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KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 8:15 am


He did say something positive.

And thanks for agreeing with me! I feel all fuzzy inside heart
PostPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 10:50 am


Sorry. You might want to put a note at the top, or even take this down if you're in the process of revising this and don't want people to judge it on the basis of what's here.

XD You're welcome, Kirby. 'Though I'm not sure my support means much, what with my being, oh, barely old enough to be on Gaia, haha.

d e s d e m o n o
Crew


Serenity Reed
Crew

PostPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 11:05 am


Well, Mooney, you gotta be prepared for people to say stuff like that. Anyway, I continue to assert that revision is nothing but a good thing. Kirby made me so depressed once, I rewrote my whole story. xd And now everyone likes it better! So just have hope and keep at it! Go ahead and let it get to you: you may be surprised what happens when you really have that passion in your writing of 'I want people to love this'!
PostPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 4:13 pm


True story. Wow. Why do I always have that effect on people?

KirbyVictorious


d e s d e m o n o
Crew

PostPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 4:18 pm


You're just that harsh.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 15, 2008 7:06 pm


For the same reason, Kirbs, that everyone thinks I'm emo. It seems I always get exposed whenever I feel down, so I get pitied, picked on, and generally looked down on even when I'm smiling. mrgreen
rofl Don't worry, I agree with you most all of the time.

Serenity Reed
Crew


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:36 am


I schee....okay mrgreen
PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 3:14 pm


erm... when did this get off the subject of my story? whatever. The thing is, I was having a pissy day that day... Besides, I've never had anyone talk to me the way Kirby did, and so it stung for a bit. And I have a right to be pissed, I think. I work hard on things. However, let me have a cooldown day, and you'll see I'm not half as pissed. It's also pretty hard to take a "yeah, what she said," when it was something like that. 4laugh

Pheonix Dreams


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 3:23 pm


Chillax. It just, you know, proves I'm right, which we had already established.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 8:44 pm


xd I don't think you're helping, Kirby.

d e s d e m o n o
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KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 9:05 pm


It happens.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:23 pm


heart Come now, we all work hard! the critics are there for a reason--either to bash you for your inadequacy or to construct you. Luckily, I beleive everyone here has the latter for their mindset. domokun

Serenity Reed
Crew


Pheonix Dreams

PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 5:14 am


Sorry, I didn't really realize how emo I was being when I wrote that.

But either way, It's just stupid that something that hurt in the first place... is getting told to me twice. It hurts just as much the second time ya know...
PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 5:45 am


MOre motivation to fix it!

You know your story is luffly. NOW GO MAKE IT SEXY.

KirbyVictorious


Serenity Reed
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 10:58 am


xd YES!!! SEXY!!!!!!!!!
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