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 Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:08 pm
heyy!!!
all of ur poems r soooo good...
-GIRR-
snowing down as winter comes
white as blankets they start to fall
the crunching sound uneader my feet as i sart to walk
sometimes i stander starting to think
how will i ever fall asleep
i sit down knowing i get socked from the snow
i just lye there wondering if i should go..
damn i suck at this suff bt ooo well
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Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:23 pm
lol i think it was nice^^
and evry1 has made great poems and bad poems so dont put urself down.
GOOD JOB!
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Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 3:48 pm
^^ oie then thnx q berry much.....^^
ur the coolest friend ever...T^T
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Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 4:39 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 2:47 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 3:08 pm
ok, if i may ask, are there anymore submitters for a poem? if there isnt then i hope to post the ratings and official comments very soon please!^^
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Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 8:42 am
Awesome poems everyone!! So much imagery in them biggrin
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