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 Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 8:40 pm
First round of Rp excerpts added x_x;;;
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Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 4:07 pm
Out of your two fel essence concepts, I really enjoy your desert coral concept the best. It's a little simple but that makes understanding the concept incredibly easy, which I think is good, because..really? The mirror one confuses me some. It, like Ebony mentioned, sounds like its on the verge of manmade-ness and it doesn't sound as ...colorful I guess as the coral concept.
Moving over to your souls, I like them all and how easily they associate with the coral essence, but I personally would like to see more of a contrast. It's nice to see such similarity but sometimes bringing two worlds together can create a wondrous thing! Though there's nothing bad with similarity either! @___@ Ah, I'm ranting. Sevilin is good and he is composed of the mermaid tears and the sea fairy soul. But then again there's one's like Mouse's Dayo who is made of the great eagle and the cloud of despair (is that really that big of a contrast?! XD) and she turned out gorgeous as well. I just..uhhh. I think I'm trying to say, don't stay focused on one field of souls? YOU HAVE A WORLD TO EXPLORE /end rant.
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Though I love otters. ...And I believe an otter soul would be greatly appreciated by me and my Raevan o w o; I'd MAKE my Raevan befriend yours if it was an otter, LOL.
[the end of kaurii's pathetic critique]
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Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 9:10 pm
Desert Coral description updated =w=
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 9:36 am
Backwards water essence added! Name suggestions are greatly appreciated XD
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Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 2:46 pm
Main soul changed, and new essences added! CRIT PLEASE! >.>;;; *shot*
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Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 7:33 pm
wahmbulance The guardian's been changed! Run for cover! *shot*
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:54 pm
Guardian profile updated! pirate
A note, the profile is the one that was submitted for round 1 in the Zul meta contest.
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Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 5:09 pm
Added one more soul, need more suggestions and crits!
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Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 9:22 pm
Poll added! Vote pleeeease ;A;
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Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 4:14 pm
Complete guardian revamp! pirate
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:46 pm
Oou, I like the desert coral!
Would love to see more details on the guardian, though~ Like exactly what happened with losing his body and getting it (another one?) back and all. Or is that going to be revealed over time? >.> <.<
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:50 pm
Oh. My. God. I love your essence!
Maybe add a bit on how Kyou found it?
But wow, nice soul combo biggrin
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:51 pm
The back ground info is going to be revealed through the "Developmental Writing" things I'm doing for my guardian, and the link to the first one is in the guardian post at the bottom C:
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:53 pm
Aaah! I see, that works then~ XD I'm just curious now lol
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 4:38 pm
I like him. I like his Nickname too. Blink. I know you had some trouble thinking up a name for the guy and I think its rather good. I also read the journal entry. I'd like moar please on this loosing and regaining of body. biggrin
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