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Femmunition

PostPosted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:27 am


Still waiting for someone to accept.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 10:35 am


Aiight I accept. Let's do this. scream

Mageda


Femmunition

PostPosted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 8:50 am


I'll be clear and direct, you wish of a tribe with breast.
Only way you're touching me is if you got errect over internet.

You're insults always miss, while mine constantly hit,
The only time you always hit is if you're taking a bathroom piss.

True to your group name, Saltee Nutz you always lick,
Was constantly on Makairo's d**k and wished you were a chick.

D***, accepting this, you must be desperate,
Masterbate, you always restless, couldn't get this girl interested,

Originally A Tribe of one, now this Tribe is done,
Cut it down to zero, I shot you down son.


(Sorry for the name drop and insults I just needed something to diss you with, sorry I didn't respond quickly, busy with new years and all that. Just to clarify, this ain't a crew battle.)
PostPosted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 4:03 pm


Aiight I'll have my verse tommorow.

Mageda


Mageda

PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 12:16 pm


Aiight sorry this is late. And don't apologize. This is a battle. Brutal is good.

Your rhymes are sloppier than my nob, too bad ya've already left the marks,
by the skin of your teeth ya' hang on to my light-sheddin' words in the dark/

If I was afraid to talk down to a girl this s**t's cocked half-assed in rhyme,
but as ya' master I aint' afraid to erect these foul words to a silicon transvestite/

I've beat you wit' hammers and bricks, and this Breast's laced ya' bras,
news report: farmer's "daughter"'s died in a henhouse chasin' cocks/

Ya' done lost this battle, round two's like a pun gone wrong,
ya' wouldn't have to suffer twins if only I'd put a condom on/

Last bar, put the empty bottles in the pile, it's finally time to ceaz(seize) ya' alcohol-strived *ahem* STRIFED habits,
now I've got a new girl wit' Breast, self-memo: When hard, lick her in the wine cabinet.


(No hard feelings. A battle's a battle. 3nodding )
PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 12:26 pm


i vote Femmunition



First reason is, she had better punches and had a better structure over-all

I felt like Tribe tried to hard to make his punches hit and just messed up his structure and killed his own punch


Vote Femmunition

xSpadez


Mageda

PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 12:28 pm


xSpadez
i vote Femmunition



First reason is, she had better punches and had a better structure over-all

I felt like Tribe tried to hard to make his punches hit and just messed up his structure and killed his own punch


Vote Femmunition

There's two rounds. 4laugh
PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 12:33 pm


xSpadez
i vote Femmunition



First reason is, she had better punches and had a better structure over-all

I felt like Tribe tried to hard to make his punches hit and just messed up his structure and killed his own punch


Vote Femmunition

Oh and wtf was wrong wit' my structure? I rapped it out before I posted it here and it sounded fine to me with the way I flow. Jus' wonderin' what was wrong wit' the structure...

Mageda


xSpadez

PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 12:41 pm


A Tribe Called Breast
xSpadez
i vote Femmunition



First reason is, she had better punches and had a better structure over-all

I felt like Tribe tried to hard to make his punches hit and just messed up his structure and killed his own punch


Vote Femmunition

Oh and wtf was wrong wit' my structure? I rapped it out before I posted it here and it sounded fine to me with the way I flow. Jus' wonderin' what was wrong wit' the structure...



my fault..i didn't know their was two rounds....but ok let me tell u whats wrong wit it. Its too long, like if the line too long it kills the punch..u get me like it should be in a structure and not just everywhere
PostPosted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 12:45 pm


xSpadez
A Tribe Called Breast
xSpadez
i vote Femmunition



First reason is, she had better punches and had a better structure over-all

I felt like Tribe tried to hard to make his punches hit and just messed up his structure and killed his own punch


Vote Femmunition

Oh and wtf was wrong wit' my structure? I rapped it out before I posted it here and it sounded fine to me with the way I flow. Jus' wonderin' what was wrong wit' the structure...



my fault..i didn't know their was two rounds....but ok let me tell u whats wrong wit it. Its too long, like if the line too long it kills the punch..u get me like it should be in a structure and not just everywhere

Yeah but what if there's more than one punch in the bar? It becomes a challenge to condense them. I wish I had my mic wit' me so I could've done this on audio. I have a real... "Unique" flow, and ya'd see that long lines fit in' wit' the way I rap. But it's coo'. Your opinion, jus' makin' observations. 3nodding

Mageda

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