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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 10:51 pm
As night approached, the twins felt like it took forever to get there. Earlier that day, they had been training non-stop for the local competition. Actually, they had to take breaks for lunch, dinner, and the occasional potty breaks, but pretty much they had trained for the most part. They didn't understand why their sensei wanted them to be the best. At their age, they were unusually talented and gifted. Why would they want to spend so much time working out when they could lead a normal life? Well, that was normal for them.
Looking out onto the western horizon, Hikari noticed an unusual amount of clouds sailing through the evening sky. During this time of year, it was not unusual for them to have rain; however, the amount of dark clouds this time was unusual. He stared at the phenomenon for a moment before turning away from the window and hopping off the sill to find his older twin brother.
Kurai was usually still training at this hour. He never knew when to quit, and this worried Hikari. Even with their harsh training regiment, his older brother wanted to keep going. He never did understand why Kurai insisted on training harder than him. Maybe it had something to do with being the older brother and wanting to protect younger siblings.
Hikari shrugged and wandered to find him.
A few hours later, Hikari had managed to find Kurai and convince him to rest his muscles. If he kept going, then he would need to take a longer break tomorrow, and the thought didn't sit too well with the older twin.
Since the house didn't have many rooms, the twins had to share their room. Their younger siblings shared rooms too, two boys and two girls. Their family was quite large though not as large as their parents' families. Now, those were huge.
Setting down in his bed, Hikari slowly started to drift off to sleep when he heard a loud sound. Startled, he nearly fell off his bed in fright. Unlike his older brother, he tended to be a light sleeper. The slightest noise woke him. At first he hated it, but then he saw the benefits that came from it. For one, he would be the first one to react. Second, it gave the others a chance to either get out of the house or prepare to face off against an intruder.
This time, it happened to be lightning and a lot of it.
So that was what the clouds were doing.
At the sound of another thunder, Hikari jumped and immediately pounced on Kurai's bed as he heard the power go out. It made a creepy sound, and he hated it. He wanted to go underneath the covers of his twin's bed even though they were teenagers.
"What?" Kurai said sleepily. He looked over to their clock, only to find it blank. "Power outage." To confirm his suspicion, he attempted to turn on the light and found himself in total darkness.
"I'm scared," Hikari whimpered, trying to get as close to Kurai without making him irritated. He shouldn't be going to his older brother whenever he was scared especially if it was something silly.
Kurai sighed. It was this way with rabbits and now thunder? Being the older brother he was, he lifted his sheets, showing that he wasn't mad.
Hikari smiled, happy that some things stay the same no matter what age they were.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 10:55 pm
X.x Man, that was too rushed especially the ending. Oh well. I tried.
Prompt: Haunted house.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 6:53 pm
Oh, this is a great idea. Accepted!
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 7:27 pm
Chauriri pushed the front door open just enough that he could squeeze through it and slid into the hall. He let it close behind him, as silently as he could manage. The hinges were rusted almost clean through.
...grah, I just got co-opted to make dinner and have to stop. :/
OK, continuing:
He'd never been in this house before, even though his family technically owned it, had owned it for all of his seventeen years and probably from before then. But they never talked about it, never even acknowledged it, this whole huge mansion crouched in the back acres of their land, almost a part of the forest it resided in.
There were not even any rumors about it.
When he asked his father, he'd ignored Chauriri. His older brother had laughed. "What, that old house?" he'd said. "The only reason you don't hear about it is because it's too old and decayed to fix up, too expensive to take down, and it was stripped empty long ago. I think it's from the 1800s."
"Have you ever been there?"
"Yeah, lots, when I was younger. But it's pretty dangerous - I fell through the stairs one time. Cut up my leg. Do you remember that? No, I guess you were too young. I haven't been in there since." Chauriri's brother had frowned, then. "Might be a good subject to photograph for your class, though. Just don't trust the stairs."
So now he was inside the house, camera in hand. He had intended just to photograph the outside, but when he saw that the entire porch and indeed the door were still intact and the padlock and chain that kept the door lock had been cut or rusted through, he couldn't resist. It's not like he was going upstairs, after all.
The door opened into a hallway. Plants were growing up through the rotting floorboards, and whole parts of the ceiling had caved in, illuminating the house with the light from outside. It was beautiful.
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 6:49 pm
...fifteen minutes up! Dang, I didn't even get to the haunted part. :/ I though I could write faster than that.
Next prompt: BUST DOWN THE DOOR AND EAT ALL THE CHICKENS
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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 5:04 am
Snagging prompt. I have fifteen minutes up my sleeve. (Not that I'm wearing any) I'll start at 12:05, a minute from now.
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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 5:20 am
BUST DOWN THE DOOR AND EAT ALL THE CHICKENS He snickered evilly. Actually, to tell the truth it was more of a snort and a bark, and, seeing as canines aren't renowned for their laughing skills, it was hardly distinguishable from his sneezes. He sighed, this time the sound coming out right. It wasn't exactly the easiest job, being a fox who liked eating chickens and causing farmers grief. His cousin Mr. Fox had had it so much easier; putrid people were easier to allay consciences with. Sniffing, the fox with rather complicated thought processes paced along the ridge running behind several farms. The sun was setting and casting red light and long shadows over the countryside. It was rather idyllic, with the calming sounds of crickets chirping away the last of the sun, a slight breeze rustling the leaves of trees and a river trickling in the distance. It didn't feel right, setting out to rob a chicken house on an evening as good as this. The fox shook himself, dander catching the light as it rose from his fur. He had a job to do. He was to find a chicken house and get his next meal. His stomach was near to rumbling after all and in just a minute... c**k-a-doodle-doo!An itinerant rooster called and soon set off a couple other roosters on nearby farms. The fox's ears twitched picking up on the one closest to him. Yes, just along this ridge and to the left... He set off, jogging lightly, thoughts pushed to a small corner of his mind as he set about getting dinner. Ducking under a blackberry bush, he wriggled into the farmyard where the chicken house was. They were squawking and clucking; a chaotic scene with hens stalking forwards and backwards, here and there with no organisation. The fox snatched forward from behind the well, scaring most of them away but nabbing a particularly clueless hen by the neck before scampering back under the blackberry hedge. "Oh Lord, I thank thee for my supper" The fox cast his eyes towards the rising moon, dead chicken in his jaws and decided that maybe it didn't weight too heavily on his conscience.
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Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 5:22 am
HA! Completed in about five seconds under fifteen minutes. Not the best of stories and it got a bit iffy at the chickenhouse, but I like the ending. And the bit about the setting.
Okay, next prompt for the taking will be...
"I have a lovely bunch of pomegranates"
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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 10:40 am
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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 10:55 am
As the sun sets in the western sky, two figures can be seen lazing about in the warm weather. For all appearances, they seem to be content and enjoying the last rays of the day; however, a closer look reveals a different story.
The two have been marooned on a deserted island with only the clothes on their backs, a knife, and whatever they happen to have in their pockets. They need to find fresh water quickly or they may become dehydrated. However, at this time, they are more interested in resting after having swam quite a distance from the wreckage.
"We should find water," a young woman speaks thoughtfully. She turns onto her side to look at her companion, her boyfriend. So far, she knows they are the only survivors from the ship. Hopefully, there are more people. She hates to think of what might happen to them, the poor souls.
"Nnnngh, too tired," the male whines. He doesn't feel like moving at all. Instead, he continues to lie there as if he has all the time in the world. He doesn't seem to be taking their current situation seriously.
The woman sits up, glaring at him the entire time. "You lazy bum, how do you think we'll survive? Water doesn't come on trees, you know."
He merely gives her a lazy grin. "But it does fall from the sky."
"Yeah, but I don't see a single cloud in sight, and we'll need containers to catch them." She has to be the realistic one if they want to survive.
"Fine," he reluctantly agrees, sitting up and then standing. He really loves his girlfriend, but she can be too stiff for her own good. She really needs to loosen up. "First thing we find something to carry the water in." When he receives a blank look, he explains, "When we find it, how are we going to carry it?"
"Oh." So her boyfriend can actually think for a change. On second thought, he can think. He just doesn't want to at times. They're the complete opposites, but they say opposites attract. "We'll split up and meet back here when we can't see."
"But what about the wildlife?" he protests. He knows she can defend herself, but that doesn't mean he won't worry.
"That's why I'm going to remain close, and I can take care of myself," she huffs and storms off in a different direction, her skirt fluttering in the breeze.
An hour later, she manages to find something to hold the water and an actual source of water. All she needs to do now is wait for her boyfriend to appear. She begins to worry when she doesn't see any sign of him, and visibility has diminished. What if something has gotten to him? What if he's hurt and dying? Just as her thoughts continue to spiral down, she hears a rustling from the bushes. She tenses but relaxes when she sees her boyfriend emerging from them, holding pomegranates?
"I have a lovely bunch of pomegrantes for dinner."
"..." She feels the need to smack herself or him, preferably him. "Have you forgotten? I'm allergic to them."
"Oh," he says sheepishly as he makes his way over to her. "Sorry." He takes a seat next to her, placing his stash nearby. "Well, that means more for me." His green eyes hold uncontained amusement.
"Jerk!" she yells in mock anger and pushes him off the log.
Maybe this isn't so bad.
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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 10:58 am
That was a challenge. I had been interrupted towards the end, which explains the crappy ending. As I was into the story, I was interrupted, and it's hard to get back into the swing of writing especially in a time crunch.
Next prompt is female-female relationship.
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Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 12:42 pm
Accepted. I'll start in three minutes, at 20:45.
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Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 12:59 pm
The chair is cold and hard, digging into my spine and upper thighs. A screaming child has been placed beside me, snot running down its crumpled and red face, smearing the dirt and grime into a monochrome hell on its cheeks. An excruciatingly loud wail makes the hairs on the back of my neck tingle and prickle.
The air is cool and neutral, the hum of the airport like a thousand bees in my poor, ringing ears. I'm so glad I'm not a mother. With a small sigh I pick up my hand bag, made from different coloured spandex found in the bottom of my cupboard and sewn together with white thread and head over to the small Starbucks in the corner. It's the third time I've been there today, and the woman behind the counter flashes me a rueful grin. I force my muscles into the appropriate responce and ask for another expresso to go.
As I reach for my coffee, she pats my hand and smiles.
"I'm sure who ever you're waiting for is just fine. Planes are late all the time."
I smile and nod, but my mind is whirring. It's not the actuall plane that's late. I sip the burning liquid, glad for something to ocupy my hands with and sigh, scanning and re-scanning the arrivals and departments board. I can't concentrate on the long strings of letters and numbers.
I reach for my cell phone, trendy yet useless now and flip up the lid, speed dialing and pressing it to my ear. The all too familiar beep beep beep of a turned off phone at the other end greets me. I resist the temptation to scream like the child.
Another woman in a gaudy red dress swans by, man hanging off her arm like a scarf. Everyone's so weak or glittery now. I can't help but think that something needs to change in the world. Like mobiles never being off. My hand is running through my black hair again, tugging at minute knots at the nape of my neck, fingers brushing strands off my shoulders.
They brush a small bruise on my collar bone and the flash of pain makes me smile. That bruise has been there for two weeks now. Two weeks since I was last sitting here, but waving off a plane instead of waiting for one.
A loud beep tells me another flight from Japan is back, and I leap to my feet and hurry over to the terminal. Once there, my feet and fingers being to dance with worry and tention, making the man next to me scowl. Three teens with signs in badly written english are waiting for their guests. After a few minutes, people with small amounts of luggage begin to trickle out, followed by a flow of people with trollys and more screaming children at their heels. Then come the old and sick, disabled and those in no hurry. I'm the only one left waiting.
Tears sting my eyes as the stupid pattern of the floor swings in and out of focus, colours dancing sharply infront of me. I really don't want to cry infront of everyone, but I fear I will until a hand is placed on my shoulder.
"Hey, you. What's up, doc?"
My head snaps up and relief, anger and happiness crash through me as I launch myself into surprised arms.
"You're here!"
"Of course I am, silly. I just missed a flight, that's all. Don't cry, it's nothing that big!"
I sniff, agree and grab her hand, pressing a quick, tearful kiss against her lips.
"Don't ever make me wait again."
She chuckles.
"Got'cha."
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Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 1:02 pm
Phew-ee!
Finished at 20:59:57 biggrin
How awesome biggrin .
Next prompt:
A clown at a funeral.
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Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 10:09 am
Accepted. Starting at 10:10.
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