra small faeries who live underground and possess vast musical talents. They will cause humans no harm, but will avoid us if possible.
Time Most Active: All year.
Lore:
Some of the few references to these native Indian faeries which still exist are found in old Sanskrit poetry. Most of the information which can be found about them discusses their musical talent and does not mention how or where to find them, their origins, or any other useful information.

Where to Find Them:
Inside hillocks and caves in India.
How to Contact:
They seem to shun human contact, but you might win their confidence if you share a love of music and are willing to spend the time to get to know them.
Magickal and Ritual Help:
Undetermined, but some vague Sanskrit references hint that they may have once, long ago, joined humans in worship and praise of the deities.

The fact they live in underground caves - like where the crystal was found, seems fitting. Plus you could have all sorts of fun with the soul capture, Shadow could visit the faeries and lure one of them into being soul drained by tempting them with the crystal; as if they had such an interest in music I'm sure they'd be keen to have a look at it.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 12:45 pm


Ooh o3o

Indeeed... I see what you're saying about the soul and I'll definitely think on it. I just basically didn't want something like ... a normal animal of some kind XD

The other thing I considered was a butterfly - because of the whole storm caused by butterfly beating its wings and etc - but I know moths and so on are off limits ... Sooo yea XD
PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 12:59 pm


Don't let that stop you from using a similar soul Manda. Kyou specifically named the King Cobra and Moth souls to not be used since she has plans. But you could try a butterfly if you want! After all, my Raevan's a snake soul and Kyou accepted it. So don't think the whole species those two souls are in are to be totally ruled out. ^_^

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 3:00 pm


True... I'm also a dork, though, and wanted some kind of mythic creature~

If Platty doesn't mind I may just go with her idear here *trots to edit first page*

Ou, and I'm nooot sure what color. Green would be nice, but also maybe ... smoky/grey purple? Like the color of storm-clouds :3
PostPosted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 10:10 pm


As far as the thunder link, please see my most recent comment in Kuuro Kitten's concept thread, if you're interested! smile Good luck!

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PostPosted: Wed May 06, 2009 2:19 pm


I took a look a while back, thanks ^_^
PostPosted: Fri May 08, 2009 2:56 pm


Manda
True... I'm also a dork, though, and wanted some kind of mythic creature~

If Platty doesn't mind I may just go with her his ((8D))idea here *trots to edit first page*

Ou, and I'm nooot sure what color. Green would be nice, but also maybe ... smoky/grey purple? Like the color of storm-clouds :3

Awesome. Glad you liked the suggestion. ^u^
Good point.. The colour of thunder. ;D

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PostPosted: Sat May 22, 2010 8:40 pm


*nudges up* heart
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