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 Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 1:33 pm
I'm half-finished the third chapter. You know, I think the key about these fan fics is that you can't just have your characters fall madly in love or else it's really sappy. You have to ease into things. . . Has anybody else had that same problem? sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 2:37 pm
Yay! I just finished Chapter3. Yes I do realise that I've rewritten the Quidditch match, but I hope people won't be too harsh domokun
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Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 5:45 pm
The age difference is too big for me... What is it? 13 and 17? 12 and 17? Harry being 12 bothers me...
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Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 6:28 pm
Awesome. Great so far. I like how they didn't rush into it, adds to the suspence and makes it more realistic. I hope you'll continue with this story.
The Fluff: It's a fanfiction. It's not real. Get over it. stressed
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Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 8:55 pm
I like it. I've never thought about that coupling much.
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 7:16 am
Gred and Forge I like it. I've never thought about that coupling much.
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 7:50 am
I was also wondering if I get House Points for this? sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 9:31 am
AmunRa I was also wondering if I get House Points for this? sweatdrop
Well, have fun being away for a week. Don't forget to update when you get back!!! Must... read... more...
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 10:19 am
kagome_chan001 AmunRa I was also wondering if I get House Points for this? sweatdrop
Well, have fun being away for a week. Don't forget to update when you get back!!! Must... read... more...
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Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2005 10:53 pm
kagome_chan001 The Fluff: It's a fanfiction. It's not real. Get over it. stressed
It's just...
*shudders*
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Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2005 8:07 am
The Fluff kagome_chan001 The Fluff: It's a fanfiction. It's not real. Get over it. stressed
It's just...
*shudders*
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Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2005 7:14 pm
New chapter! I can't wait for feedback. I'm really excited about it. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2005 9:16 pm
ooh I like it! I cant wit to read more!!
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 8:58 am
Ah! The suspence! It BURNS!!!
Nice job. Full of suspence at the end, very good. Just one thing.
WRITE. THE. NEXT. CHAPTER. NOW! domokun domokun domokun
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 3:42 pm
kagome_chan001 Ah! The suspence! It BURNS!!!
Nice job. Full of suspence at the end, very good. Just one thing.
WRITE. THE. NEXT. CHAPTER. NOW! domokun domokun domokun
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