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 Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 6:34 pm
confused confused confused
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Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 6:41 pm
wats wit the faces Shenco?
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Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 8:26 pm
Tell more people to come vote on this one. Edit the title
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Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2007 1:21 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 12:22 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 12:28 pm
yea i know, i wonder why people like Jceaz, jaiden, lucky and the rest neva vote.
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 5:39 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 7:22 pm
Well, I'm goin with shen on this one.
For starters, he had a line that mentioned sir as jai's test dummy or sum s**t, that actually pertained to this battle, Sir's punches could have been used on anyone.
And as far as the actual verses go...
Movement and spit dont really rhyme,
razzi and AG was kinda forced.
Shen on the other hand rofl I see that you've got the multi curse. Once you start using multis, rhyming one word at a time just doesnt seem right,
But yeah, for relevance and flow: Vote= Shenco
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 7:24 pm
Oh, and that explaining after every line s**t, was gay.
It distracted from the 2nd half of the bar.
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 10:54 am
Shenco's verse was nice. Had multies and a nice flow, but most importantly he was person specific. The Jaiden line and just referencing Sir Brilliance in his verse gave it an edge because you know it was written for Sir Brillance.
Sir's verse could have been aimed at anyone, like just lines taken from a rhyme book. It started kinda slow but picked up as the verse went on, there were some nice lines.
He only made it to bloopers, now his gayness went O.D.
his profession is d**k blower, and they calling him Oral B
I liked that. But because of the edge the personals gave Shenco's verse I'm gonna give it to Shenco.
So yeah, Vote: Shenco
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 11:38 am
Vote goes to Brilliance, the last two bars were crack.
Shenco may have got it... if it weren't for all the explanation parts confusing the hell outta me.
Brill = Ill
EDIT: But yah... try to say their name so it's specific... or at least some sort of way to identify who ur dissin.
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 12:12 pm
BONA Face Killah Vote goes to Brilliance, the last two bars were crack. Shenco may have got it... if it weren't for all the explanation parts confusing the hell outta me. Brill = Ill EDIT: But yah... try to say their name so it's specific... or at least some sort of way to identify who ur dissin.
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 12:37 pm
Shenco BONA Face Killah Vote goes to Brilliance, the last two bars were crack. Shenco may have got it... if it weren't for all the explanation parts confusing the hell outta me. Brill = Ill EDIT: But yah... try to say their name so it's specific... or at least some sort of way to identify who ur dissin. ... i wasnt talking about that. I meant the s**t he spit was ill. I understood what u meant, but all the explanations could have been held off for later so not to ******** the flow of the rap. EDIT: That or actually apply them into the rap, like some rappers will do.
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 1:40 pm
3-2 brilliance
heh and i aint know that people actually cared to have some type of specific reference to the person they are battling. being honest i though the fact that i am battling shenco was specific enough but hey its not wat i think its wat the audience likes more. heh its they votes that count xd thanks for the votes and the criticism though.
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:53 pm
BONA Face Killah Shenco BONA Face Killah Vote goes to Brilliance, the last two bars were crack. Shenco may have got it... if it weren't for all the explanation parts confusing the hell outta me. Brill = Ill EDIT: But yah... try to say their name so it's specific... or at least some sort of way to identify who ur dissin. ... i wasnt talking about that. I meant the s**t he spit was ill. I understood what u meant, but all the explanations could have been held off for later so not to ******** the flow of the rap. EDIT: That or actually apply them into the rap, like some rappers will do.
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