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ivan5555599999
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2005 4:04 pm


Ayonegamina
it's from a kid anime & they are not midgets but little girls. mrgreen

call em as you will...it still won't change what they are rolleyes
PostPosted: Sun Sep 04, 2005 7:16 pm


Falling


So many voices,
All talking at once,
Filling me with anger,
Sadness,
Despair.


And now I'm falling,
Through and everlasting darkness,
Towards shattered dreams,
And broken hopes,
As sharp as cracked glass,
Falling towards a swirling chasm of doom.


Clutching my head,
Shaking,
Tears flowing freely,
Words shouted at me,
Lies spread,
Like the ever flowing river,
Out among all the truths,
Trapping them and
Turning them dark.


Now I have fallen,
Reached the bottom,
Its over,
My hopes and dreams all shattered,
Piercing my heart and wrists.


Too late my blood,
Like the ever flowing river,
Spread amongst the lies and dark truths,
Cleansing them...


So now the lies are truths,
And the truths are revealed.
Too late,
My life it had to take,
To show the truth among all the lies.


So I lay dead,
Among hopes and dreams,
Once again whole,
Among pure truths,
And a small smile graces my features.
Its over,
I am done falling,
I have landed and I am free.

One of my friends wrote that poem.

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ivan5555599999
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 05, 2005 5:16 am


X_Sparkie_X
Falling


So many voices,
All talking at once,
Filling me with anger,
Sadness,
Despair.


And now I'm falling,
Through and everlasting darkness,
Towards shattered dreams,
And broken hopes,
As sharp as cracked glass,
Falling towards a swirling chasm of doom.


Clutching my head,
Shaking,
Tears flowing freely,
Words shouted at me,
Lies spread,
Like the ever flowing river,
Out among all the truths,
Trapping them and
Turning them dark.


Now I have fallen,
Reached the bottom,
Its over,
My hopes and dreams all shattered,
Piercing my heart and wrists.


Too late my blood,
Like the ever flowing river,
Spread amongst the lies and dark truths,
Cleansing them...


So now the lies are truths,
And the truths are revealed.
Too late,
My life it had to take,
To show the truth among all the lies.


So I lay dead,
Among hopes and dreams,
Once again whole,
Among pure truths,
And a small smile graces my features.
Its over,
I am done falling,
I have landed and I am free.

One of my friends wrote that poem.

but it not rymes
PostPosted: Mon Sep 05, 2005 11:53 am


ivan5555599999
X_Sparkie_X
Falling


So many voices,
All talking at once,
Filling me with anger,
Sadness,
Despair.


And now I'm falling,
Through and everlasting darkness,
Towards shattered dreams,
And broken hopes,
As sharp as cracked glass,
Falling towards a swirling chasm of doom.


Clutching my head,
Shaking,
Tears flowing freely,
Words shouted at me,
Lies spread,
Like the ever flowing river,
Out among all the truths,
Trapping them and
Turning them dark.


Now I have fallen,
Reached the bottom,
Its over,
My hopes and dreams all shattered,
Piercing my heart and wrists.


Too late my blood,
Like the ever flowing river,
Spread amongst the lies and dark truths,
Cleansing them...


So now the lies are truths,
And the truths are revealed.
Too late,
My life it had to take,
To show the truth among all the lies.


So I lay dead,
Among hopes and dreams,
Once again whole,
Among pure truths,
And a small smile graces my features.
Its over,
I am done falling,
I have landed and I am free.

One of my friends wrote that poem.

but it not rymes

not all poems have to ryhme, or however you spell it

X_Sparkie_X

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ivan5555599999
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 05, 2005 12:28 pm


X_Sparkie_X
ivan5555599999
X_Sparkie_X
Falling


So many voices,
All talking at once,
Filling me with anger,
Sadness,
Despair.


And now I'm falling,
Through and everlasting darkness,
Towards shattered dreams,
And broken hopes,
As sharp as cracked glass,
Falling towards a swirling chasm of doom.


Clutching my head,
Shaking,
Tears flowing freely,
Words shouted at me,
Lies spread,
Like the ever flowing river,
Out among all the truths,
Trapping them and
Turning them dark.


Now I have fallen,
Reached the bottom,
Its over,
My hopes and dreams all shattered,
Piercing my heart and wrists.


Too late my blood,
Like the ever flowing river,
Spread amongst the lies and dark truths,
Cleansing them...


So now the lies are truths,
And the truths are revealed.
Too late,
My life it had to take,
To show the truth among all the lies.


So I lay dead,
Among hopes and dreams,
Once again whole,
Among pure truths,
And a small smile graces my features.
Its over,
I am done falling,
I have landed and I am free.

One of my friends wrote that poem.

but it not rymes

not all poems have to ryhme, or however you spell it

sure they do rolleyes
PostPosted: Mon Sep 05, 2005 3:45 pm


@Sparkie:It's beautiful crying /@ivan:It's true 3nodding not all of them need to rhyme

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ivan5555599999
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 05, 2005 5:13 pm


Ayonegamina
@Sparkie:It's beautiful crying /@ivan:It's true 3nodding not all of them need to rhyme

all good poems do 3nodding
PostPosted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 7:03 am


ivan5555599999
Ayonegamina
@Sparkie:It's beautiful crying /@ivan:It's true 3nodding not all of them need to rhyme

all good poems do 3nodding
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 7:05 am


Ayonegamina
ivan5555599999
Ayonegamina
@Sparkie:It's beautiful crying /@ivan:It's true 3nodding not all of them need to rhyme

all good poems do 3nodding
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yus true 3nodding
PostPosted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 8:08 am


ivan5555599999
Ayonegamina
ivan5555599999
Ayonegamina
@Sparkie:It's beautiful crying /@ivan:It's true 3nodding not all of them need to rhyme

all good poems do 3nodding
xp

yus true 3nodding
they are right... you don't have to rhyme... but i do... but you don't have to.

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ivan5555599999
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 8:29 am


broken_soul09
ivan5555599999
Ayonegamina
ivan5555599999
Ayonegamina
@Sparkie:It's beautiful crying /@ivan:It's true 3nodding not all of them need to rhyme

all good poems do 3nodding
xp

yus true 3nodding
they are right... you don't have to rhyme... but i do... but you don't have to.

yes u do
PostPosted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 12:58 pm


ladidadidadiladila

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 1:49 pm


Ayonegamina
ladidadidadiladila

only boring unfunny poems not rhyme
PostPosted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 6:11 pm


wrong 4laugh

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ivan5555599999
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 6:21 pm


Ayonegamina
wrong 4laugh

left mad
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