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School Of Dedicated RPers Captain
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 Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 9:13 am
I think you have a good idea and a great start, but that you need more organization at the very least
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Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 6:08 am
sorry people but i shall be gone for about a week sorry
this RP will be put on hiatus untill then
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Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 10:59 pm
[i finally find this thread and its been put on hiatus... stare just my luck! well ill post here for when you comeback...]
Rose took a deep breath and calmed herself down. She finished getting ready and realized it was still dark out. Grabbing her keys she sighed. "Calm down... Your okay. Not a single scratch on you. It was just a spook..."
Just a spook? Am I going insane!? There's things following me! I should go see a therapist...
Sliding into a jacket she headed out the door locking it behind her.
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 8:31 pm
Michael:
He saw her start to leave the house and figured that was his chance.
"Um...hello there.....i figured id come visit you."
he said. he probably should have thought of a better reason to have come see her. He could hardly recognize her in the dark.
He hated this perpetual night everything seemed to make small bumps or noises.
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 8:34 pm
"Oh hi...?" Rose gave im a confused look. Every so often random guys from her work would come and visit her. She was a bit nervous though. Even if she did love the nighttime and the dark, she had a new perspective on it now.
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 8:37 pm
Michael:
"I figured since we both have stress leave we could get a bite to eat or something" he asked.
She was part of the squad that was there 'that night'. he could still hear the screaming in the back of his mind. the one at the back of the crowd....yelling Forsaken over and over. What was this Forsaken....What did it mean.
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 8:44 pm
"Stress leave? Oh hey, your were back up for the accident weren't you?" Realizing what she said she quickly covered it up. "I uh... Heard what happened. Horrible. Bloody horrible. But anyways, I needa go to work. I can't be late like yesterday."
Her thoughts wandered to the previous morning. She wouldn't even get out of bed until light peaked through the blinds. That's how horrified she was. Shaking the thoughts from her head she gave him a small smile. "I really need to be going. Nice chatting with you."
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 8:58 pm
Michael:
"wait your still on duty?.....oh um well do you want a lift?" he said pointing back at his car.
She was there that night....why didnt she get put on stress leave? he thought to himself.
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:02 pm
[im gunna speed things up a little]
Rose nodded her head and got into his car. "Thanks..." She stared out the window as he started to drive away. In the passanger side mirror, she saw a hooded figure behind her. Looking in the rear view mirror, she saw it. Quickly she began to panic. "Err.. On second thoughts I'll uh walk. I erm... Need the exercise. Can you just pull over right here?" She looked at him biting her lip.
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:09 pm
Michael:
He quickly pulled over figuring it was best to do what she said.
"Are you ok?" he asked
He noticed her constant glances to the back seat so he took a look.
his back seat was a bit untidy but he doubted that was the problem.
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:27 pm
"F-fine. Thanks!" She darted out the car and raced down the street. Turning her head, she noticed two figures this time. She blinked a few times and realized it was only two emo kids.
She entered work ten minutes later. Her breathing was uneven and she tried to calm down. Her eyes shifted around and she kept calm even though she saw the images again. It had come to the point where she couldn't take it anymore. While walking down a hall, she collapsed onto the ground and was trembling. Tears streamed down her face and her voice was more like a plead. "Please... Keep them away from me."
People gave her weird looks as they passed by and started to whisper.
[sorry im tryin to catch up with all my other RPs]
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:38 pm
(thats ok)
Michael:
He tried to catch up but he was practically running already.
He turned the corner only to hear someone crying.
Was it her?
He turned another corner and saw a girl in the middle of the hallway sobbing.
"Rose?" he asked.
He walked up behind her and put his hand on her shoulder.
"are you ok?" he asked her shoulder felt almost like ice.
"Noone is ok.....We are all forsaken!" the girl said as she turned to face him.
her face covered in blood Michael looked on in horror as she slowly stood up and grabbed him. Head to toe she was covered in blood..dark red....Blood. He couldn't move he wanted to yell out but couldnt. he just stood there and the blood covered Rose grabbed his face.
The cold feeling of the tiles on the ground woke him up...he had fainted in the hallway.
He looked up only to see Rose looking at him.
He must have dreamt it all.
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:42 pm
She had gone pale as she looked at him. "Please... Keep them away from me." She began to tremble violently as her voice sounded like a kid begging for candy. Rose buried her face in her hands as the h ead chief found the two of them in the hall.
[i dont feel like controlling NPC's so thats your job for him xd ]
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:48 pm
((thats why im here lol ^^ im all the NPCS))
Chief:
"What the hell is going on here.....For one thing we shouldn't have soldiers crying in the halls...And YOU SHOULDN'T EVEN BE HERE!" he said pointing o Michael.
"I said specifically that all the soldiers that were at the city square massacre were to go on stress leave."
Michael:
"I came here with Rose....And if you told ALL the soldiers to go on stress leave why is Rose still here?" he asked.
Chief:
"BECAUSE UNLIKE YOUR SORRY a** SHE WASN'T THERE NOW UNLESS YOU WONT MY BOOT IN YOUR HEAD GET OUT OF MY BARRACKS"
The chief had always had a short temper...but he got the job done.
Michael:
"What do you mean she wasnt there?" he asked
He finally got the picture...she hadnt told anyone she was there.
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:52 pm
"S-sorry sir. Emotional break down." She stood up deathly pale. "I'll get back to work... Somebody's gotta patrol now that everyone's left..."
Noticing what Michael said she went along with the chief. "Yah... I was to scared to go. Plus I thought you could handle it." The truth was she was the first there and probably the first to leave.
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