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 Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 8:59 pm
I'm sorry if it goes a bit fast. It'll get better, trust me. I already completed this on ImNotOkay.net.
Jenna's POV
Now, it was the second day of the tour, and I was extremely happy. I had new friends, I had my boyfriend and I get to see the guys from backstage. It was one of my dreams when I was younger, and I couldn't believe that it came true. I woke up and immediately went into the shower, which didn't seem much like a shower, but it had to do. Once I was done, I put my clothes on and did my make-up. By the time I finished, some people had woken up.
"Good morning." Frankie said.
"Good morning." I said.
"So, how do you like things on tour, so far?"
"I love it. I've always wanted to do this."
"That's awesome!"
"Thanks."
"Your welcome." he mumbled while kissing my lips.
"I love you."
"I love you too."
I hugged him and kissed his cheek.
"Aww...how cute!!" I heard not too far from me.
It was Emily. I blushed.
"How much did you see?" Frank asked.
"I saw the 'I love you' till the time you hugged and she kissed your
cheek."
Then, Frank blushed. As we all talked more, everyone else woke up. That afternoon, I began to feel ill. I didn't think much of it, so I just went on with my day. At 4, I was talking to Jackie when I became sick again.
"Jenna, are you okay?"
"Yeah, I'm fine."
"You sure?"
"Yes, I'm sure."
"Alright."
Right after I said that, I fell to the ground. I woke up in Frank and I's bunk feeling slightly dizzy and seeing Frankie's face.
"Do you feel better?"
"A little bit. What happened?"
"Well, you were walking and talking with Jackie, when, all of a sudden,
you collapsed to the ground."
"Whoa. Maybe I should've sat or stayed on the bus today."
"Wait a minute. You were sick earlier?!" he was getting angry.
"Yeah, and you're point is?"
"Something worse than this could've happened to you!!!"
"I'm sorry, okay?! I thought that I felt better." I started to cry.
"That's not good enough! You should stayed here!!!"
By then, a crowd was starting to form around us.
"Stop it!!!!!!! You're acting like my parents!!!!"
"I'm not going to. You need to be safe."
"I don't love you!!"
I ran off of the bus and began to sob. I couldn't believe this. Was this really happening?
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Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 2:51 pm
She's preggers or she got a actual illness. TEH SUSPENSE!
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Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 3:16 pm
I don't get it.
If they're so in love why is she acting like that?
She's one of those money hungry b*tches isn't she???!!!!
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 10:31 pm
It moves a bit fast, but I've never been one for extremely slow ones either, so this is better than some I've seen on other sites. Some of them go SO SLOW. It's fast, but not too fast.
Great storyline too! My guess is she had a mood swing (which is part of being preggers in some cases). mostly it's morning sickness(my sister in law got morning sickness- she hated it)
which goes back to the part about being "sick" (if it was from a book I'd be quoting documenting the author and what page- it sucks when most of what senior English is for is learning how to document book/printed article/Internet quotes so you won't be arrested for plagiarism mad rolleyes And you have to remember it for your college papers.)
Oh crap! I have to do a 4 pg essay for world history still! Crud!
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