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havishanta

PostPosted: Fri Dec 26, 2008 4:51 pm


I know. It always makes me Q_Q

lol XD

No. What really gets me is the lack of authors who can do an in character Hiei. ESPECIALLY in OCxHiei fan fics.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 2:15 pm


I am WAY guilty of that. The majority of my fics are HieiXOC and it's easily the hardest thing I write. I've re-written one of my fanfictions about four times trying to get them right.

I think, though, that if you can write it up to where they actually fall in love (however grudgingly) then it's okay to be OOC with Hiei a LITTLE bit. Because in the show he is never in love, and therefore just the process of making him fall for someone makes him OOC. I can forgive that to an extent.

It's when this happens that I have to stop reading:

OC: OMFG HIEI I WUB YOU

Hiei: OMFG I WUB YOU TOO KISS ME!!!!

*dies*

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havishanta

PostPosted: Mon Dec 29, 2008 4:14 pm


(died along with HIEILUVER only by laughter) XD

no. You know something, somewhere, went terribly wrong with OOC writers when this pops up.

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(was resurrected just to die again from bleeding of the eyes. The doctors have had many YYH lovers deaths recently correlating back to this banner.) XD
PostPosted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 6:58 pm


That is terribly disturbing. I think I'll have a heart coronary now.

*returns*

I also hate it when Hiei is made emo/scene/goth or WHATEVER by writers. I mean, I know he wears all black (really, it's just a black cloak and black pants...) but he's NOT goth. He doesn't have a style; he's a demon! If you're going to call Hiei goth then you might as well call Yoko ancient Roman because of his toga. *headdesk*

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havishanta

PostPosted: Sun Jan 04, 2009 11:12 am


HIEILUVER
That is terribly disturbing. I think I'll have a heart coronary now.

*returns*

I also hate it when Hiei is made emo/scene/goth or WHATEVER by writers. I mean, I know he wears all black (really, it's just a black cloak and black pants...) but he's NOT goth. He doesn't have a style; he's a demon! If you're going to call Hiei goth then you might as well call Yoko ancient Roman because of his toga. *headdesk*


A loud thump echoes the streets of California...

HAHAHA! ROFLMBO!

Yoko...ancient Roman...

Aw, c'mon people that was funny....

...

Okay, maybe I'm just in one of my high moods that I share with my lovely lil' OC Sachiko, which, btw, YYH fans, I am trying to not make a marysue. 3nodding

Hehe...I just came up with a plot bunny.

Yoko got his toga from Ancient Rome. He was there in Ancient Rome. He was a god in Ancient Rome. Hmm... rolleyes
PostPosted: Fri Jan 09, 2009 12:11 am


havishanta
I know. It always makes me Q_Q

lol XD

No. What really gets me is the lack of authors who can do an in character Hiei. ESPECIALLY in OCxHiei fan fics.
The OC in most of the really bad ones tends to be very Misa-ish. Misa may be cute, but she can be annoying in large doses.

Broken Hearted Hiei


Broken Hearted Hiei

PostPosted: Fri Jan 09, 2009 12:12 am


HIEILUVER
If you're going to call Hiei goth then you might as well call Yoko ancient Roman because of his toga. *headdesk*
TOGA! TOGA! TOGA! lol
PostPosted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 1:51 pm


lol. Dude, if I ever go to comicon, I am going to hunt down Yoko cosplayers just to yell "TOGA! TOGA!" at them. XD

havishanta


Broken Hearted Hiei

PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 11:27 pm


You should totally get it on video too.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 7:04 am


Omg...NOTHING could describe the level of awesomeness that would hold. XD

havishanta


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PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:45 pm


Except getting the chance to actually meet the real Yoko and yell it at him. XD
PostPosted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 6:53 am


hahaha! XD I wonder what he'd do. XD Especially if I was just some random stranger!

havishanta


asinwolves

Dapper Detective

PostPosted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 7:30 pm


I love you all so much. I'd like you to know. XD I LOLed like crazy reading this thread.

Sweet Snow has been the topic of rants by me to STRANGERS, I hate it so much. I didn't even like it the first time I READ it in a fanfic. I thought "Hiei's not a ********. o.O"

Demons have ice cream, I'm sure. Hiei's not naive - childish - innocent - or uberbitchy.

I remember watching an episode recently, and him telling someone that percentages were for poker. I thought "He's played poker, but he doesn't know what the ******** ice cream is. I see. *nod*"

I hate, HATE, when people write Hiei half the time. It's not even about him being difficult - it's that they obviously don't love him as goddamn much as they think, because they don't understand his personality at ALL.

He's not QUIET. Hiei doesn't talk much less than Kurama, as far as I can tell. He's sarcastic, dry, and a irritable, even. Not once has he been cruel to Kuwabara. His cracks at him are just that; not what some fans seem to interpret it as through their hate for Kuwabara.

I admit - I haven't gotten around to the manga (though I do know the important differences) and I personally don't enjoy watching it in Japanese. I'm madly in love with Justin Cook. Sue me. So I don't KNOW just HOW different the dialouge is - but as far as I can tell by Hiei's facial expressions, and the others around them - he's not BASHING Kuwabara.

People make him out to be some naive t**t with an ice cream obsession and a Kuwabara-flaming Neopet Guild.

He can be harsh, but the impression I got was that Hiei felt about Kuwabara like he did the rest - that being WHY he poked fun at him. He's kinda serious, and not particularly playful - but he's just pressing buttons. If he honestly hated Kuwabara - well, we'd see a very different attitude toward him, I'm sure. And Kuwabara's obviously not dumb enough to mistake CRUEL HATRED for sarcasm and being the butt of Hiei's snippy jokes.

They fight like family, really. If it makes Kurama laugh, then it's OBVIOUSLY not something horrible.

And as for Kuwabara bashing - does KURAMA bash him? Because omfg, WHAT THE HELL. That is wrong. So wrong on so many levels. You can tell Kurama doesn't think he's the BRIGHTEST, cause he ISN'T, but Kurama hardly pokes fun at Yusuke.

When it comes to the four of them (who are friends. Goddamn FRIENDS, I TELL YOU - sorry. xD I'm shouting now.) Kuwabara is the butt of Hiei's jokes, Hiei is the butt of most of Kurama and Yusuke's jokes - Yusuke mocks Kuwabara as much as Kuwabara mocks him - People generally don't poke fun at Kurama. xD He's too goshdarn adorkable. Why would they? xD


So, that is a peeve ^ xD Failing Hiei and Kuwabara, who quite honestly have a odd friendship - though still one all the same. They wouldn't hang OUT, but they're a team, and they respect each other, though they're personalities and ideals clash, therefore they don't always show it. >.>

------

Now to talk OOC.

Logically, you can't be completely IC in a fanfiction. But there are boundaries - things you KNOW about them, to decipher to appropriately judge what they would do in a situation they've never been in.

Kurama for instance has shown signs of being a little bit lighthearted and silly when out doing something like going to the movies or the park for whatever reason. He's shown that he can be like biggrin and THEN, only after something explodes or something, his composure will change - and he may then start to fake =] to not startle anyone. You take that, something you've seen slightly, and build.

Not make s**t up. XD

Yoko and Kurama talking just plain pisses me off. Since they AREN'T TWO DIFFERENT PEOPLE. D: He's simply changed thanks to his human form - but he IS the human. Yoko is Kurama is a human. Yoko does not exist any longer - unless Kurama can return to his demon form. It's a different personality - but not within the same body. It's not a split, it was a simple change. Kurama is just not the Kurama he once was.

OOC, sorry. XD

OOC is only bad when someone back Kuwabara ...let's say, rape a girl.

It's OOC simply because we know for a FACT that is NOT who he is!

Keep in mind his good-nature, dim yet friendly brawl-loving honor code having self - it's hard to go OOC.

My pet peeve is basically when people just don't know what the ******** they're writing.

You learn enough about most of them to play a character wisely. All you need is some logic to decide what's in them and what's not.

Yoko Kurama never came off as a perv to me. >.>I know we only met him briefly...but. o.O

Fangirls with twisted fantasies that can't write, is all it is.


I rambled. XDD I made no sense, I'm sorry.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:40 pm


Yeah. Okay, here are some of my BIGGEST pet peeves.

1) Kuwabara being a perv.

Obviously Kuwa is sentimental. We could see that from the beginning. But he is NOT a perv! Kuwa-chan would NEVER hurt a girl, would never DISRESPECT a girl, and is VERY CHIVALROUS!
Stupid writers. D<


2) Hiei becoming soft.

Now I know this is kinda opposite of what we've been talking about, but whenever Hiei let's his guard down to an OC only a FEW days after they've met it PISSES me off.

Look at it this way. He knew Yusuke for a YEAR and NEVER told him his past. He never opened up to him, or Kuwabara, or ANYONE. The only person he ever opened up to was Yukina, and even with Kurama, from what I can tell, they don't have heart-to-hearts REALLY, Kurama just analyzes Hiei and reacts accordingly.



Guys, if I ever post my HieixOC fan fic on here, PLEASE make sure I don't have Hiei go soft (at least at the wrong time or too early or anything.) I will freakin' MURDER myself if I commit any of the felonies being discussed in here.

Aw crap, I hope I haven't made any character's OOC. (scans over fan fic)

havishanta


borderline_mary

PostPosted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 4:47 am


Well, Kuwabara's been shown (in the Japanese, several times) to be somewhat of a perv on occasion. He made a crack about taking advantage of Miyuki when s/he was unconscious after the fight with Yuusuke, and several times he's seemed genuinely enthusiastic about the prospect of dirty movies. Granted, I suppose I'm not sure what constitutes "perv" in this context, but while he's quite respectful towards the women he knows personally, he's also a teenage boy.

As for Kurama and Youko talking . . . as far as I know, there's still debate about that. I happen to share Teekaymon's opinion on the subject, but even so, I've run internal arguments that sound vaguely like Kurama/Youko arguments. Mostly I just try to work it as two separate trains of logic and instinct fighting each other, rather than two personalities; though it can sound like two personalities because he's got two very different sets of priorities at almost constant odds, and when things get hectic I'm sure there's overt conflict. It CAN get tiresome to see those weird, out-of-the-blue Kurama/Youko chit-chat sessions in fanfic, but I've also seen the dual/split thing done well and with justification. Some of it's blurred because the dub didn't explain things the same as the sub on the topic of Kurama and Youko; hence why there's still debate.

OKAY. My own pet peeves:

Hiei singing. Just. No.

Hiei crying under any but the most ******** circumstances. Hell, I had to use temporary insanity to get him to cry in one of my fanfics, and even then, I eventually axed that scene entirely because it still made me cringe, even WITH the insanity backing it.

Kurama as a weepy, wibbly little bundle of angst. He's about the most complicated character in the show, and I can guarantee that as much angst as might be there -- and there's plenty, don't get me wrong -- it's not even close to the majority of his personality.

Hiei as a weepy, wibbly little bundle of angst. There's even less excuse here -- sure he's got the most angsty backstory of any other character, but his personality is anything but self-indulgent and self-pitying. For frack's sake.

Yuusuke telling Keiko she's a horrid b***h. I don't know if I can really even talk about this one without descending into RAGE at the severe OOC.

Hiei killing Kuwabara in anything other than a freak accident. Not gonna happen, re: does not hate him, also knows Yukina likes him. Hurting Yukina = categorical anathema.

Yuusuke betraying or intentionally letting down any of his friends or loved ones. I just -- loyalty and self-sacrifice are two of his MAJOR DEFINING CHARACTERISTICS. GAH.

Hiei + Domesticity. In any form.
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