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 Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:31 pm
yes the shadows r welcoming and warm, rnt they.
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:34 pm
ninja I'm wearing a lot of white for being the Shadowraven! xp
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Night Of The Shadowraven Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:35 pm
ShadowDaughterofRaven i saw a bunny hopping through the bush. i fallowed the bunny skipping all the way. when i looked up i saw bee. no, not just a bee , A BUMBBLE BEE, a preety little butterfly flew by my eyes, it was the most enchanting butterflie id ever seen. there were flowers and trees and bunnies and bees. humming birds were suking the necture out of the flowers. thier wings flapped so fast it was making me want to tap dance. i stayed for hours every day, and made lots of new friends. once and awhile id come cross a deer or too. my wat alovely place. MY HAPPY PLACE* *of course we all know theres no such thing as a happy ending. cause theres always a bully or two that r askin for a poundin. if u know wat i meen*i like it
you are a great poet
mrgreen ...but the nice stranger with candy had better advice
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:38 pm
thnx. that means alot to me, i like writing poems and i do have, an ocassional soft spot. im more depressing though. LOL
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:39 pm
TheGreatShadowraven ninja I'm wearing a lot of white for being the Shadowraven! xp LOL rofl rofl rofl oh and thnx sooooo much for the braclet daddy!!!!!!!!! i heart u daddy!!!!
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:43 pm
ShadowDaughterofRaven TheGreatShadowraven ninja I'm wearing a lot of white for being the Shadowraven! xp LOL rofl rofl rofl oh and thnx sooooo much for the braclet daddy!!!!!!!!! i heart u daddy!!!! I'm glad you like it! mrgreen
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:47 pm
TheGreatShadowraven ShadowDaughterofRaven TheGreatShadowraven ninja I'm wearing a lot of white for being the Shadowraven! xp LOL rofl rofl rofl oh and thnx sooooo much for the braclet daddy!!!!!!!!! i heart u daddy!!!! I'm glad you like it! mrgreen yea! its really prrty! cant you see me wearing it. by the way, did you like the other poem? or did u want me write another one, i dont mind
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:52 pm
ShadowDaughterofRaven TheGreatShadowraven ShadowDaughterofRaven TheGreatShadowraven ninja I'm wearing a lot of white for being the Shadowraven! xp LOL rofl rofl rofl oh and thnx sooooo much for the braclet daddy!!!!!!!!! i heart u daddy!!!! I'm glad you like it! mrgreen yea! its really prrty! cant you see me wearing it. by the way, did you like the other poem? or did u want me write another one, i dont mind It looks good on you! Yes I like it! blaugh Feel free to share as much as you want!
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:57 pm
thnx. i really like it too. im still thinking of another poem. hold on, ill do another post just for my poems and coments.
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 5:02 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 2:00 pm
so dont wanna get sporked but is broke as hell cant donate to my sis arti aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 5:25 am
i was looking in his eyes. could this be true, is HE back. could HE really have returned? or is this a nightmare i cant seem to wake up from? staring at him was like a being stabbed in the heart. i felt like i was in the grip of a crocodile, spinning ferosiously in a death roll. i was so angry. i couldnt controll my emotions. next thing i know, hes dead. on the floor, infront of me. i never thought this day would come. i was as evil as evil could go. i...... i killed, my...... my very one flesh and blood. my, BIG BROTHER. i cried, and grieved. then i remembered that he got himself into this. he killed my entire familly. leaving not one suvivor. * can you guess who my brother is? and why i was so mad about this?* (p.s. do you like this one, or am i going stale?) lol
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 7:43 am
do you guys think that my poems r goin stale?
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