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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 7:43 am
A Tribe Called Breast This terrorist has rode my saltee nutz so much, he needs a c** pump, Fracshun of an uncut c***e sucked up, raw fish ripped out ya' stomach/ This was my first line for the diss. rofl Fracshun = member of my crew who Makairo dickrides, raw fish = Sushi~X rofl another member of my crew who Makairo dickrides. I'm puttin' it in my sig. 3nodding How the ******** do I d**k ride them? rofl I hardly even give them props on verses you ******** f*****t. You're just sad because I won't even drop a verse for you to cypher to. lolz. Ok, I'll drop a verse. Don't expect effort for this one.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 9:18 am
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 10:54 am
In all honestly, that verse was wack. I was hoping you would actually do something good. The rhyme scheme is worse than you writing this like a haiku, the structure of half the verse is short then long and strained.
I don't know how you think you're good, being serious here now. You in all honesty gave him a chance to actually put forth something that could be described as a VERSE to beat you.
GTFO, don't say you're good, don't say you're the best. This is proof...you have NO ******** clue what it is to write, battle, or anything dealing with rap/hip hop. This couldn't even be described as poetry.
You basically got lucky to even have some sort of rhyme scheme at all. And no, don't strain yourself saying 'oh it rhymes'...I've lived in the south, been to the east, west, and now live in the north. NO accent makes half of that s**t rhyme. Its a bullshit wanna be story telling, its a bullshit wannabe battle verse.
I don't know how much more I can go into depth of how much that ******** verse is crap, bullshit, and doesn't even deserve to be read.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 11:24 am
Maleficent Chaos In all honestly, that verse was wack. I was hoping you would actually do something good. The rhyme scheme is worse than you writing this like a haiku, the structure of half the verse is short then long and strained. I don't know how you think you're good, being serious here now. You in all honesty gave him a chance to actually put forth something that could be described as a VERSE to beat you. GTFO, don't say you're good, don't say you're the best. This is proof...you have NO ******** clue what it is to write, battle, or anything dealing with rap/hip hop. This couldn't even be described as poetry. You basically got lucky to even have some sort of rhyme scheme at all. And no, don't strain yourself saying 'oh it rhymes'...I've lived in the south, been to the east, west, and now live in the north. NO accent makes half of that s**t rhyme. Its a bullshit wanna be story telling, its a bullshit wannabe battle verse. I don't know how much more I can go into depth of how much that ******** verse is crap, bullshit, and doesn't even deserve to be read. smile lol. i like how ur paragraphs go unread. and y r your insults always linked to pieces of your biography? rofl stfu and get out of mommy's basement edit: i was invited here. u b***h about being here and then stay. lolz. so u gtfo
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 11:43 am
Overlord Makairo Maleficent Chaos In all honestly, that verse was wack. I was hoping you would actually do something good. The rhyme scheme is worse than you writing this like a haiku, the structure of half the verse is short then long and strained. I don't know how you think you're good, being serious here now. You in all honesty gave him a chance to actually put forth something that could be described as a VERSE to beat you. GTFO, don't say you're good, don't say you're the best. This is proof...you have NO ******** clue what it is to write, battle, or anything dealing with rap/hip hop. This couldn't even be described as poetry. You basically got lucky to even have some sort of rhyme scheme at all. And no, don't strain yourself saying 'oh it rhymes'...I've lived in the south, been to the east, west, and now live in the north. NO accent makes half of that s**t rhyme. Its a bullshit wanna be story telling, its a bullshit wannabe battle verse. I don't know how much more I can go into depth of how much that ******** verse is crap, bullshit, and doesn't even deserve to be read. smile lol. i like how ur paragraphs go unread. and y r your insults always linked to pieces of your biography? rofl stfu and get out of mommy's basement edit: i was invited here. u b***h about being here and then stay. lolz. so u gtfo It amazes me, you have no concept of reality. If you were smart, you'd read it. Hell I took the time to read that piece of s**t you thinks going to be a KO. Also, my biography? You don't know s**t about me. You have no clue of the people I've battled, the fact I made this place that 'you were invented in'. As I stated in your shitty a** crew, I can take you and strife on at the same time and win. "Mommy's basement"? I believe I've gone through with this already, but I will again. If anybody is still living at home its you, when I have had a day off you're on here 24 hours of it, I doubt you have a job, I doubt you have a girlfriend, I seriously doubt you have friends. I live with friends, I go to college, I work, I actually you know do things and have a life. I guess thats why you hate me, I am what you want to be. Now I'm sorry I'm smart, I have the ability to actually write fully functioning sentences and verses while you well...struggle to write a run on sentence, hell a sentence that actually has purpose. Anybody who doesn't like what you do, you hate on, anybody who tries to help you get past your s**t you view as 'the pinnacle', you hate on. I'm amazed you haven't gone off about how you hate your parents for pushing you to get your ******** a** out of their house. I wonder if you even have a GED...I mean, come on Mak...at one point in time you made yourself a Vegeta character and offered to help me make a Goku one (Note I love how I'm the more powerful of the two as well).... Anyways, you got a point to make? Cause if not, you suck, you lose, get over it. The only reason you have won any of the battles recently is because you go after people who don't normally battle and don't know the proper way to. You want a real one, I told you, I'll kill you...you won't do s**t about it. Oh and if you can't actually read that, because well you're ******** stupid...let me give you a short answer. YOU SUCK
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 12:30 pm
Lol, I didn't make even make a biography about you. I made the ones about Durrtyboi so you wasted your time with that bar.
And The Gaia Rant was a joke. However, I still recieved props for it from Sushi and you even said it was pretty good before you got ya' panties in a twist. And as for the friendslist thing, I was jus' too lazy to delete ya' names since you get banned 24/7. But whatever, I'll drop later. Oh and you're a ******** liar about the PMs thing, you were the only one who made a remark about apologies in them... But you making up stuff for a diss is expected wit' ya writer's block.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:38 pm
rofl this is what i mean. dont b***h f**. i dont care about ur lies. u wanted battlzz
edit: i didnt even read 1 word of that s**t chaos. get a job and stop typing paragraphs that do nothing 4 u
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 1:42 pm
Overlord Makairo rofl this is what i mean. dont b***h f**. i dont care about ur lies. u wanted battlzz edit: i didnt even read 1 word of that s**t chaos. get a job and stop typing paragraphs that do nothing 4 u Lol I call you a liar, you turn around and call me a liar. I call you a p***y in the HHF, you call me a p***y in LG. rofl Thanks for the battle material.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 2:16 pm
Overlord Makairo rofl this is what i mean. dont b***h f**. i dont care about ur lies. u wanted battlzz edit: i didnt even read 1 word of that s**t chaos. get a job and stop typing paragraphs that do nothing 4 u Kid, you can't understand simple things, you wouldn't understand what I say to you. You used to look up to me, now you hate me because I decided to say you needed to work on some stuff. Now you just are a horrid lyricist, and don't deserve any of these titles you have given yourself. Without me you would be nothing, without me LG would be nothing, so in all essence the place that 'made you', wouldn't be without me...the person who first said you might have talent wouldn't be what she is without me. Kid I made you, don't hate me for the fact that you needed me...hate the fact you needed me at all in the first place. Now then, you say you're the best, battle me then.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:18 pm
A Tribe Called Breast Overlord Makairo rofl this is what i mean. dont b***h f**. i dont care about ur lies. u wanted battlzz edit: i didnt even read 1 word of that s**t chaos. get a job and stop typing paragraphs that do nothing 4 u Lol I call you a liar, you turn around and call me a liar. I call you a p***y in the HHF, you call me a p***y in LG. rofl Thanks for the battle material. u r a liar tho. lolz. its pretty obvious. biggrin but you're a little kid so i forgivez u. chaos: no seriously get a job. ur lyk 30 now. werez dat audio from u promised lik 2 yearz ago? lol blaugh
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:21 pm
........ where's the baby oil? ninja
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:22 pm
Phoenix Fist ........ where's the baby oil? ninja in your moms bedroom. i left it there cuz i had to lube up. b***h's a** is tight as ********. rofl
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:29 pm
Overlord Makairo Phoenix Fist ........ where's the baby oil? ninja in your moms bedroom. i left it there cuz i had to lube up. b***h's a** is tight as ********. rofl ur suppozed ta assk fo u take ma s**t, man! no wat takin s**t w/o asskin is? it's STEELING! we lern dat when D.A.R.E came t ma skool. ur a theef. a no gud theef. i hope you go to prizon wit Mystikal so he can slapz you down ta rapes you, and be like, "GET ON DA FLO!!" cuz when you shake ya a** there, you go be like "DANGA!!" na-na na-na, bish!
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:31 pm
Overlord Makairo A Tribe Called Breast Overlord Makairo rofl this is what i mean. dont b***h f**. i dont care about ur lies. u wanted battlzz edit: i didnt even read 1 word of that s**t chaos. get a job and stop typing paragraphs that do nothing 4 u Lol I call you a liar, you turn around and call me a liar. I call you a p***y in the HHF, you call me a p***y in LG. rofl Thanks for the battle material. u r a liar tho. lolz. its pretty obvious. biggrin but you're a little kid so i forgivez u. chaos: no seriously get a job. ur lyk 30 now. werez dat audio from u promised lik 2 yearz ago? lol blaugh I'm 22, probably younger than you. And whats your job? Oh...you don't have one do you... And hey, I'm sorry...I might not have audio to give to you, but atleast its not the s**t you've given for people to listen.
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