SmilingRain
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What songs would my soul sing without you?
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Those stars in the sky know to much for their own good.
Those were actual lines in some of my failed poems.
sweatdrop No poem is "failed", as long as it is written by what you truly feel. Nothing is more beautiful nor moving than true emotions, and being true with onesself. However many people may think it is "not good", there are always a few it touches deeply. Remember, words spoken or written in this case, from the heart are the truest and deepest words that have ever been heard/read.
Beautiful lines by the way. I like the second one lol.