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and don't get me started on Lacausta and 4000. Your books are brilliant and you improve as you write more and more!

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I like David! He's so average yet, here he does soemthing that seems so unexpected of him.

Yay! I shall wait for more! I want to see if we'll find out what Janine hadn't finished saying. I'm kinda hoping for a really happy ending, but she seems to have all these problems that could be trailing after her. :/
I'm scurred for her now, and worried for both of them.

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I really like this. The 'we' narrations, in particular. My only complaint was that some parts seemed a little... er... melodramatic? Not quite the right word, but oh well. There are other ways to demonstrate how much he was hurt than "it rent a hole in his heart", yes?
-shrug- Then again, if that's how he thinks about it, I can see that, he seems a bit sentimental as a person. So. Yeah. Looking forward to more (there WILL be more. Right? Right?)

This one was really good David has really been stepping up and Janine doesn't understand much of whats going on mostly because she has been the one hurt most... If David takes it at little steps at a time he can break her and help her more than she thinks he can. On a side note I laughed a bit at the first part - “Do I? Do I whore myself out every day? What d’you think? I’m a HOOKER! All I do is answer booty calls from dawn to dusk!”

But then as I read on and read when David told her she wasn't a hooker but that she was a prostitute it kinda surprised me and at the same time made me sad when she thought that was one of the nicest things someone ever told her. Partly because I didn't know there was a difference between the two. But it appears being known as a prostitute is better than being known as a hooker...

Heheh thats what I love about your writing even the smallest amount can give me an amazing amount of thought to put forth. The last segment shows she is still having second thoughts about David but she felt the need to write in it. Also the entries that she wrote of "Dear God, ******** you!" prove that she has had more emotional stress over the duration of her days as a prostitute but at the same time keeps the idea of her sanity locked away in a diary. This diary will be the main central focus of her pride and conscience and how much she will improve over time.

As for terms with prostitute and hooker are concerned I shall do some investigating later and figure out the differences on them.

Hmmm, Ic to the hooker/prostitute part.. and regardless I figured the diary more of a entry into her heart and what she truly felt about life and where her happiness was concerned... but well see more soon right? BTW: keep it up I'm loving it more and more smile