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Dragonaz

PostPosted: Wed Oct 12, 2005 2:56 pm


Fuzzy Necromancer
Somebody voted "out of character" and didn't comment. >_o

I kind of have the whole message asking people to tell me how and why it's out of character for that reason. -_<
Maybebecause they took the descriptiveness of it and thought that it was something else. it's what someone not very good at stories might assume.
PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 4:34 pm


wow thats awesome!

~BaDGuRl_123~


Fuzzy Necromancer

PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 5:59 pm


Thank you. n_n
PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 9:24 pm


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Dragonaz

PostPosted: Sat Oct 15, 2005 3:32 pm


Ooooooo,very nice. I loved it when Miroku said he'd get more of a reaction out of the comatose andthe newly dead than Sango. >.< Ouch. That would hurt.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 1:31 pm


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Dragonaz

PostPosted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 4:21 pm


Oooo, very nice. I want to see what happens with the chopsticks.......Or what happened to be more exact..
PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 8:05 pm


Upate please! The suspense is too much!

Dragonaz


Fuzzy Necromancer

PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 9:35 pm


Miroku stared out at an empty chair. He was bored. It was his shift to keep watch, with nobody to talk to, he felt like he would soon pass out from lack of mental engagement. He felt something wet, and turned to see Sango sticking her tongue in his ear. "Up already?" he asked, grinning. Sango just leaned forward as he reached back and massaged her rear.
The wind blew the doors open. Sango and Miroku were joined by Kagura, wearing nothing but a hairpin. As Miroku leaned out and removed his shirt, he heard a voice call. "They can wait there turn." A long-nailed hand grasped his shoulder, and he found himself facing Inuyasha. "Come here cutie."

Miroku woke up the others with his screaming. "What's wrong?" Sango asked. "Anything attack?" Shippo asked nervously."N-no, just a bad dream." Miroku said, waving the subject away. "Well whatever it is it sure made you scream like a girl," Inuyasha snickered. Miroku shuddered and inched away from Inuyasha with a fearful attitude that perplexed him.

Miroku was backed up against a chair, and it gave him quite a start when the afortmentioned chair kicked him in the head.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 1:47 pm


rofl That was hilarious! Miroku! What a sick dream!

Dragonaz


Dragonaz

PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 2:54 pm


Are you gonna update?
PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 10:17 pm


You worte a pretty long paragraph.
It's not bad. smile biggrin 3nodding

KagomeMay


Fuzzy Necromancer

PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 12:16 pm


I will update. >>;

I'm just at a bit of a block right now, and I'm working on several other stories. =/
PostPosted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 2:29 pm


Kay. I know the feeling. on another sit,i have like, 10 stories going..

Dragonaz


Dragonaz

PostPosted: Thu Nov 10, 2005 12:42 pm


KagomeMay
You worte a pretty long paragraph.
It's not bad. smile biggrin 3nodding
You thouught that was long? Wow.
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