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 Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 4:58 pm
This thread is why we are in the AFG.
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 5:58 pm
When you do this kind of stuff, don't forget about the experts - Elvgren (my personal favorite), Vargas, Frahm, Buell, Petty, and even Nagel. You can see all of them here. I kept them in mind when doing this redline. It's not perfect - not sure how much I like that back leg - but try to keep in mind that pinup artists push it. You have to push the curves one way or another.
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 6:02 pm
Dr. Valentine mountain pony ps - and her left calf is huge compared 2 her hip and her right calf can i claim artistic license on that one uhhh if ur into elephantiasis maybe... but lol i dunno i bet u could leave it and be fine. i think the calves are the least of ur worries
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 7:37 pm
That redline doodle there has outclassed me irreparably. I actually have Vargas, Ruiz and Royo art on my walls. mountain pony Dr. Valentine mountain pony ps - and her left calf is huge compared 2 her hip and her right calf can i claim artistic license on that one uhhh if ur into elephantiasis maybe... but lol i dunno i bet u could leave it and be fine. i think the calves are the least of ur worries ouch?
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 7:51 pm
man this thread is being very educational
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 8:37 pm
Dr. Valentine mr_smite: I must have pressed reply while you were still working on that post because I didn't see it before. I see what you mean about the heels, they are a touch long aren't they? A touch long and possibly not at the correct angle; consider redrawing the heels as if they were a solid piece, akin to those platforms without the separated heel on them, and once you're satisfied with the placement, carve out the middle section. The planes on the bottom of the toes are well defined, so simply extending them will keep the heels in the same perspective and length. Also, I kinda like the red on the second image because it emphasizes the linework, adds more contrast. If you go back to darker reds, you probably want to add lighter tones to the top of her torso, which will also add volume like what you're doing with the color and shading on the legs.
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 8:57 pm
Dr. Valentine That redline doodle there has outclassed me irreparably. I actually have Vargas, Ruiz and Royo art on my walls. mountain pony Dr. Valentine mountain pony ps - and her left calf is huge compared 2 her hip and her right calf can i claim artistic license on that one uhhh if ur into elephantiasis maybe... but lol i dunno i bet u could leave it and be fine. i think the calves are the least of ur worries ouch? omg so i reread wot i wrote and i didnt mean to sound like a big b***h when i said "least of ur worries" i meant like...it's not that big of a deal?? like u could leave it and focus on other areas more and be aok sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 9:36 pm
mountain pony omg so i reread wot i wrote and i didnt mean to sound like a big b***h when i said "least of ur worries" i meant like...it's not that big of a deal?? like u could leave it and focus on other areas more and be aok sweatdrop haha it's cool i didn't think you were gon' play me like that we homies mr_smite: i these are things to think about. I think i am going to do a fair amount of work on it tonight
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 12:14 am
i dont have anything to say that hasnt been said except maybe it might look super sexy if the cigarette went between her thighs a little bit you know like a pole or like she was ridin it wink
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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 9:44 am
I keep feeling like... if the cigarette is going to be placed in the crotch-ish position, it should be pushed towards the phallic- in your original version (anatomical worries aside- everyone else had good advice on that) I kept wishing that you had either placed the cigarette somewhere else, or PUSHED the humpage. If you're going to play it up, play it up, if you know what I mean? If she's supposed to be doing something sexual to that cigarette, I'd let her, otherwise it looks just like you weren't sure where to put the cigarette and that's just where it fell.
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:03 am
Okay, next revision the cigarette is gonna get some lovins.
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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 1:17 pm
Poll dancing that cig would look ******** hot.
Then again I am from Vegas soo....>_>
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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 4:14 pm
here's my feedback (feel free to take with a grain of salt): i made the figure rounder so as to give more shapes to play with. what i like about the pinup style is their use of contrast between wide and thin shapes to make the most out the curves for womanly wiles.
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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 6:56 am
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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 7:49 pm
spork your style is delicious
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