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 Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 2:53 pm
User-name: Sir Mime Posting: Everyday Time zone: (GMT 04:00) la Paz ~Character Data~ Name: Lehran Village: --Not yet posted-- Clan/Bloodline: Non yet Element Affinity: Air, water Age: 12 Gender: Male Rank: Student ~Appearance~ Headband: Non yet Height: 5'1 Weight: 90 Hair: Black and short Eyes: Hazel (If sad, white - IF happy black) Physical Description: He is young and very short. His face is very pale, not much else to say. Clothing: He has a white shirt, with a black jacket, and some black pants. Background: His background is very usual. As he grew up he was abandoned by his family, all he currently wants to do is become a medical ninja and help protect his village. His current goal is to not be like his family who abandoned him. Personality: Very friendly, hyperactive and calm when he wants to. (Some may consider him bipolar) Other: Missions: S: 0 A: 0 B: 0 C: 0 D: 0 Jutsu: Ninjutsu- Genjutsu- Taijutsu- Summoning Contract- ~Stats~ LV. 1 Experience: 0/100 Hp: 10-2X1=8 Cp: 3+1X1=4 MHp: 10+0x1=10 All stats I have increased (Trained history): ~ 6 Base ~ 20 distributed Strength: = 6-10= -4/2= -2Dexterity: = 6-10= -4/2= -2Constitution: = 6-10= -4/2= -2Intelligence: = 10-10= 0/2= 0Wisdom: = 10-10= 0/2= 0Charisma: = 12-10= 2/2= 1Chakra: = 12-10= 2/2= 1Dodge Bonus: 10+0-2= 8Base Attack Bonus: 1 Attack Melee: -2+1=-1 Attack Ranged: -2+1=-1 Base Save Bonus: 0 Fort: 0-2= -2 Rex: 0-2= -2 Will: 0+0=0 Damage: Taijutsu: 1-5 ~Skills~ Swim: (Str) Balance: (Dex) Escape Artist: (Dex) Hide: (Dex) Move Silently: (Dex) Sleight of Hand: (Dex) Tumble: (Dex) Use Rope: (Dex) Perform Puppet Play: (Dex) Concentration: (Con) Chakra Control: (Int) Craft: (Int) Disable Device: (Int) Forgery: (Int) Knowledge: (Int) Repair: (Int) Research: (Int) Search: (Int) Alchemy: (Wis) Listen: (Wis) Read Lips: (Wis) Sense Motive: (Wis) Spot: (Wis) Survival: (Wis) Treat Injury: (Wis) Bluff: (Cha) Diplomacy: (Cha) Disguise: (Cha) Gather Information: (Cha) Handle Animal: (Cha) Intimidate: (Cha) Innuendo: (Cha) Perform: (Cha) Seduction: (Cha) Ninjutsu: (Chk) Genjutsu: (Int) Taijutsu: (Str) Fuuin Jutsu: (Int) Kawarimi: Kunai: Shuriken: Ninja Weapons: Sneak Attack: ~Possessions~ Money: Ryo: Equipment: - Valuables -
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Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 3:25 pm
User-name:Crazy Al-kunPosting:I try to get on every day Time zone:EST ~Character Data~ Name:Ishii(Last), Arashi(First) Village:Takigakure(Not yet permitted, so subject to change), but initially from Yukigakure Clan/Bloodline:N/A Element Affinity:Water Age:12 Gender:Male Rank:Academy Student ~Appearance~ Headband:Above his elbow, on his right arm, right where his jacket sleeve cuts off(only apply after he becomes a genin) Height:4'10" Weight:100 lbs Hair: Light Blonde Eyes: Black, with gray swirls in the iris(Family Trait) Physical Description: He's short for his age, and his body is built in a way that emphasizes strength and speed, but takes a toll on his defense. His head is round on the top, and his chin comes to a point. He has a scar right next to his right eye, that's in the shape of a slash. Both of his ears are pierced, the left with 2 rings on the lobe, the right with one. His nose is small, but pointy.His skin tone is somewhat tan, but not much, because of the years of cold that he had in Yukigakure. Clothing: He wears a fur-collar jacket with the sleeves rolled to just above the elbow, and a net-woven shirt underneath. His jacket has a big pocket in the lower bottom, that holds all his shuriken. He wears a necklace with the same pattern as his eyes, and never takes it off. He has a tanto hanging around his hips, and wears black capris, with the Kunai pouch strapped on. His sandals are different from normal sandals, because they were designed like tennis shoes. There's a tounge, and 2 laces crossing each other. But at the end of the shoe, the top is open. The soles of his shoes are a tad taller than normal, simply because he's self-concious about his height.He wears a bandanna on his head, with his bangs curling out of it. Background:
Pre-academy
When he was a child, he lived in the big Ishii family house. His parents were Ishii Hanako and Ishii Ichigo. The Ishii Family house is in Yukigakure, the native village to the Ishii clan. He was taught how to read and to write there, and how to do arithmetic, too! He was without worry. When he was very little, his older sister, Minako, gave him a necklace. She told him, "This necklace bears the curse that we all must carry. If you ever need help, call upon the necklace, and it will guide you. And if you call on me, I will always be here to help." She had crouched down, and smiled at him. A beautiful woman of 17, with brown hair, fixed in the back with hairpins. He was only 4 at this time, and his father had already left the house by then, leaving only his sister and his mother. So, he wore the necklace every day. For the next 2 years, he grew tremendously, and the necklace had to be refitted many times. Over this time, they had moved out of the Ishii Family house and into a small house that suited their needs. The mother got a job, and so did Minako. One day, when Arashi was 6 years old, he and Minako went for a walk through the training grounds, into the woods.
He hadn't worn his necklace that day.
Minako had taken the day off to look over Arashi. He remembered her being in a happy mood. She was going to be wed in the next few weeks.So they were walking, and holding hands.There was a man there, practicing, whom they hadn't seen. He threw a Kunai at a target, and Minako walked in front of it. She heard metal zinging through the air, and turned around to see what it was. It went straight through her chest, and she fell to the ground. Arashi watched in horror as she fell face-first into the ground, and the man who threw the kunai rushed over to her. He flipped her over, and looked at her pulse. The man began to cry, and Arashi saw who it was.
It was her fiance.Tears streamed down his face, but he didn't notice them. For he was already grabbing Minako's fiance by the collar, screaming into his face.
"You didn't even bother to look, did you!"
"I hadn't considered there might be someone walking out!"
Arashi let go of him, as he realized something. His sister's words had ehoed through his head: "This necklace bears the curse that we all must bear." It was his fault. He spent several hours, in the snow, and once the cold was unbearable, he went back into his little house. When his mother found out, they went and got the body. They burned it, and his mother mourned for the next day entirely. That day, Arashi swore to always wear the neklace, as remembrance that his sister is always there for help.
His mother, Minako's Fince, and Arashi all moved to Takigakure in order not to become depressed at the sights that made them remember Minako.Her fiance, Hiroshi, lives right next to them. He entered the academy at Takigakure 2 years later, where Arashi got a tanto for his birthday, and a scar right next to his right eye. They were practicing shuriken throwing, and a badly aimed shuriken swung back at him and slashed his face.However, the rest of his academy years were uneventful.All his spare time was devoted to training,eating, and sleeping. He was average in his class, but he worked the hardest. Eventually, he went up to the mid-high range of skill in his class.He's currently in his last year of the Academy. Personality:Usually a fairly cheerful person, he never dwells in the past.When he has a goal, he keeps at it until it is certain that he should move on. He has pride, but not enough not to run away when a battle seems hopeless.People who are selfish, who are troublesome, or just plain annoying piss him off to the point that his personality is completely opposite of his normal, calm, cheery person.When he is surprised, he is also very irritable,Training is essential to him, and he spends most of his spare time training, although he may do vigorous training occasionally, it is uncommon to see him trying to run up a mountain and back down. Other: Missions: S: A: B: C: D: Jutsu: Ninjutsu- Genjutsu- Taijutsu- Summoning Contract- ~Stats~ LV. 1 Experience sad 0/100 Hp:10 Cp:1 MHp:10 Strength:9 | mod =-1 Dexterity:7 | mod =-2 Constitution:10 | mod =+0 Intelligence:8 | mod =-1 Wisdom:10 | mod =+0 Charisma:11 | mod =+0 Chakra:7 | mod =-2 Dodge Bonus:8 Base Attack Bonus:1 Attack Melee:0 Attack Ranged:-1 Base Save Bonus:0 Fort:0 Rex:-2 Will:0 Damage:1-6 Taijutsu: 1-6 Kunai:1-2 Shuriken:1 Tanto: [any other weapon you use] ~Skills~ ~Possessions~ Money: Ryo: Equipment:
Kunai
Shuriken
Tanto Valuables: The Necklace given to him by his sister
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Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 10:30 pm
Mime:
Will save is based on Wisdom here (it appears that you play D&D...)
Taijutsu attack applies Attack Melee. 1-6 - 1 = 1-5.
Academy students don't have skills.
Vipolar isn't a word.
Al-kun:
Ice is not an affinity, see for yourself.
You used 21 distribution points, subtract an ability score of your choice by 1.
Str mod is -1, making attack melee 0 and kunai (Melee) damage 1-2.
Dex mod is -2, making attack ranged -1 and Rex save -2.
After you listen to them and remove the unused skills (which for you should be all of them), please delete the ALL CAPS reminders; they're unnecessary and certainly not aesthetically pleasing.
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Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 2:58 am
Sword in the Shadows Mime: Will save is based on Wisdom here (it appears that you play D&D...) Taijutsu attack applies Attack Melee. 1-6 - 1 = 1-5. Academy students don't have skills. Vipolar isn't a word. . ~ Changed - never played D&D I just got confused ~ Changed ~ Changed ~ I ment bipolar. (English, not my first language)
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Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 8:48 pm
It wasn't an accusation, just that you based it off of the same stat you base in on in D&D, if I recall.
I know what you meant, I was just feeling a bit sassy.
Oh, not necessary in my opinion, but apparently required now is to only list the skills you have, which for you would be none. Other than that, anybody within 7300 miles of here would be hard-pressed to find even a clerical error in your profile.
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Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 3:35 pm
User-name: Lord Vincent Marquis Posting: I am on nearly every day and make at least a few posts a day Time zone: GMT-6 ~Character Data~ Name: Hato Fukurou Village: Ex Kumogakure now from Kirigakure Clan/Bloodline: Hato Element Affinity: Water/Wind Age: 12 Gender: Male Rank: Academy Student ~Appearance~ Headband: None Height: 5' 0" Weight: 110 lbs Hair: White Eyes: Black Physical Description: Despite his short stature Fukurou has a strong a lean body which was built through years of training under his father. His short white hair is cleanly cut and somewhat spiked up and he has a short ponytail tied in the back. He has rather pallid skin despite spending a relative amount of time in the sun his skin is unable to absorb sun rays and he cannot get tan. Clothing: Usually he can be seen wearing a plain white short sleeved t shirt with long pants to match. Additionally he wears a pair of black sandals along with a long black coat draped around his shoulders that has a white wing on the back. He also can always be seen wearing a necklace with a rough cut amethyst set into a metal base. Background: He lived an average life within the Kumogakure village always dreaming of the day he would begin his ninja training so that he could follow in the footsteps of his father. This all lasted until the day that the village was attacked and his entire family was killed. He barely managed to escape as he fled from the village now an orphan without a home he turned to the Kirigakure village in search of protection and a place where he could begin his ninja training. Personality: He is a very timid type of person, usually very shy around other and not very social. He can be viewed as more of a loner generally distancing himself from other people. Despite his introverted persona he is a very kind and caring person. His loyalty and friendship would be valued amoung those who get to know him better. Other: To be updatedMissions: S: N/A A: N/A B: N/A C: N/A D: N/A Jutsu:Ninjutsu-None Genjutsu-None Taijutsu-None Summoning Contract-None ~Stats~ LV.1 Experience:0/100 Hp: 9 Cp: 3 MHp: 9Strength:6/2/0=8 | mod =-1 Dexterity:6/3/0=9 | mod =-1 Constitution:6/2/0=8 | mod =-1 Intelligence:6/3/0=9 | mod =-1 Wisdom:6/2/0=8 | mod =-1 Charisma:6/4/0=10 | mod =0 Chakra:6/4/0=10 | mod =0 Dodge Bonus:8 Base Attack Bonus: 1Attack Melee: 0Attack Ranged: 0Base Save Bonus: 0Fort: -1Rex: -1Will: -1Damage: Taijutsu: 1-6 ~Skills~ *As a side note I was banned once before but I was accepted in the roleplay academy. In addition just in case I want to be part of the Kirigakure village.
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Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 5:38 pm
those who have made the suggestions shadow has put out welcome all others FIX IT and thanks to shadow
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Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 8:20 pm
No problem Karite, I enjoy correcting peoples' profiles anyways... Vincent: Your dodge bonus is 8, put that in. Your base save bonus is 0, and all of your saves are -1. Also, not really necessary but for those who don't know the time zones it would be helpful to put in the number (Which I believe is GMT-6 for Central, correct me if I'm wrong.) And now, since I feel bad about not getting much to correct, I've proofread your writing: Lord Vincent Marquis Physical Description: Despite his short stature, Fukurou has a strong lean body which was built through years of training under his father. His short white hair is cleanly cut and somewhat spiked up, and he has a short ponytail tied in the back. He has rather pallid skin, despite spending a relative amount in the sun. His skin is unable to absorb sun rays, so he cannot get tan. Clothing: Usually he can be seen wearing a plain white short-sleeved t-shirt with long pants to match. Additionally, he wears a pair of black sandals along with a long black coat draped around his shoulders, which has a white wing emblazoned on the back. He can also always be seen wearing a necklace with a rough cut amethyst set into a metal base. Background: He lived an average life within the Kumogakure village, always dreaming of the day he would begin his ninja training so that he could follow in the footsteps of his father. This all lasted until the day that the village was attacked and his entire family was killed. He barely managed to escape as he fled from the village... now an orphan without a home, he turned to the Kirigakure village in search of protection and a place where he could begin his ninja training. Personality: He is a very timid type of person, usually very shy around others and not very social. He can be viewed as more of a loner, generally distancing himself from other people. Despite his introverted persona, he is a very kind and caring person. His loyalty and friendship would be valued among those who get to know him better. Other: To be updated
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Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 9:10 pm
All the changes have been made now Shadow.
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Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 9:30 pm
Incorrect.
Your saves are -1, not your stats...
Your chakra and charisma are still 0.
Update that, then you can be on your way.
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 4:27 am
Sir Mime User-name: Sir Mime Posting: Everyday Time zone: (GMT 04:00) la Paz ~Character Data~ Name: Yakushi (Last) Lehran (First) Village: Ptpgakure (Have to ask) Clan/Bloodline: Yakushi bloodline, Maimu clan (Maimu yet from being accepted) (Kouri's approval to have two clans) Element Affinity: Air, water Age: 12 Gender: Male Rank: Student ~Appearance~ Headband: Non yet Height: 5'2 Weight: 90 Hair: Black and short Eyes: Hazel (If sad, white - IF happy black) Physical Description: He is young and very short. His face and skin color is quite pale, yet he always hides it with maimu clan makeup. He is not buff, yet he does not look muscle-less. Clothing: he wears traditional maimu clan clothing: ~ Mime set: Black and white long-sleeves shirt (stripes) and black pants. White gloves and black in the feet, with a beret in the head. ~ Mime chakra makeup: White makeup with chakra for the whole face and any skin visible. Black ink for the leaps and eyebrows. Background: He was a young boy, decendant from the mixture of yakushi and maimu clans, though the yakushi blood overpowered the maimu clans blood, he still had the ability to use maimu clan jutsus, and acrried all maimu clan traits, aswell as yakushi's. His parets were killed by the maimu clan for being considered traitors, of corse, the maimu clan stopped there barbaric act once they noticed how pointless there killing was, and addopted Lehran. Ever since, Lehran was raiced by the maimu clan, aware of what happened, he still hold no grudge since they spared his life. Even though raised by the maimu, he had his fathers jutsu scroll for the yakushi clan and could doits jutsus if trained. Now, he is following his fathers steps of being a great medical ninja and protecting his village. Personality: Very friendly, hyperactive and calm when he wants to. (Some may consider him bipolar) Other: Clan and bloodline stats: ~ +5 Charisma ~ +5 Perform ~ +3 Disguise ~ +1 Read lips ~ +2 Gather information ~ +4 Int ~ -4 Charisma ~ -2 Con ~ -1 to all damage because of the maimu clan clothing ~ Very white skin ~ Talent: Understand and easily use charades and hand signs (They can transmit an entire paragraph easily threw hand signs and charades) ~ Fangs to heal and poison which they control with chakra. ~ Seriously long tongue ~ Resist poison: 1 in 4 chance for a foreign poison and a 3 in 4 chance for a poison already seen. Missions: S: 0 A: 0 B: 0 C: 0 D: 0 Jutsu: Ninjutsu- Mimic jutsu A ninjutsu were the user is able to mimic his targets last attack. The attack does not need required elemental affinity, but it needs the requirements for that attack. The move that was copied cannot be learning by the character with this attack. Cp cost: Copied jutsu’s cp cost. Hurts: Depends on copied jutsu. Heals: Depends on copied jutsu. Requirements: All the copied jutsu's requirements except elemental affinity. Maimu clan only Training days: Clan member is born with this ability Special: It can only copy the last jutsu the target used. Not any of the moves he has. Genjutsu- Taijutsu- Summoning Contract- ~Stats~ LV. 1 Experience: 0/100 Hp: 10 Cp: 3 MHp: 10 All stats I have increased (Trained history): ~ 6 Base ~ 20 distributed ~ Clan stats Strength: = 7-10= -3/2= -1.5= -2 Dexterity: = 8-10= -2/2= -1 Constitution: = 8-10= -2/2= -1 Intelligence: = 10-10= 0/2= 0 Wisdom: = 12-10= 2/2= 1 Charisma: = 10-10= 0/2= 0 Chakra: = 10-10= 0/2= 0 Dodge Bonus: 10+1-1= 10 Base Attack Bonus: 1 Attack Melee: 1-2= -1 Attack Ranged: 1-1=0 Base Save Bonus: 0 Fort: 0-1= -1 Rex: 0-1= -1 Will: 0+1= 1 Damage: Taijutsu: 1-5 ~Skills~ Swim: (Str) Balance: (Dex) Escape Artist: (Dex) Hide: (Dex) Move Silently: (Dex) Sleight of Hand: (Dex) Tumble: (Dex) Use Rope: (Dex) Perform Puppet Play: (Dex) Concentration: (Con) Chakra Control: (Int) Craft: (Int) Disable Device: (Int) Forgery: (Int) Knowledge: (Int) Repair: (Int) Research: (Int) Search: (Int) Alchemy: (Wis) Listen: (Wis) Read Lips: (Wis) 1 Sense Motive: (Wis) Spot: (Wis) Survival: (Wis) Treat Injury: (Wis) Bluff: (Cha) Diplomacy: (Cha) Disguise: (Cha) 3 Gather Information: (Cha) 2 Handle Animal: (Cha) Intimidate: (Cha) Innuendo: (Cha) Perform: (Cha) 5 Seduction: (Cha) Ninjutsu: (Chk) Genjutsu: (Int) Taijutsu: (Str) Fuuin Jutsu: (Int) Kawarimi: Kunai: Shuriken: Ninja Weapons: Sneak Attack: ~Possessions~ Money: Ryo: Equipment: ~ Mime set: Black and white long-sleeves shirt (stripes) and black pants. White gloves and black in the feet, with a beret in the head. ~ Mime chakra makeup: White makeup with chakra for the whole face and any skin visible. Black ink for the leaps and eyebrows. (-1 to all damage) Valuables - Father's yakushi clan jutsu scrolls This profile is edited because of the clan. (Sword in the shadow, please restrain from correcting the profile untile maimu clan is edited and approve)
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 4:41 am
Sorry about that, I believe its done now.
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 2:11 pm
welcome lord and Sir Mime Kouri will do your profile
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:57 pm
Vincent, you're in the clear.
Mime... must.. resist.. urge to correct...
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:02 pm
Sword in the Shadows Firstly, I feel obligated to note that as of the typing of this post, I've no power to operate this approval thread. However, since a week appears unnecessary for a pre-pre-pre-approval, and because there are currently no rules against profile help... ninjaaa: Your Taijutsu attack is 1-5 damage, put that in under damage. Konoha is spelled incorrectly in three instances. Other than that, your profile appears fine. karau: Go to the game system forum, and READ IT. Then, please redo your entire profile... there is some mistakes wit my profile but the captain of the guild helpd me wit some of it i dont need to redo the whole thing and r u a vice captain or something cause u give alot of orders
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