kiriko
I have a problem with Chloe's appearance, 8 yo and 17 yo are "easy" to draw, but 13 years old ? and with a kid outfit ? aaaack T-T
I can kinda understand your story and I think all the panels are planned out nicely, but your writing was a little hard to read at times because it's so small. sweatdrop Anyway, dunno if I helped much.. *envies your art skillz*
Oh, and Princess Nausicaa.. nice job on the pictures... perhaps after a while of practicing you can manage to do your own stuff. 3nodding I know a lot of people who started out copying, sometimes even tracing popular art and little by little they developed their own style and could draw their own pictures and such. Just takes a lot of practice. sweatdrop Some people kinda look down on the whole copying of drawings, but I think it's alright as long as you note that you used references and stuff... People who claim that they came up with it all on their own and didn't copy off anything irk me, though.