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 Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 8:15 pm
We all make mistakes sometimes but...
*sits beside redmind200* Hmm... it doesn't seem as though any one has come up with a poem for in here... lol I may just have to come up with one just for the heck of it.
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Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 12:58 pm
yeah, you're right, mmh, well, I'm looking forward to your poem razz
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Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 1:09 pm
We all make mistakes sometimes but...
I'll come up with one a little late this week X3 I'm busy as heck for a while. sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 2:11 pm
::Walks into café and sits down alone.::I have come up with a poem.... So I shall write it.
"As the world turns,
And the stars shine bright,
I will always be here.
As the tides come and go,
And the moon stays white,
I'll stay here.
If the world stops,
And the stars don't shine,
I will fade away,
Only a memory."
Hope you like it.... I might come up with a short story.... Soon.
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Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 3:28 pm
We all make mistakes sometimes but...
A five minute poem that I wrote for a friend, who is about to graduate.
Don't cry; don't fear
Do not shed a tear
For all you leave behind
will still mind
they want you to succeed
to grow, learn and lead
your own life...
so spread your wings with strife
leave your fears in the dark
we'll still be here. Mark
my words, your dear friends
will still be near
forever more in your heart
Yeah... in my opinion the last two lines kinda kill it but still.
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Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 3:33 pm
May we use a poem we already wrote?
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Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 3:43 pm
::Snaps.::I love that poem, so lovely.
Good job, I applaud you.
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Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 5:52 pm
-Zoye - Chan- ::Snaps.::I love that poem, so lovely.
Good job, I applaud you.
Yours is very good too. ^_^
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Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 9:04 am
all poems are welcome. Those two were sweet, so I'll add one:
Tears lost in memories,
where the heart
no longer
has it owns dreams
We both loved
what we wanted to see
but the mirror broke
and we no longer saw
our own reflection
leaving behind
our feelings
we parted ways
looking for
another image
that was ourself
hope you like it wink
and Juno, you can write all the poems you have here wink
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Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 10:24 am
I want to fly away
*snaps* very good redmind200. ^_^
...and never look back
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Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 1:22 pm
::Snaps::That was awesome! I loved that one too!
And thank you Luckylee.
Soon my short story shall be placed in here.... But it's not really a story as to an odd scene from a book I plan to write one day.
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Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 1:31 pm
::Claps once and sighs::Okay, let me see what the out come of this short story-ish like thing will be.
There is no title just to let you know.The world around you was spinning. A blur of colors, and voices. You could hear your mother's voice, full of worry. Your father's voice shouting at you, to get up and stop pretending. Cold tears fell on your face from the figure above you. Pain shot up through your entire body, followed by a cold heat. Is this what it felt like to die? To be torn away from the world? To be taken away from your loved ones?
You coughed up blood. The hot sticky fluid rolled down your mouth, onto your neck and down. A distant scream echoed in your ears, you were losing all consciousness. You barely felt the hand caressing your cheek softly. Soon everything went black, but the sound was still there, just barely.
Pleads filled your ears. 'Please! Please don't leave me! Please...' It all ended, the pain was gone. You felt as if you were flying, you didn't have a body. Light filled your vision, and no more pain, no more suffering. Your heart ached for the ones you left behind, when you saw their faces. A tear rolled down your cheek, and then. Nothing...Ta da!!
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Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 3:50 pm
Alright, this is a poetry entry:
Dark Ideas
An animated darkness is falling
Falling to blanket the world
World where the night sings
Bringing a dark clarifying light
Lights glowing bright black
Black carelessly oddly illuminates
Ill seen is the beauty of the dark
Marking dark joys with reality
Cities flood with flowing dark ideas
Ideas that mysteriously come alive
Alive by creating and destroying
Toying with reality and fantasy
Fantasy that comes alive at night
Lights envelope the world with darkness
Darkness that glows and shivers
Shivers not from cold but exhilaration
Nations all around stare in awe
Awe of such pure innocent majesty
Causalities of a shining eruption
Interruption of the pain of sufferings
Muffling the demons of all creatures
Features that shimmer shaded forevermore
Never to be rashly frozen in time
Time eagerly running for an eternity
Fitting this overwhelmed world snugly
Passionately changing the lands beauty
Beauty that grows toward absolute brilliance.
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Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 4:04 pm
::Snaps::I love that poem too!!
Good job Juno!!
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Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 4:10 pm
OOH, it seems this is becoming very interesting, nice story zoye-chan, I loved it.
Juno Jo, keep those poems coming, I just can't get enough of them, keep it up wink
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